polar bear

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Nov 2010 607 Views 12 comments

polar bear

Author: Unknown

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They said take
a running jump
so that is
what he did

now in mid air
nearly there
eat your heart out
said the bear.

mind i aint
landed yet
just halfway there
was the polar bear.

you can make
you can get there
if you dont
sad twill be
and we say
goodbye polar bear

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Posted: Nov 2010

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freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 5, 2010

They can swim, can't they?

Funny!

kickit22auburn, Washington USANov 5, 2010

I don't think he made it now he's all wet bet ya he hadn't slept.

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 5, 2010

hi freeatlast yes but maybe he never took the classes..lol

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 5, 2010

nice reply kickit...sharp..lol..

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 5, 2010

if/when we say goodbye to the polar bear, it will be a monumental failure of mankind. thankfully, they can swim, for now. and they're so cute!

thanks serpico, for a lovely, if somewhat somber, read.

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 5, 2010

hi gashly..did nt mean it to be a sad read..just wanted to be a bit funny with it..i may have missed that mark.but he did land on the ice..so they are safe...lol...

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 5, 2010

oh. oops, my bad!

sorry, i just can't look at them without thinking, they're going away soon. but ok, it was still a pleasant read...and yeah, of course he made it, so he could run over and eat the dude taking the picture! rock on!

kickit22auburn, Washington USANov 5, 2010

I don't think he did make it if you look in the water there is another animal he probably saw that and said dinner time so I think he was gonna try to squish it by doing a belly flop on it.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 5, 2010

I can see how we all view the same subject from different sides...I aslo saw sadness, because of the melting ice....still, thought provoking...Niah

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 6, 2010

Love your enthusiasm & confidence, bear

(You look so happy... but goodness, looks close... DID you make it? Well, if not, we know it was only a quick goodbye, as you can swim & prob. came up w/that fish!)

And speaking of confidence, I know a certain dog who could use some... brb

Oh wait, before I go! Serpico... wonderful fun, reading the polar bears thoughts, great job!

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 6, 2010

P.S.Yes, true about many poems, can be taken several ways. Would actually be quite a profound way of making a statement for the world of endangered species.

Great writing the way you meant it, Serpico... and great writing either way!

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 6, 2010

hi gashly..its ok no oops needed...as the bear could be saying..oops if he dropped in on the fish below him..he wins whatever..lol..thanks for your thoughts...and bearing with me..lol..

hi kickit22.yes he could do a great belly flop..enough weight there to splash the fish below out of the water..

hi niah..yes we all see some things differently..and that s not a bad thing..if he only knew that attention he was getting..

thanks scatlyn..you really go to town on your clever replies..see you are a animal lover..yes the point of the bear image was saying..hey man just let me show you what i can do..123 and liftoff..lol
well he makes it if you want him too..
and dog gone it...that dog is spreading his fame into this poem..lol

thanks all for your great comments..