walking into empty rooms with only silence there the party is now over people leaving happy you stay to clean the mess silence she just watches and gently would caress
noise has left a while strange the feeling now the fervour of the voices replaced by quietness the glasses, plates, bottles the remnant of the guests silence she just watches and gently would caress
in silence contemplation now the partys over and a mix of feelings come knocking at your door those familiar after thoughts in silence of clean up.
i've cleaned up after plenty parties... i miss my parties - especially the ones with the mad people where we saw the dawn ate all the contents of the fridge and slept on the nearest flat surface (head still spinning!)
Hi, serpico12, a mix of feelings come knocking at your door...Sometimes these can be unwanted guests or, at other times, treasured gifts one gently would caress. I like the ambiguity in your poem.
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 17, 2010
serpico, you had a party and didn't invite US? heh! mixed feelings, for sure, in that silence. though i have experienced after-parties to those parties that sound like ladybee's...hmmmm, we always ended up on the front lawn, though. lol! another great one, for sure! (i mean the poem, not the parties!)
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 17, 2010
thanks ladies..you all are so kind with your comments..always valued..and next time you will all get and invite..
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a mix of feelings come knocking at your door...Sometimes these can be unwanted guests or, at other times, treasured gifts one gently would caress. I like the ambiguity in your poem.