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Datguy420

Every choice you make your destiny frfr

I woke up for school 11/9/1995 and thought I don’t wanna go. I don’t feel good mom,my stomach hurts.You can make it its only a half day she blurts. So it’s off to school, riding the bus putting gum in the drivers hair, got caught told her I don’t care. Finally pull up to school get off the bus acting a fool told carol she missed some gum yaaaaa haaaaa haaa who. Get into class and I be darn it did go fast.. back on da bus carol missing some of her hair and guess what I still didn’t care. I was a mean little kid regret the things I did. Got off the top of the hill walked home looking forward to get some pop and chill. Smoking my cig I see my grandma in the station wagon,little did I know she was there to save me and bro from the fate we now know. Dip thru the woods the back way to my house. Finally here. Expecting to see my mom at the table as usual but she’s not there. All doors locked and country music sounds . I jingled the lock,I’m in now. Turn that country music off.Turn on the toons.Get me a piece of cake and my dew.Figured mom and dad must be taking a nap in their room??! No more than 5-10 min go by and knock knock knock at the door it’s my little bro. I let him in. Off to pee he goes,then asks why mom and dad sleep on the floor? I get up to round the corner Mom face up my dad down. Blood all around. I will never forget that smell, Oil and metal. My mind races what to do I know they are gone 911 for people that are hurt dude, so I call my grandma.. tell her mom and dad dead on the floor. I sit my brother down, tell him I’m here forevermore . I knew they was gone but didn’t comprehend, it too was our end. All we knew gone in a blink. Dad did not think, shot my mom but thought to spare us the sight.Sent grandma to get bro and me, little did he know he gave her the wrong time and location though. I was a badass had to smoke. Saw grandma and dipped away before she knew, I was smoking to be cool. We wouldn’t have saw what we did.I feel to blame. I now know it was my dad who has caused the pain. Took my mom from us. Hurts to think I was just a car ride away from a different reality. Now it seems I have only the bad memory. My flashbacks come with smell.Having ptsd is a living hell.
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Posted: Apr 2023
About this poem:
Worst day of my life pretty much my thoughts that day I told my bro I would be there for him always and I have up until few months ago clothed and fed him after I got outta foster care I took him in got custody of him. We just need to think our choices through sometimes something’s there to be there and you miss it I was a kid I just thought my grandma left our house or something and I wanted to smoke.. if I never smoked maybe I would not have saw what I did my bro too it he doesn’t remember luckily. If I get enough likes I may write one about my time as a state ward of Michigan nightmare that truly didn’t end till I was 31 you would think it would have ended at 17 but nope state only gave me 2 pieces of identification I needed 3 and one of ‘em they would not accept so I had no way to prove who I was I contacted state they said they gave me everything they had so I was just stuck no way prove who I was till I got pulled over in my car I bought then they give me one to suspend it ha I then made the choice to drive more and more and gave up trying to prove I am me to sec of state f*ck Michigan man I went through hell because of law changes on terrorism and lazy workers in and outta jail dwls fines repos made me feel like a criminal so I became one for awhile sold dope weed acid pills lied stole I was a bad dude all because the state didn’t give ‘em enough ids joke man luckily I had cash paid for apartment for 6 mo no identification needed Benjamin Franklin vouched for me ??
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Unknown

MY POEM ABOUT AN EGG

humpty dumpty sat on a wall
humpty dumpty had a great fall
all the kings horses
and all the kings men
couldnt put humpty together again



I WILL BE HAVING A BOOK SIGNING AT THE NEXT MEET THANK YOU VERY MUCH
HAHA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Oct 2009
About this poem:
ITS BOUT AN EGG ITS A TRUE STORY
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Unknown

Keep it simple

Silver stars shine .
The moon has blossmed
Magical Wisdom
Nights air is still
gives light and clairity
Peaceful warrior
Fairy queen passoniate dreamer
Born to awaken inner child has spoken
Will live to give and fight to live
Feelings of a kid ,The right to speak your mind
Keep it simple .
Love & Light
Nancy
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Posted: Nov 2009
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Katfight

Always Smiling

I pirhouette on my coiled spring
Looking after pretty things
My face a beautiful, painted smile
Dancing, smiling for my happy child
No need to rush, no destination
Not held back by any reservations
I smile, dance and sing a little tune
Hands in the air as if touching the moon
She smiles when she hears me sing
For I look after her beloved rings
I merrilly dance in a pretty pink frock
I am the ballerina in a child's jewellery box
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
Thought I'd try to write something different and happy.
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pinksdejavu

The Babe

Church bells were ringing.
Birds flew by singing.
The sun was bright.
Long had been the night.
A celebration of life.
All was perfectly right.


The precious babe was carried in.
To the place where one is forgiven.
Parents aglow following what they know.
Baptism of a new life was the show.


Mother and Father stood up proud.
And the newborn cried aloud.
Joy was the sound of the crowd.
As they lovingly gathered around.

The babe made happiness for one and all.
Many took time to hold the babe and sit.
What a Blessing to be baptized by the Father,
Son and Holy Spirit.
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Posted: Feb 2016
About this poem:
Up thinking and this came to me. Hope you like. Take care, Pink.
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jarred1

I lurk in the shadows that tell me I am.

Cuz beauty is something so rarely heard

I truly am, I am I lurk in the shadows that tell me I am.
Embedded image from another site
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Posted: Mar 2016
About this poem:
I lurk in the shadows that tell me I am.
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Unknown

Exciting Good Morning happy new year for Sweetheart

happy new year my friend..
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Posted: Dec 2016
About this poem:
I wish I could always be with you.
Wrapping my arms around you
I constantly think about you.
I miss you and I love you!
Good Morning my Sweetheart
You are my life,
You are my everything
A day without you
Is like a day without sunshine
I love you! Good Morning
You are one special girl
You can take my breath away
With you, I can look forward to tomorrow
I forget all the sadness and sorrow.
I love you, dear. Good Morning
A morning text does not simply mean,
“Good morning.”
Rather, it comes with the silent loving
message,
“I think of you when I wake up.”
Good Morning my dear.
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EarthsSon

THE CAT LIED

THE CAT DID NOT SIT ON THE MAT,

INFACT THE MAT THE FAT CAT SAT ON

WAS INFACT A RAT AS FLAT AS A TACK.

“OHHH”, SPAT THE FAT CAT TO A BAT WHO WAS HANGING ON A RACK,

“WHAT’S THAT, WHAT’S THAT” SHREIKED THE BAT TO THE FAT CAT,

“THE MAT …. THE MAT” SPAT THE CAT

“IT’S A DEAD RAT, A FLAT FAT RAT AT THAT”.

SPAT…. SPAT…. THE CAT.

“IS THAT A FACT, IMAGINE THAT” SAID THE BAT

TO THE FAT CAT AS HE LEFT HIS RACK TO INSPECT THE MAT MADE OUT OF RAT.

PAT PAT DID THE BAT TO THE MAT MADE OUT OF RAT, A BIG FAT RAT AT THAT.

THEN FLEW BACK TO HIS RACK,

HAVING A CACK , AT THE CAT WHO WAS STILL HAVING A HEART

ATTACK OVER THE FAT MAT MADE OUT OF RAT

SPAT …. SPAT …. WENT THE CAT

CACK …. CACK …. WENT THE BAT.
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
YES, I even like to write kiddies poems. Try saying this after a few bourbans.
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EyeLook4U

Fast Away

Fast away when time was gold
When daybreak a new story to be told
When life was pure and my mind was clear
And thses words had I not heard anyone say

But now say I
And almost cry
Fast Away

Fast away when steps I took
When tomorrow came as a story from a treasure book
When years make it known how time would appear
And these words had I not heard anyone say

But now say I
And almost cry
Fast away
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Posted: Dec 2014
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surprizeme

Reading as a Child

Reading as a Child


Where can I find quiet?

My thoughts scatter at sounds

knocking, knock-knocking.

Inside the panelled cave dwells parents’ silent attire.

I enter and turn, facing out.

Calm cottons, serene silks, peaceful polyesters

drape behind me like ghosts from the past.

I roll the hollow door shut, pressing in the peace.

As I lower myself to sit,

I fall through layers of shoe funk

hovering two feet thick.

Unfortunately, the quiet awakens Tinnitus,

who is usually hidden laced within the racket.

Finally secure, I concentrate my quilted mind under a dim bulb

and over words barely reflecting into peepholes.

Comprehension is vital

dad wears out his tongue,

as Mom sits hooked,

weaving twisted worries

that I pattern.
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
“The greatest tragedy of the family is the unlived lives of the parents.”
- C.G. Jung
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