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RavenDevine

Trapped

I feel like I'm in a trap
and your the one with the last laugh
When I feel so strong
you show up to make things go wrong
You want me to believe you
Yet your threats don't leave me much to do
You've hurt me real bad
and I can't stop being sad
the tears won't stop falling
I feel like a baby who won't stop balling
I feel with my heart we should part
Because I can't handle the tears in my heart
Yet when I try to say goodbye
your threats make me want to die
How I wish you would let me go
But I know that's something you won't do
You want me to say "I love you"
I know that is something I won't do
I am tired of you haveing me in a trap
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Posted: Aug 2014
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GUZMAN1

Ghazal by Agha Shahid Ali

Where are you now? Who lies beneath your spell tonight?
Whom else from rapture’s road will you expel tonight?

Those “Fabrics of Cashmere--“ ”to make Me beautiful--“
“Trinket”-- to gem– “Me to adorn– How– tell”-- tonight?

I beg for haven: Prisons, let open your gates–
A refugee from Belief seeks a cell tonight.

God’s vintage loneliness has turned to vinegar–
All the archangels– their wings frozen– fell tonight.

Lord, cried out the idols, Don’t let us be broken
Only we can convert the infidel tonight.

Mughal ceilings, let your mirrored convexities
multiply me at once under your spell tonight.

He’s freed some fire from ice in pity for Heaven.
He’s left open– for God– the doors of Hell tonight.

In the heart’s veined temple, all statues have been smashed
No priest in saffron’s left to toll its knell tonight

God, limit these punishments, there’s still Judgment Day–
I’m a mere sinner, I’m no infidel tonight.

Executioners near the woman at the window.
Damn you, Elijah, I’ll bless Jezebel tonight.

The hunt is over, and I hear the Call to Prayer
fade into that of the wounded gazelle tonight.

My rivals for your love– you’ve invited them all?
This is mere insult, this is no farewell tonight.

And I, Shahid, only am escaped to tell thee–
God sobs in my arms. Call me Ishmael tonight.
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
I DON'T KNOW IF THE TRANSLATION IS GOOD
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zeroBalance

just hit

How long you desire
How long you say
How long you want happiness
How long you stay ?!?
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Posted: Nov 2018
About this poem:
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Unknown

a random memory

did you remeber when we had our first date, did you remember when you said you want to go home and then pulled you closet to ma chest and told you my heart is your home , and then you smilled and told me you are not jus my home you are my world.
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Posted: Jun 2018
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runningshiva

You 'been LOVED

It really does'nt matter
if you are HURT because
i still have time to patch it up..
i still have strength to make you happy..
i still have talent to make you smile..
i still have sweet-power to bring you back..

LOVE teaches us a LOT in many a ways,
if you are hurt its obvious you will take time,
if you get hurt it means you are in LOVE..


lovers usually get hurt easily and off n on,fights and they fade away for a time being and get to each other again..its something said to be ADJUSTMENT, ,,kinda LOVE..happens althrough our LIFE, if its WRONG, go tell them you have never been loved !
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Posted: Oct 2018
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runningshiva

Itch-Time

If you ever seen a CLOWN
I bet
You are in the TOWN

If you ever seen a CLOWN
I bet
Your hair is that BROWN

If you ever seen a CLOWN
I bet
You are DROWNed in FROWN

If you ever seen a CLOWN
I bet
You are loving still that NOUN
.
.
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Posted: Oct 2018
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ItchY BitchY SixtyNine
I don know how Qurrantine !!!
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mcradloff

I like it there wherever I am

I like it there wherever I am
I daydream all day of the people I would rather be around
It is a small list
Todd comes to mind
But before he got in all the trouble he is in now
I would have to go back to 1990 on him
Ted is another
Till he whacked me in the head accidentally with my own seven iron
I miss the Saturday mornings watching the Smurfs and School House Rock
I miss the Dunkin Donuts and red hot jawbreakers
I wish I was back in Yellowstone watching the geysers and hot springs
I wish I could go to Mars and have some real privacy
I wish I could go back in time when there was only 200 million people
And not the 7.5 billion we have right now
I would like to live in Norway or Canada
Where people are treated with respect
Yes, I like it there wherever I am
Because where I am at isn't too peaceful
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Posted: May 2017
About this poem:
This USA culture I find myself living in really has me troubled at times.
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honeybear3000

You Leave......

You leave ,a power that is infinite, a soul that whispers through the universe, that's detach the wrong from the right, You leave the building plans of life that holds the keys to freedom that will unlock closed doors, that that holds the true purpose of my life's experience, You leave the chance to find my way when I'm lost, You leave a strength not only is within me but outers that will carry out and hopefully do the same ......
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Posted: Feb 2017
About this poem:
this is a poem for the world to see for there self an others.......
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Unknown

2bodies. 1soul

FEELING of LOVE IS AGOOD SENSATION BUT IMAGINE IF YOU ARE SINKING IN LOVE.


The first time I saw you,I lost in the …………………… ground.
The smile and laugh of you… wait wait I am still hearing ur sound.
I am feeling that you are still around.

since i knew you,i am shinning like astar.
Be sure that,i am always near not far.

I am feeling that your love make me lucky.
I swear baby , I will make you happy


I wish from god to always keep you.
I fear from air to touch you.

Baby I will be supernatural if u need ,I could be harry potter.
As I can not live without u but I can live without water

Promise me my baby not leave me.
Iwant to live with you beside me.

Nana.
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Posted: Aug 2016
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niah9

WEATHER GOAL

Sense feelings, of a new day
Whether grey skies or gay
Changes occur to inner soul
Day progresses towards goal

Crystal sunshine, breaks dawn
Until day ends, new day is born
Attitude wings, due to weather
Mixed emotions, brings together

Picture a day, rain clouds host
Draws curtains, spiritual ghost
Dancing sunrays, sparkle bright
Happy thoughts-emotions light

Snow musters, dreamy thoughts
Lights twinkle, memory caught
If lovers walk, through falling rain
Laugh not cry, as raindrops drain

Into gutters, gurgle and bubble
On-lookers shelter, in huddle
Until a rainbow, lights the sky
Lifting hopes, soaring high

Proof weather, makes us feel
Thoughts-emotions. time-seal
Yet we control, how to behave
Build memories. to future pave

Aim each forward step-floats
Towards happiness, with hope
Positive attitude, leads the way
Sun or grey skies, wonderful day
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
weather can change our attitude
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