Bug splatter can not see cause of the brain and bladder sun's rays making it a haze wipper washers having a blast broken wings crushed dreams for I can not see the sun is blinding me I loose my lane now I join the bug splatter now my brain and bladder being washed away
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 5, 2011
enjoyed this
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAAug 5, 2011
A most unfortunate turn of events kick.. Even though your splatterness is still warm in the grave...Can I have your truck?
_CRUSHCRAFT_Bonham, Texas USAAug 5, 2011
~SPLAT~
Some daze your the Bug,other daze your the windshield...either way your gonna git it
niah9Auckland, New ZealandAug 5, 2011
I think you need to take more care when you buy shades.....different again...I'll give you that..... niah
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaAug 6, 2011
Hi Kickit,
Can I say this is inimitable Kickit. Such an original concept for a poem. Well done!
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAAug 6, 2011
Well done, Kickit. Reminds me of the joke, what was the last thing to go through a bugs mind before he hit the windshield?? Do you know that one? It's funny. I enjoyed your poem.
Hi, kickit, broken wings crushed dreams... Sometimes, it's just one of those days with sun's rays making it a haze! Brings back memories of summer in the south!
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now I join the bug splatter
now my brain and bladder
being washed away
Love this kickit, could just picture you trying to see
country lady
Mike
and odette
Kickit
Some daze your the Bug,other daze your the windshield...either way your gonna git it
niah
Can I say this is inimitable Kickit. Such an original concept for a poem. Well done!
broken wings crushed dreams... Sometimes, it's just one of those days with sun's rays making it a haze! Brings back memories of summer in the south!