picture show (usurping goodguys' mind)

as peepers watch they share the love
with each new word unfurled
sweet tidings raining from above
before the gazing world

but do I pry, should I spy
on other hearts' words rendered?
that is to say, am I in the way?
for not to me, are they tendered

tasty pinch of another's soul
furtive peek into their room
lips moist, eavesdroppingly patrol
the joy others share, or gloom

ever the case, tis hard to erase
the pictures framed in my mind
but they little care, do the unaware
in search of their love, to find
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2010

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Comments (6)

paloma66
Wow! nice one Hedi, nobody can seize Gg's mind,he's a strong guy.Its nice having variety.View it as a slide show.Thank you dear for sharing & caring.hug bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff,
Yes, while remembering that all writes are not autobiographical, it is a delicate honor to be entrusted with another's joys and sorrows, these sweet tidings raining from above. Thanks for sharing this well-versed usurping.
agoodguy2have
i can't even spell usurping...this gem is all yer own Hedi ;-)
Pinkpoetress
Hedi,
You did great on this one my friend. I enjoyed very much.
Redex
Oh I do enjoy the camaraderie on here nice chuckle enjoyed the verselaugh
caroljoyce
Ghoulishly glamorous write. Even I would not dare take a pinch from someone's unsuspecting soul in the daylight hours, when I am still in my coffin. You are indeed as fair as an English summer's day and three times more random.angel
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