THE ORACLE of ASGARD

I have seen the face,
The face, that looks as old as the Great Oak,
And eyes, youthful, as wise as the world,
Steady, in watery sockets float.
Ruddy lips, a chalk white complection stained,
Creases where tears,
Tears of thousands of years, have drained.
Ears, that hear the heartbeat of the earth, as she breaths,
Ancient clay smoking pipe clenched between his teeth.
A huge shock of flowing white hair, his crown,
Atop a world weary and worried frown.
As he stares into the flames,
Watches, see’s the past history of our foolish games,
The Oracle of Asgard,
The keystone, or card, to this rickety house,
Who searches our souls and dreams as stealthy as a mouse,
Leaves no footprint nor sound,
No echo of footsteps in the silence pound,
No trace,
But for a momentary, ghostly, smoky, apparition of his face,
Aye lad, once seen never forgot,
Be ye grateful that three score years and ten is your lot,
That you don’t carry the weight of the world upon your shoulders,
Nor watch in the flames as mankind in his folly smoulders,
Or feel the pain,
Of the failure of war, again and again,
Looking forward to the day when he too can pass,
The day when man is at peace, with the world and himself…..
At last!
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Posted: Jul 2011
About this poem:
just wondering....Andrew....xxx

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Odette67
This is an excellent poem Andrew.thumbs up

Of the superhumanly powerful humanoid beings who were once worshipped by the ancient Norse and German tribes of Western and Northern Europee.
elo777
great write andrew. I do believe that against all odds, all the crazy mixed up things we see in this world. that this day will come. I believe it is as inevitable as gravity.
andrew149
Thankyou very much Odette, In all truth though I cannot tell you where the inspiration for this one came from, very pleased you enjoyed it.....Andrew...xxxcool
Redex
andrew this was wonderful, answeres no not from me, I just walk a careful path. Your lines (That you dont carry the wieght of the world on your shoulders etc)are very insightful. Loved it.hug teddybear
pilgrimageoflove
Andrew...
I usualy have favourite "lines" in poems.
Every word in this poem is my favourite.
Great poetry.
andrew149
Thankyou elo, I really believe it myself too, truly! Very pleased you enjoyed it....Andrewcool
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
The day when man is at peace, with the world and himself….. We await with you!
country_lady67
I can't imagine what it would have been like to live in ancients times .. .. your descriptions have me seeing them in my minds eye..Creases where tears,
Tears of thousands of years, have drained.""

he face, that looks as old as the Great Oak,...Wise eyes..
This I think is my favorite~~
Ears, that hear the heartbeat of the earth, as she breaths,

I really like this poem.. Andrew..
bouquet teddybear CL
andrew149
Thankyou very much Redex, I am very pleased you enjoyed it my friend......Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou for your kind words Pilgrim, I am pleased you liked it.....Andrew...cool
marikia
This is an awesome write, for children to learn from their modern poetry reading book. Thank you, Andrew, such an amazing talent you have! bouquet
agoodguy2have
Andrew, i wonder if man has within, the ability to be at peace with himself at last. As usual, an engaging write of mythic visions. ;-)
andrew149
Thankyou gnj4u, It is good to have company.....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou CL, lol...I try to imagine what it was like, I like doing that, thankyou for your kind words in comment, very pleased you liked it....Andrew..xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou for the very nice compliment Marikia, I am very pleased you enjoyed it.....Andrew...xxxcool
Fellsman
A fine write Andrew, even your medieval spelling of the word 'complexion' lends an air of authenticity to this very readable narrative.

Regards

Bill wine
andrew149
I hope so GG, I truly do, thankyou very much, pleased you liked it!
Andrew...cool
hedistuff
I can see him! you paint a fine, fine picture Andrew. a wonderful tale...hmm, wonder what the oracle of asgard opts to puff on in his clay pipe? would anyone have an extra copy of the Pen-ts'ao Ching or is anyone here a descendant of the Bylony culture of Central Europe?
andrew149
Thankyou very much Bill, You must have been looking over my shoulder, lol, I actually looked up that word....truly I did...well done mate...Andrewcool
andrew149
Thankyou very much Hedi, I am very pleased you got the picture and enjoyed it.....funny thing, I did think about him chewing a coca leaf or something rather than having a pipe....but then thought against it..lol...Andrew...cool
andrew149
Thanks country lady...Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou very much Marikia, for your kind words and for liking this poem....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Just thought I would bring this one up....hope you don't mind....Hope you are all fine....Kindest regards, Andrew...xxxcool
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