When..........

Underground lair,
Noisy, acrid, smoke laden air,
Drunken barflies hovering,
Waitresses bothering,
Then she walks on,
Positions a stool to sit upon,
Puts a half burned cigarette, up the neck end through the strings,
While some much worse for wear, stare from the wings,
Then, a blanket of silence over the whole place she lays,
As the first chord she plays.
Legs crossed...My feet on the table, hat tilted over my eyes just so,
Telling folk I don't want company....They know,
Sipping the perfect iced gin,
It's always like this, when Cassy plays the mandolin.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
Ahhhhhh.........Heaven!........lol......Andrew......xxx

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gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
I love the image of the Drunken barflies hovering before the blanket of silence. Thanks for sharing.
andrew149
Thank you, very pleased you enjoyed it, just having a relaxing time in my imagination......Andrew......xxx
caroljoyce
Brilliant piece, great rhythm.
andrew149
Thank you Caroljoyce, I am pleased that you enjoyed it........Andrew.....xxxcool
amahlala
Nice Andrew.....hug
hedistuff
good one...
andrew149
Thankyou very much Ama......'bout time we had some more of yours on here......Andrew.......xxx
jazzy75
Andrew...vivid descriptions...i was transported....thank youwine
andrew149
Yep Rob, seems so......Take care my friend, talk soon......Andrew.
andrew149
Thanks Hedi, I enjoyed writing this one a lot......Andrew.
andrew149
Thank you Jaz, glad you like it my friend.......Andrew....xxx
Ladybee42
does cassy know?...laugh
thumbs up bouquet bouquet
andrew149
Thank you Ladybee......Now that would be telling.....LOLconversing
jeddah12
enjoy the music and drinks sir,,splendid write always,,cheers wine
keesy45
Puts a half burned cigarette, up the neck and through the strings...

Very live image..like the whole poem.bouquet
andrew149
thankyou Jeddah, very pleased you liked it.....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou....Pleased you liked the whole thing....Andrew...xxxcool
Billiegirl
Genius, nice to be in your presence.bouquet
andrew149
Thankyou BG....dunno about genius...lol....pleased you enjoyed it though...Andrew...xxxcool
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