LIFE'S DREAM

The stream of life past us flows,
Where it goes, no-one knows,
The water is deep, the current fast,
And, what was our future is soon the past.

The tree is high, the roots run deep,
It's branches spread wide, safe us to keep,
Leaves our shelter and warmth at no cost,
Buds our babies, twigs our young,
To replace too many generations lost.

And so life's dream,
Twixt tree and stream,
One to watch and one to wait,
While those that have passed,
Speak as guardians of the gate.
"Always follow what's inside,
Forget the money,
Or, what's gained in import,
Is lost to fate.
For sometimes, with something that pays less,
You'll gain more reward than you can guess".

A good way to start....
Only you know what's inside you,
What's inside your heart,
And, you will soon find,
When with another of your kind,
Cool realisation,
That bodies age, and looks fade,
But never a clever or beautiful mind.

So, to your own self be true,
Feel deep inside,
converse with your heart,
You'll know what to do.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2012
About this poem:
Wrote this a long time ago...hope you like it...Andrew...xxx

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SCatlyn
Aww... great poem purple heart
I esp. like "Always follow what's inside...
That bodies age, and looks fade, but never a clever or beautiful mind."

There's so much more here, but I only have a few mins. at the moment-lol- so hopefully will get a chance to revisit.
trurorob
Nice one Andrew, makes me think of Nash the mathematician. I think at times our minds can improve with age.
Rob
jazzy75
I'll toast to that Andrew!wine
paloma66
A gem of a write Andrew,yes bodies age and looks fade but not a beautiful or clever mind as yours.thumbs up applause hug
windyweatherly
Wow Andrew this is so true be.auty can fade but the cleverness and beauty of the m

mind doesn't.

Bottom line is it is the mind that creates impressions in the canvas of life.

Thank you for the write and sharing

Windy
kickit22
cheers andrew. well said, and a great message we should all be true to ourself.

kick..
jerseygirl50
Simply beautiful Andrew,
good to see you againwine ..JG..wave
andrew149
Thankyou very much Scat...it's great to see you after so long....Andrew...xxxcool
Poetnumber1
Hi Andrew wise and practical thoughts,thanks for the upbeat write and hope all is well with you friend,cheerscheers gift M.Mvery happy
cherryreggae
That was so gorgeous andrew, well written and loved its message Ty for shaing...thumbs up applause cheering teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
Perhaps there is such a thing as beauty that transcends one's eyes; but, often, it resides in the eyes of the beholder (as noted by W. Shakespeare, D. Hume and, more recently, M. W. Hungerford) with each eye viewing through the lens of what's inside the self. May there be enough there to fulfill LIFE'S DREAM. Your poem left my mind wrestling with the thought of having to choose between mind and body.
gbbgman
Look into a mirror while reading this and it makes perfect sense.
Beautiful write Andrew.
lisaofflorida64
Wonderful.
each sentence a gem.
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