As we sleep, we feel, In our dreams, Our love we seal, True happiness, is as it seems. The peaceful smile, Playing upon our lips, Clearly hides, No lie, deceit nor guile, As our souls take, From the sacred goblet of life, Take such slow and gentle sips. Both returning to young in mind and heart, Forgotten now, All long past hurt and strife, For us together, A brand new start, And with no needed ceremony….. Partners…… For life!
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 28, 2011
Hi Andrew. Nice to see you back and with such an affirming, romantic piece.
Tithonus., IranFeb 28, 2011
Thanks Andrew for sharing this nice message of love. Once in army a good friend and I sep'rated In sullen enmity to join the battle fronts. I did not know if he ever survived the war Till at a noon, years later, we met in a park. We embraced and kissed each other with utmost cheer….
moonontideSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 28, 2011
Wow!!! Thats beautiful. May the smile of love forever kiss you both.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKFeb 28, 2011
Just Wonderful Andrew, just knew you would weave a dream around a ladies heart. All people who cupids arrow touches their writting I have noticed enriches, is that the right word, so looking forward to new ones from you, of course when you are not busy
andrew149OPSouthbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKFeb 28, 2011
I second that Jaz, thankyou....Here's to life!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKFeb 28, 2011
Partners ... for life! This is what we all are gathered here for, to find partners, with whom we could share the rest of our lives. Hope we all are successful in our search. Good this poem turned up on that rotating bar. Thanks, Andrew, for this gem of a poem!
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMay 5, 2011
What a romantic, beautiful poem!! (Been wondering where you are... and thinking about asking S&S to put out that "wanted" poster... but after reading this... well, I imagine you're right where you're wanted-lol)
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Best wishes Andrew.
lovely write andrew
Great writing, the re-awakening of a more mature love.... I hope you really have found what you are looking for...
Bill
Once in army a good friend and I sep'rated
In sullen enmity to join the battle fronts.
I did not know if he ever survived the war
Till at a noon, years later, we met in a park.
We embraced and kissed each other with utmost cheer….
May the smile of love forever kiss you both.
All people who cupids arrow touches their writting I have noticed enriches, is that the right word, so looking forward to new ones from you, of course when you are not busy
CJ
(Been wondering where you are... and thinking about asking S&S to put out that "wanted" poster... but after reading this... well, I imagine you're right where you're wanted-lol)
Best wishes!