unhappy housewives

Bars made of stone
make her a prisoner
they are invisible
known only to her

she lives in a place
constructed by money
home and security
the good life and more

if she breaks free
where does she go to
what can she do
a housewife is she

longing to fly
away for a moment
to find her soul
she lost on her way

alone in the world
though marriage and children
security there
but love died long ago

love longs to fly
hearts yearn for freedom
wishing the yesterday
would call back today

to leave on her own
you walk the high wire
no safety net no one
all alone.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
thinking of women trapped in loveless marriages

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Comments (8)

Ladybee42
i got out....you have to play 'monopoly'
to get out, and pick up a 'get out of jail free' card
good write serpico

thumbs up bouquet bouquet
SCatlyn
Great poem - and what a last line: "to leave on her own, you walk the high wire, no safety net
no one
all alone." thumbs up sad flower
serpico12
hi ladybee...thank you..so its the monopoly way of escape..lol...good for you..thanks for viewing the poem and liking it..
serpico12
hey there scatlyn..thank you so much for your view of my poem and how you like the last stanza so much..love your comments, always strike a warm response and its so great to see you like them..wave
silentspring
An unexpected insight of the soul of a woman. Your poem allows me to believe we are all first human after all. Leaving hopes, we do understand each other.....t the end of the day....no matter gender.

Wonderful to read, thank you. hug
serpico12
hi silentspring..thank you for your comments, even though it can be so..hope is never far away from us all...believing for the better in dark times..just an observance..thanks
niah9
I recall very few ladies who came for private dance lessons in the UK, but in NZ we had many, proves the more wealthy ladies married to husbands who placed work higher than homelife..their wives. They had it all but happiness, and they'd come once twice a week, filling their day the best they could....so yes, I relate to your poem, but why do they stay....I think we also know the answer....Niahcool grin
serpico12
thanks niah..yes you could well be right..maybe the security is a hard place to leave, and some put up with lots of things..for so many reasons..thanks niah..
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