blasting wind ripping with a grin gaining laughter with a pounding rain bolt of lightining shattering your trees oh this is such a breeze running scared taking flight hiding under the stairs what a funny site giving you a wink with the blinding light making your hair stand up in the night you make a run i'm gonna pound your bun blast of hail your gonna be a snail broken windows shattered dreams i'm on the back of your heals running scared head for the house go on inside i'll open that door ripping it off the hinges flying through the air a five mile flight smashing it in a plane burst of laughter comen from above a deep voice muttered the words you have dug me bled me you have polluted me bombed me you have burned me filled me with trash burst of laughter ensued now you must pay for what you have done i'm not gonna stop till i am done snow falls that freezes your balls you try to take flight now your covered in ice gust of wind booming thunder pounding of hail knocks you out now your dead and the sun comes out
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
revenge the earth will do if we don't stop miss treating her
i try and write some serious some sad but most of all i try to make people laugh. kickit.
morbonRoskilde, Zealand DenmarkJul 10, 2011
What a mad poem. I loved it. The message was revealed in the title, but the movement of this poem made it superb. I felt that even if the earth will not avenge, that we must stop huting it. I understand your rage in this poem, i simply enjoyed it. Keep expressing your thoughts.
Comments (17)
Thank you my friend great comment from a great poet comen from your self that is a high praise. glad to see your back. kickit.
glad you got a laugh.
i try and write some serious some sad but most of all i try to make people laugh. kickit.
As if original sin was not enough, now we have to fear Earth's Revenge! ...and such delight taken in exacting it! Nice write.
Poetry is such a perfect medium for allowing us to get stuff off our chests - and you used to great effect here...
Best wishes
Bill
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