off in the distance.

i saw it today
out in the distance
was too far away
a grass covered field
a tear came into my eye
hanging from a tree
couldn't tell was it
man or woman
boy or girl
hanging by a rope or a belt
i'm not sure for i was too far away
was soo small i could only see a head
i was soo scared didn't no if it was
alive or dead
the sun was out in my eyes
was so quiet with a slight breeze
lump in my throat as i made my way
had to stop should i go see
what is this that's hanging by a tree
i turned the other way
couldn't bare to see
what this might be
thoughts came to mind
what if there still alive
how could i walk away
i stopped in my tracks
then continued on
closer i came sun was going down
shadows finally lifted
then i knew it was dead
for it was red
but then i seen many on this tree
as closer i came
for it was just an
apple tree
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
well what can i say...

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Comments (16)

itchywitch
gulp crying
kickit22
awwwwwwwwwwww...... comfort
jazzy75
always a surprise....lol...nicely done!cheers
kickit22
i hope your okay now itchywitch, i brought you a glass of water \_/..
kickit22
thank you jazzy. laugh if i can bring couple people to a smile then the day isn't wasted even if my day is not good. wine
itchywitch
ahh thanks kickit just what i needed drinking
Billiegirl
Silly, you may need glasses or binocularrolling on the floor laughing
kickit22
rolling on the floor laughing that was too cute billiegirl.. you know just couple weeks ago had a dot physical had to do an eye test i must say 41 is catchen up to me the light is getting dimmer.laugh
itchywitch
hmmmm hmmm might you have something a little stronger then water buddies
cafetwo2010
Nice one kickit..but I knew you were setting us up with that #2 pencil again.lol.
kickit22
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing oh cafetwo you are too smart for me i can't get you twice. will have to see how it works out on swade and the rest.. although i'm quit pleased you liked this thank you..handshake kickit
kickit22
i need a drinking or drinking drinking laugh
kickit22
for you niah bouquet i didn't forget you just saving you for last. wink glad too see you back in the sattle again. appreciate your comment that really means a super super lot too me. hug kickit.
agoodguy2have
kick, you had it right,
sweet johnny, oh sweet johnny, the apple of granny smiths eye, swung gently from a branch, i cannot tell a lie. ;-)
kickit22
thank you GG
it's always nice at one point or another in ones life somethen was right. not very often that happen too me anyways.. laugh
kickit.
morbon
Simply brilliant thumbs up
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