POETS Acrostic

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

May 2012 706 Views 5 comments

POETS (Acrostic)

Publishers who share to the world whats in our soul

Open your mind and write one of your own

Everybody who reads a poem will smile or shed a tear

Together we are a society of brothers/sisters who carry pencils and not guns

Start today write a word and let the rest follow. we are the poet society.

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Posted: May 2012

About this poem:

i dunno.. my first attempt at this... i'm sure you will let me no if it is bad or good.lol. oh I know it is not all artistic but well okay i suck...

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Comments (5)

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 12, 2012

Hey Mike its an inspirational one,very nice one as a first attempt...the key to it as one poet told me is not letting a line go into a second sentence.Free verse or a ryhming piece is always fun to try and i'm sure you enjoyed your first attempt,i guess that bump did work after all

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 12, 2012

And hightlighting the first letter in each line will be a big plus but not a requirement though,as examples online will show, it is all up to the writer and how he wants his message to be portrayed

CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAMay 12, 2012

Mike, not bad at all. Don't put down your attempt at this style. Your thoughts about poets and what we all share is right no point so your message came through and that is what it is all about. Fine acrostic poem!

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USAMay 12, 2012

cloudy..

thank you for your more then generous comment to heal my wounds. it is a point i am thrilled to share with just a cleaning or buffing up i think this would be good. maybe need to make the type smaller to fit all on one line as poet1 says.. i'll see what i can do.

kickit..

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 12, 2012

Dont be that harsh on yourself it is lovely thoughts you portrayed in each line,you should have seen my first attempt called''In Your Eyes''that was before i made all the necessary changes to make each limit each phrase within one sentence sentence....terrible