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The Mind And Body ch1 : The free spirit.

Spirit flying free so far from the ground,
My body amidst the wreckage as caged in and around,
Admiration of others gained through the trial and tribulations ,
But my spirit adrift so far from it's station,
Drifted so far but wisdom that sought,
A tactical mind will never stay caught,
An alliance I need with one of great strength,
The one will guide through hell and great lengths,
To be my hope in this absence of right,
And be my moon in the absence of light,
Light the fires within to strengthen our resolve,
Any glimpse of doubt begins to dissolve,
No question of loyalty no fear or dismay,
The spark to my flame let's me free from this,
guarding my body as I fall from great heights,
Returning my spirit back into the the light,
Awakening now my heart filled with rage,
Then my guardian came to my cage,
opened the door freeing my mind,
We make our stand their a team for all time
Like yin and yang two become one,
This grasp of from which we run,
Temptations allure catches the eye,
Of my brave guardian from this devilish bride,
But my resolves stays strong I prepare for a fight,
But not with my guardian as it would seem,
But the rot of black sin that has takin him from me........... to be continued
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
I have been writing stories for a long time but this the first one I've ever done done in poetry it will be covering a lot of dark subject in a manner of metaphorical exaggeration. I hope you enjoy and If you do get some inspiration from this feel free to use what you want I have never tried to claim fame from my works but I also have never try to take from anyone.
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Unknown

The Mind And Body ch2: the Lady Black

What now go on here were may I be,
What feeling of lust has come over me,
My body and mind was given to one,
The yang to My yin has become undone,
This spell the rapture of know exquisite sin greater,
How could I the guardian be come the great traitor,
Deceived by this mind altering spell,
gravity of the state that I'm in,
Driving My mind into chaos again,
It's embraces caries me through the darkest of haze,
The torment of burden like being up for ten day,
The feelings I feel and images I see,
Longing for The one the I once set free,
The memories of two are ripped from my soul,
As know I'm alone trap in this black hole,
Strength from with in give me all of your might,
My strength from without has failed me tonight,
aimlessly striving without much success,
The power depleted I've become powerless,
Trapped in a whole surrounded by black,
I need bright light to see my way back,
I need a hint a glimmer of hope,
Panic sets In can't manage to cope,
I need this to end I will find out how,
To regain my willpower and put on and wear a new crown,
I must remember that man that I once was,
Regain my power and rise above,
the shroud of evil that has consumed my soul,
And fight darkness that has to regain my control,
Days trickle buy at the speed hot wax,
My insides burn like a newly forged ax,
This stretching turmoil has only two cures,
give into temptation and keep himself pure,
On that final coarse of his day when suddenly,
The sickness and pain brings him to his knees,
The battle inside has reached its peak,
The survivor of this cannot be timid or weak,
So strongly now the crave of her touch,
Even knowing when he has had to much,
When out of the dark a shall appears,
A sliver of hope a familiar voice draws near,
As the black fades this figure illuminates,
Lighting the darkness a sense of hope it creates,
As the voice called gather your strength,
The light grows brightest closing the length,
It's her the fire in his heart grows at last,
This women he treasured in his recent past,
The free spirit who taught him to fly,
Now because of him she is ready to die,
Must break free of these shackles of black,
And gather his power in in one quick attack,
Give what he can but it was never this tuff,
But he never gives in and enough is enough,
Screaming in pain he tears at his binds,
The pain echoes throughout till her ear it finds,
And then quickly to us aid she tears at the binds,
As they struggle to regain,
that moment they lost all in vain,
But as they focus on him the trap is on her,
Caught up in the moment the tables have turned,
No the Lady in black has what she needs,
When at her worst he tells her to breath,
Remember who she is and never forget,
The spirit within you must focus on again,
I'll will be your strength I'll give you hope I'll be your guardian,
......to be continued
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
This is the second part to the poem. And the struggles within are not light hearted and to those who have over come them be proud of what you have done and hold not regret for the past but hope for the future.
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Unknown

The Mind And Body ch3: two sides of the same coin

Ch3 part 1
Voice whisper in the darkest of hours
Taking there time leaving feelings so sour,
Plotting and planning no knowing she hears it ,
Planning a way to break the free spirit,
Steps grow closer the floor a sharp crackle,
Trying to move the free spirit is shackled,
Tied down pinned down upon an altar of black,
Starring at the ceiling also crumbled and cracked,
Not sure it's be is upside down or down side right,
Or Left side down the thought brought her much fright,
feeling the glow leave from her crown,
The perfect hem stone torn from her gown,
Then the Lady of black speaks in much reverence,
Let not take pride or wealth but take the innocence,
A sharp pain then felt in her side,
The feelings of euphoria began to subside,
A feeling of horror plague her minds gate,
It's the horrible feeling of not knowing her fate,
Two sets of strong hands the voices from before,
Grasp tightly each arm and pick her from the floor,
Now remove this vail I have cast upon open eyes,
Oh mystic black arts of the wicked and wise,
Look upon me now and see as you will,
a reflection of a future that time will soon fill,
And as it was its so shall be be,
The image before her she could not believe,
It was her doing. in jealousy and wrath,
Who put her down this evil path,
To late now to atone for to much,
You cannot see or smell
nor run talk or touch,
Why and how run thru her mind,
Tell me what brings us her to this mirage of rewind,
One you were the one who shone brighter then the rest,
The brilliance of you light was seen all evil at best,
They committed there time to turning you black,
Saw a sliver of me through the temporal crack,
brought me forth through means they knew nothing of,
And finally had there all black dove,
But I knew that more than one cannot survive,
on any plane of existence two of the same soul won't thrive,
As I began to fade I agreed to turn you black in shame
In return my return to the plane whence I came,
Kidnapping him caging you were merely chores,
Falling victim to my power because it was yours,
Did you think it odd that he came so easy,
His bowing to me obeying my orders it makes you queasy.
And when he save you again it will be me this time,
You forced to watch as I commit this crime,
But enough of this now give her more,
Two more needles full of this darkness began to bore,
Deep in her skin her veins turn black as night,
The feeling of more become her new blight,
The lady in black leaves saying this,
Keep her mind active her body choose what you wish, to be continued......
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
Chap 3 of my fable as it where is about personalities and the existence of infinite possibilities enjoy and comment tell me what you think
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ali110online today!

she Was My Life

She was Dawn
Sunrise was his heart
Her love was morning, the beginning

She was Noon
Midday was hes radiant face
Hes embrace was the pinnacle of my day, all days

She was Dusk
Sunset was hes serenade
Hes bittersweet kiss was twilight, the ending

Now she is Night
Midnight was hes soft goodbye
The pale moon reaches its zenith, in the nothing of my heart.
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
thinking of you
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Unknown

CONSTANCE

AT FIRST SIGHT I NOTICED THAT IN HER EYES -SHE HAS A LIGHT THAT HAS SEEN MORE THAN HER SHARE OF LIES - SHE IS SUBTLE & SWEET BUT WILL NOT SETTLE FOR A BACK SEAT FOR HER HEART FELT NEEDS ARE TO BE KEPT QUIET & NEAT - SHE QUIETLY BRINGS ONE TO THEY*RE KNEES & IS SHOCKED THAT HERE IS ONE WHO IS AIMED TO PLEASE - APPROPRIATE HESITATION SHE PONDERS HOW COULD THIS ONE BE SOO "CREED" TO WANT TO BE WITH HER TO LOVE & PLEASE HER & TRUELY NEED HER & JUST WANT HER FOR "WHO" SHE REALLY "IS" - IN THE LIGHT OF THIS RATHER SILENT LOVER HIS CREED IS JUST TO LOVE HER & TO SATISFY HER EVERY WIM & NEED - LIFE IS FULL OF MIS-FORTUNE & YET THERE IS FORTUNE IN LOVEING SOMEONE TO THE POINT OF BEING FREE - SO I SAY TO YOU "CONSTANCE" WITHOUT ANY DECIET -MY LOVE LOVE FOR YOU IS BEYOND ANYTHING I*VE EVER BEFORE PERCIEVED & IF I COULD HAVE ONE MORE WISH -IT WOULD BE TO BECOME SOMEONE ELSE TO COME IN LIKE AN ANGEL & GIVE WINGS TO FLY WITH ME & LEAVE THIS WORLD OF MISERY & TAKE YOU SOMEWHERE THAT "OTHERS" WONT MESS WITH OUR WANTS OR UNDYING NEEDS - JUST WANTED OUR LOVE TO BE FREE WITHOUT PRECONDITIONING -I*M SORRY -BUT I JUST WANTED IT TO BE YOU & ME WITH NO ONE ELSE SETTING US UP TO IN THE END -BE DECIEVED - I LOVE YOU CONSTANCE THELEMICKALY Z-93
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Posted: Aug 2016
About this poem:
MY LIFE IS TOO PHUCKED IN THIS WORLD OF COWARDLY DECIET TO THE POINT OF NO-END OF THIS DISCUSTING BULLSHIT WERE OTHER PEOPLE ARE JEALOUS OF THE TRUE HEART THAT HAS DONE NOTHING IN LIFE EXCEPT HELP OUT - SO YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE I*M CALLING YOU OUT - TO ONCE IN FOR ALL STRAIGHTN YOU PHUCKN FAGGOTS OUT & PHUCK YOU - I WON THIS 39 YEARS AGO - WHAT - ? YOU DID*NT GET THE "MEMMO" !!!!!!!!!!!!! I*M SORRY "CONSTANCE"
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Yankee4youonline today!

Old Cat In The Shed

I come around
Only after dark
When the streets are empty
And the snow gently falls
Past a glowing neon light
When the noise of the city
Quiets the %$& on down
I sneak through the crack
By the bottom of the old door
Meets the concrete floor
Anxious to get away
From the mean streets
A few empty crates
Stacked near the back
An old coat losing its stuff
Fabric ripped and torn
Castaway years ago
Countless like other souls
That have been here before
Like me in this tin shed
Have watched and waited
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Posted: Jan 2020
About this poem:
Now you know what the cat is thinking.......
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optimisticme

The Beginning of the End

I saw the light tonight,, twas blue, red,, and bright, the world in all its glory, showed
me its story, you covet what you can,, its all in the plan, noone cares or wants to know who you are or where you go, now take a stand and raise your hand, dont be a sheep your not asleep,get up today! and say! I'm me! come what may!
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Posted: Nov 2021
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ooby_dooby

Road-Song of the Bandar-Log, Rudyard Kipling

Here we go in a flung festoon,
Half-way up to the jealous moon!
Don't you envy our pranceful bands?
Don't you wish you had extra hands?
Wouldn't you like if your tails were -- so --
Curved in the shape of a Cupid's bow?
Now you're angry, but -- never mind,
Brother, thy tail hangs down behind!

Here we sit in a branchy row,
Thinking of beautiful things we know;
Dreaming of deeds that we mean to do,
All complete, in a minute or two --
Something noble and grand and good,
Won by merely wishing we could.
Now we're going to -- never mind,
Brother, thy tail hangs down behind!

All the talk we ever have heard
Uttered by bat or beast or bird --
Hide or fin or scale or feather --
Jabber it quickly and all together!
Excellent! Wonderful! Once again!
Now we are talking just like men.
Let 's pretend we are... never mind,
Brother, thy tail hangs down behind!
This is the way of the Monkey-kind.
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Posted: Nov 25
About this poem:
From "The Jungle Book" by Rudyard Kipling
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Unknown

the immpossible

a horse passes through the hole of a neddle
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Posted: Apr 2020
About this poem:
it means nothing is impossible in life
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Unknown

FALSE LOVE

YOU CRY FOR SOMETHING.
YOU WANT FOR SOMEONE.
YOU LUST AFTER THEM.
GREED FEELS YOUR HEART.
YOUR MIND BECOMES UNSETTLED.
YOUR WANTS ARE YOUR MAIN FOCUS.
ONCE YOU OBTAINED YOUR WANTS, NEEDS & DESIRES.
TO KNOW YOU HAVE WON OVER THAT PERSON.
KNOW THAT YOU ARE THE CENTER OF ATTENTION.
YOU QUICKLY WANT TO MARCH TO A DIFFERENT TUNE.
YOU START TO BORED.
KNOWING THE CHASE & THRILL IS GONE.
NOW YOU THINK THIS IS NOT A GOOD THING.
NEVER UNDERSTAND HOW YOU HAVE CONNED THEIR MIND & STOLE THEIR HEART.
TOOK THEIR LOVE & IN RETURN GAVE THEM A HEART MADE OF STEEL.
A TRAIL OF TEARS IN THE WAKE OF YOUR DEPARTURE.
CAUSE FOR YOU IT'S JUST THE CHASE.....
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Posted: May 2020
About this poem:
Life.....People....Places...... Things......
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