just wishing

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Oct 2010 365 Views 10 comments

just wishing

Author: Unknown

Just wishing
just hoping
that is what people do
everyday
everyway
whatever our heart
is saying to us

new people
new lover
maybe a somewhere else
everyday
everyway
whatever you aspirations
are saying to us

rekindle
reawaken
embers of dying flames
everyday
everyway
sifting possibilites
to catch the wind

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Posted: Oct 2010

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Comments (10)

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 23, 2010

just keep wishing serpico,,some wishes comes true you know,,,very nice write and i have a lot of wishes too.great one sir

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 23, 2010

wishing I could catch the wind!!! Lovely poem as always serpico

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 23, 2010

thanks jeddah..always great reply from you..will do..

thanks redex...thank you too for the thoughts..sometimes its the wind that catches us.lol

thanks ladies

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 23, 2010

Wonderful possibilities! cafe'

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 23, 2010

if wishes were ashes...there will always be more, as the fire never completely dies. maybe we should all roast some marshmellows? keep wishing, serpico...the words, are true in form. cheers!

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAOct 23, 2010

Wish I'd win the lottery, find true love and become a famous writer. There that's three. Should I turn around three times and spit over my shoulder?

Well written piece!

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 23, 2010

thanks again cafe..appreciate your wise input..and comments

thanks gashly..as sharp in replies as always..always appreciate your comments..as you are a top writer of poems...

thanks also free..nice to dream ..keeps us getting too stuck in reality.though needful..

thanks to you all..

ginger1959Kingston, Ontario CanadaOct 23, 2010

I just want "to catch the wind"

Beautiful Serpico

Ginger

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAOct 23, 2010

Hi, serpico12,
I love the image of sifting possibilites breathing flames of aspirations into life.

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 24, 2010

thanks ginger the wind often catches us..seems we aught to do the same..lol

gnj4u..thanks for your thoughts today..sifting is such a nice description for me..

thanks ladies

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