The island of you

I could land upon your shore
pull my dingy up, cast on, and moor
no man is an island
upon you, life of the sea

Your gritty bottom grinds
me slowly down, as I drag
my rope taut, myself landed
to your paradise sandy shores

I'm an old man fishing
trying to catch the big one, alone
Hemingway's nowhere to be found
just you, me, and the sea

You rise above my horizon
alone I point myself to you
to find my own redemption
your abundant island renewed

Cast off my fears of failure
upon your rocks shard sharp
I hope to live a life of peace
your custodian in your care

No man is an island
not meant to live alone
the bosom of your earth
can save this heart I own

© agoodguy2have 2010-07-25
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
changed final line from "stone" after several redactions.

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hedistuff
yes..the sea...the sand...waves crashing to land...grand redeemer....island of the day before..island of tomorrow
tomboygirl
Nicely written agoodguy,thanks for the share.teddybear
trurorob
good write Dave
rob
BoyseeksGirl
Wow my friend that was really good,I read you loud and clear frustrated I think.Aww mate it is a good read thanks no matter my interpretation handshake

Ken
tinypixie
Lovely gg....teddybear
MonaLisaSmile4U
applauseA Beautiful Piece, agoodguy . . . and I say . . Sometimes that island has a wonderful Lighthouse to guide your lonely vessel Safely to the shore of True Love!teddybearThank you a Truly Wonderful Read!angel
maymyo
Nice one Goodguy, but I don't really believe you have a heart of stone. Maymyo: purple heart
sophiasummer
I hope to live a life of peace

Such wonderful words..

teddybear
SS
caroljoyce
Really floats my boat.
Chivalry_101
this is awesome really inspiring and so true
Earlgreytea
Fantastic Goodguy, this one is a real gem, thanks for sharing! Don't want to spoil it, I just loved it...
freeatlast64847
Very nice goodguy! Great symbolism. applause
cambuff
YThanks for sharing. Very good.
amahlala
I love this one GG~the sea can exert such a powerful pull...bouquet
gardenhackle
GG2H does it again. You're a hard act to follow even for yourself, LOL! And yet you do it so well. cheers
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