i got out....you have to play 'monopoly' to get out, and pick up a 'get out of jail free' card good write serpico
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 28, 2011
Great poem - and what a last line: "to leave on her own, you walk the high wire, no safety net no one all alone."
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 29, 2011
hi ladybee...thank you..so its the monopoly way of escape..lol...good for you..thanks for viewing the poem and liking it..
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 29, 2011
hey there scatlyn..thank you so much for your view of my poem and how you like the last stanza so much..love your comments, always strike a warm response and its so great to see you like them..
silentspringFjälkinge, Skane SwedenJan 29, 2011
An unexpected insight of the soul of a woman. Your poem allows me to believe we are all first human after all. Leaving hopes, we do understand each other.....t the end of the day....no matter gender.
Wonderful to read, thank you.
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 29, 2011
hi silentspring..thank you for your comments, even though it can be so..hope is never far away from us all...believing for the better in dark times..just an observance..thanks
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 29, 2011
I recall very few ladies who came for private dance lessons in the UK, but in NZ we had many, proves the more wealthy ladies married to husbands who placed work higher than homelife..their wives. They had it all but happiness, and they'd come once twice a week, filling their day the best they could....so yes, I relate to your poem, but why do they stay....I think we also know the answer....Niah
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 29, 2011
thanks niah..yes you could well be right..maybe the security is a hard place to leave, and some put up with lots of things..for so many reasons..thanks niah..
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to get out, and pick up a 'get out of jail free' card
good write serpico
no one
all alone."
Wonderful to read, thank you.