Earth's Revenge

blasting wind ripping with a grin
gaining laughter with a pounding rain
bolt of lightining shattering your trees
oh this is such a breeze
running scared taking flight
hiding under the stairs
what a funny site
giving you a wink with the
blinding light
making your hair stand up in the night
you make a run
i'm gonna pound your bun
blast of hail your gonna be a snail
broken windows shattered dreams
i'm on the back of your heals
running scared head for the house
go on inside i'll open that door
ripping it off the hinges
flying through the air
a five mile flight smashing it in a plane
burst of laughter comen from above
a deep voice muttered the words
you have dug me bled me
you have polluted me bombed me
you have burned me filled me with trash
burst of laughter ensued
now you must pay for what you have done
i'm not gonna stop till i am done
snow falls that freezes your balls
you try to take flight
now your covered in ice
gust of wind booming thunder
pounding of hail knocks you out
now your dead and the
sun comes out
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
revenge the earth will do if we don't stop miss treating her

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Comments (17)

andrew149
Breathless narrative, well written, well said Kickit....Thankyou, I enjoyed it....Andrew...cool
kickit22
Andrew.
Thank you my friend great comment from a great poet comen from your self that is a high praise. glad to see your back. cheers kickit.
kickit22
i think were all doomed..help help
Earlgreytea
your powers of description had me in fits of laughter, but then again, i do so enjoy a powerful storm or two..., nice job... thumbs up
kickit22
EGT

glad you got a laugh.

i try and write some serious some sad but most of all i try to make people laugh. kickit.
morbon
What a mad poem. I loved it. The message was revealed in the title, but the movement of this poem made it superb. I felt that even if the earth will not avenge, that we must stop huting it. I understand your rage in this poem, i simply enjoyed it. Keep expressing your thoughts. thumbs up thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, kickit22,
As if original sin was not enough, now we have to fear Earth's Revenge! ...and such delight taken in exacting it! Nice write.
Fellsman
Hi kickit

Poetry is such a perfect medium for allowing us to get stuff off our chests - and you used to great effect here...

Best wishes

Bill cheers
Redex
How did I miss this great fun seriouse poemdoh Loved it puts my wave to shameteddybear
DaBomb72
Another...down-to-Earth poem, Kickit ! I really tasted this personification you've made. Well done buddy !handshake wine
niah9
Great write kickit...enjoyed the journey....niahapplause teddybear
Odette67
The whole poem EXCELENT Kickit. applause
kickit22
want to thank every one of you for your comments..cheers cheers

kickit
Billiegirl
Great point
pookie
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Mycalling
I've read it now...bit like the movie 'The Happening' although that was far fetched. Your poem describes 'Earth's Revenge' in more realistic terms cheers
Ayhra
Beautiful writing Kickit applause bouquet handshake
kickit22
thank you all for your comments...cheers

kickit.
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