Stained Soul

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Oct 2011 510 Views 6 comments

Stained Soul

closed eyes sun shines
bulging vaines migraine
splatterss on a wall
cats meow dog barking
living in a stairwell
creating spaces
to much pain
washing it down the drain
turning red paint on the wall
dripping in a river far below
opening eyes sun goes down
carpet is stained
never to be the same

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Posted: Oct 2011

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Comments (6)

BilliegirlNotre-dame de la Salette, Quebec CanadaOct 1, 2011

Gorgeous write deep indeed

living in a stairwell
creating spaces
meaniful words

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 1, 2011

Hi my friend,no twist this time

,all the more i enjoyed reading your serious write,thanks awesome

M.M

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAOct 1, 2011

thank you hon.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAOct 1, 2011

hi poet

your right not this time. have not really had anything jump out at me to much of late but I have got a few starts on some poems but finishing them is a different story. all I can say is stay tuned I may finish one soon. glad you liked my serious poem just trying to jump start my thinking.lol..

kickit.

AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 1, 2011

Nice and deep kickit