struggling within

perfection we strive
imperfect we are
colorful blindness
darkness were in
outter limits
high as it is
achieving our best
struggling to succeed
looking within
a beating heart
love is all
that there is
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
when everything don't go as we want as hard as life is we still have love.

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itchywitch
sob' i know and when we don't we have nothing crying
kickit22
when there is nothing there is nothing. moping
itchywitch
but when you have nothing dont that mean, you have everything to gain idea some of your poems often catch me on a sad note kickit but i loved it all the same sad flower
itchywitch
but when you have nothing dont that mean, you have everything to gain idea some of your poems often catch me on a sad note kickit but i loved it all the same sad flower
kickit22
i really love your point itchywitch you are absolutly correct but some times a person needs a jump start just a little nudge of encouragement. then the world can be at the finger tips. don't want to make you or anybody sad. i know my writtings been on the sad side of late but i soon maybe one day will get out of my little slump i;m in right now. i reposted after the party that might put a smile on your face.lol... wine
itchywitch
what i say to that kickit, write it as you feel it others will read it as they see it, given that moment as to how they might be feeling.. you can read someones saddness that makes you smile also and this might be adaft thing to say and perhaps it will make me sound maybe a bit selfish but after the read, at least you know your not alone (hmmm that sounds odd) but it makes sense in a way, sorry, im not very good at explaining doh as true as we like to share happyness so is it true also, we dont like to feel alone with our saddness so no harm in sharing that too, i'm sure no one will mind' more leisening ears about then deaf ones me thinks teddybear
Billiegirl
Good morning kickit I see you woke up on the cute side of the bed! Nice writebouquet
kickit22
hi itchywitch
you described it beautifully i just read it different then you wanted to express. i want to whole heartedly say thank you cause right now it sure does feel alone and you made it feel not so much alone. thank you teddybear my mind is all over the place right now apology to you from me. thanks for your sweet kindness.
kickit22
good morning billiegirl.

thanks just tryen to lighten me ol' self up for i'm not really feeling all that cute. uh oh just hope that it rubs off on me.laugh
itchywitch
im having one of them days too kickit so lets say, you kept me comany also, if you know what i mean bouquet
Redex
hug was not going to sign in kickit usually just pop by for a read, but when I saw your struggle within had to pop by and let you know we caresad flower hope you see your way through hope it helps that people look forward to your fun poems againteddybear
Odette67
perfection we strive
imperfect we are
colorful blindness
darkness were in
outter limits
high as it is
achieving our best
struggling to succeed
looking within
a beating heart
love is all
that there is

Lovely poem, you are right, because without love, we have nothing, cos money will never buy love. teddybear heart beating
kickit22
laugh :hug
yea i do no what you mean... isn't that what woman want to hear but what if i really don't understand what you mean could that put tension between two. think most guys agreee just so they don't have to disagree but this is a whole different issue i' don't feeel like conquering today so i'll just say ya i do no what you mean. laugh

ps really i do know what you are saying. bouquet
kickit22
laugh :hug
yea i do no what you mean... isn't that what woman want to hear but what if i really don't understand what you mean could that put tension between two. think most guys agreee just so they don't have to disagree but this is a whole different issue i' don't feeel like conquering today so i'll just say ya i do no what you mean. laugh

ps really i do know what you are saying. bouquet
kickit22
awwwwwww red... teddybear your a doll
thank you dear it is goood to hear from friends when not doing so good. maybe in couple weeks i'll be okay but just not gonna be any time soon. hug
kickit22
thank you so kind odette. the struggle no matter how deep we are in life the love is the bottom line. hug
kickit22
itchywitch

glad i could keep you company also. hope what i have isn't contagious. tho it seems to be spreading. hope you are better by days end. teddybear
jazzy75
and the result a beautiful poem....hug looking within takes great courage my friendteddybear
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