The Best Day In A Childs Life

I sat down beside him.

"I like cheese on toast, wiv peanut butter on top, and jam,
But...Sardines and tomatoes... That's my fav'rit",
Pulling a face now,Shaking his head,
"Don't like ham".

I smiled.

A four year old boy,
sat in a rubbish strewn yard, rats running around,
Playing with an old wooden toy.
He had dirt engrained hands and face,
Short trousers, scuffed and bleeding knees.
"I falled over, it's only a scratch",
I dabbed at them with my handkerchief.
Tough little blighter,
Knew better than to ask for anything at all with a "Please",

"You're a copper aint'cha...?"
"I can tell.... Mom'll be back soon. She'll give you 'ell".
No I thought, she won't,
She's gone to prison for a long time...Right now, she’s sat in a cell.

I took a deep breath.

"Come with me", I said,
"I'll take you away from here,
I know where you can get,
The greatest sardines and tomatoes you ever saw,
On best bread".

His face lit up.

Not looking back, we picked our way to the broken down gate.
I held his hand tight, to the waiting car I led.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Thought I would like to re-post this old one of mine from "dreamweaver",
hope you like it.......Andrew.......xxx

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Comments (10)

amahlala
I like it...still it makes me teary-eyed, mad, concerned and well...jumbly of emotions...good read Andrew.bouquet
Redex
One of my favorites out of dreamweaver,(last line)????? teddybear
Ladybee42
so human and so sad, wouldn't you just wonder at the way things are sometimes? thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
What a world painted with dirt engrained hands and face and the kindness of strangers.
agoodguy2have
Andrew, what a great write 'bout the little blighter. Bet 'e really chomped 'em sardines rite down eh? ;-)
jeddah12
crying handshake this one is very touching,my weakness are children it again im teary eyed while readingcrying god bless you manteddybear bouquet
Disadvantage
EXCELLENT!
Redex
Still draws my breath, good one Andrew stands the test of timeteddybear
Earlgreytea
from a master story teller, great yarn and captivating...
andrew149
Thankyou dear Ama, do you know this is one of the first poems I posted here, about 2 and a half years ago...lol, time has really flown, this is a re-post of course....Andrew...xxxcool
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