love in the countryside

here we are...once again beside the fire
bitter wind whistling from outside through the eaves
an acoustic tune piping low envelops
gently cradling us in our rockers sway
snug in our old jeans and flannel shirts
I tamp my pipe as you border a blanket
oil lamps way down glimmer
outside..snow covered fields stark and naked
winter is such a damnable alien land
safe inside our shelter
we hold one another in our eyes
and in our gentle nature
later we'll cling to one another
unclothed 'neath crisp quilts
our bodies warming
but for now, in evenings glow
we breathe...and we smile
our bodies several feet apart
our hearts...
joined eternal!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2010

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QuietStormF
Very nice poem.. and so descriptive I can actually feel the cold wind, although one look outside tells me that Spring is here.. applause hug teddybear
agoodguy2have
hedi...your descriptive winter allows for warmth of love... definitely one of your best!
jazzy75
hedistuff - beautiful poem and sentiment...very niceteddybear
Pinkpoetress
hedistuff,
Lovely poem. I could almost feel the cold. Very romantic too.
boyshchrm6
Nice cozy feelings enveloped
in a winte chill...like the contrast
Excellent! cool thumbs up
lifesajoy
The freezing air outside brought this poem to mind. I finally found it. Let's snuggle!
hedistuff
snuggle we shall my dear, snuggle we shall. at years end, I often bring back up one or two of my past writes to share. the anniversary of our daughter's death is another time, where I share a write about her. merry christmas everyone...
gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff,
our hearts… joined eternal! What a lovely image of love in the countryside. Thanks for sharing.
darkhorse555
putting a few turf on the fire myself rally beautiful romantic piece happy christmas to you and your familydancingsanta santa waving
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