by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA
Oct 2011 818 Views 13 comments
loveless
simplicity begins in the first degree
with love spread over the path
from the wind high above
wrapping your heart
in the presence of a crescent moon
broken down on your knees
in the grass of a seductive please
holding your head in disbelief
wondering if love will ever
blow your leaves.
with love spread over the path
from the wind high above
wrapping your heart
in the presence of a crescent moon
broken down on your knees
in the grass of a seductive please
holding your head in disbelief
wondering if love will ever
blow your leaves.
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Posted: Oct 2011
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Comments (13)
with love spread over the path
from the wind high above
wrapping your heart.... One can never feel loveless when embraced by nature! Thanks for this lovely piece Kickit!
"wrapping your heart
in the presence of a crescent moon"
Love is seldom life long, mostly it is transient, fleeting, ephemeral, deceptive, hurtful, illusionary and elusive. I sometimes wonder why we bother... Then I remember, there are moments of supreme ecstasy that make all the downside adjectives redundant - we simply have to treasure those moments and be thankful for whatever darts Cupid sends our way.
Regards
Bill
with love spread over the path
from the wind high above
wrapping your heart
in the presence of a crescent moon
broken down on your knees
in the grass of a seductive please
holding your head in disbelief
wondering if love will ever
blow your leaves.
Poignant...though beautiful in it's entirety.
Loved the write, I felt both sides of the coin reading it.. the joy of having that special someone to "wrap your heart in the presence of a crescent moon" and the dejection of wondering if "love will ever blow your leaves"
But dont give up hope, I almost did and I am soooooo glad I didnt, as now I am happily involved with someone special and ready to see where this path in my life takes me, so just hang in there and suddenly when you least expect it, love will surely find you my friend.
Freckles
this poem does not have any meaning to my personal life. as billiegirl and I are still very much in love with each other.
I got the love
Love of the loveless"
I missed this poem one time much to my shame. There are so many of them deserving attention.
Thank you, dear poet, for sharing!
Thank you for spreading or sharing the love of the loveless.
Agree with you impossible to read everything ,
It's better to read some then non at all.
Cheers.
K8ckit
Cheers , .