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Well, this is the plan!

I hear of this plan of "the creator" can it be?, seems very strange to me, a creator who can create such misery?, and all for what? and why should this be?, is there something I've missed? that I cannot see?

What does the "creator" want to create?, if the "creator" created the you and the me, why would it be we cannot see what "the creator" wants us to be, does the "creator" just watch to see, how we end this story?

And will "the creator" just start anew, over and over, constantly new, a never endiing cycle of thoughtful energy, created by you, by me, you will see, eventually!
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Posted: Apr 2022
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The Point

What's the point? Is there a point? Can anyone show me the point? There is no point, we exist through a revolving door, no less and no more!
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Posted: Apr 2022
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Short and sweet!

I'd like to present this award from the Academy Of Hell,

To Mr Putin, for his contribution, he has done so well, the world can tell, he has superseded all expectation, in his efforts to wipe out a peaceful nation, he can now join OUR ranks, no need for thanks, of our elite, so Mr President, WE WILL MEET,... AND I'LL BE HERE TO GREET YOU, Vladimir , You'll soon be here,

It's your destiny, your place to be, here with me, IN MISERY!
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Posted: Apr 2022
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Pebbles

How will you be you in a world of complication,who will you trust?, what direction will you take? your decisions in life,, what?, how?, who?, when?, why? where?, its not fair,,it wont be, it will never be, and when you can see, you become one of us, a lost being,, not seeing,, and helping to start it all over again, we are all oblivious , to the obvious, I suppose its just easier, to comply, than defy!
Pebbles,
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Posted: Jan 2022
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I dont know either?

Somehow it all dont matter, whats wrong or whats right, because the beginning cant be the end?, or the end cant be the beginning? So, the beginning must be the start of the end? Then whats the point of beginning? So we end?
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Posted: Jan 2022
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We actually mean nothing!

Working out a solution, I've come to the conclusion tomorrow will be,
There's no need for discussion, I'll just kill you or you just kill me,
Either way tomorrow will be, just open your eyes so you can see,
When we are gone, won't be that long, the world won't end, just because
we do,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,my friend!
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Posted: Apr 2022
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Let's start over

WAR!!!!! is not the way, yet it's in our history, from tribes of old, to modern day, it seems to be that we cannot see, a new design, its always the same time after time, civilizations have ended before, probably thousands, we are destined to be just one more, there is no hope for humanity for the blind cannot see, there's only one way for it to end, a clean slate, for its just too late, to change, our history, that is drowned in misery, so a new beginning is our destiny, we will end ourselves eventually!
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Posted: Apr 2022
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Corporate

I'd love to write a story, that everyone could see, the story of life, the story of us and me, somehow, to show how we came to be, where we are now, and what we want to see, corporate foundations are made up of people, like us, but somehow lost, in greed and need, hey,,, stop,,, the machine needs feed!
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Posted: Jan 2022
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VISIONARY

If she believed she was perfectly free
to notice or not whatever she chose
why should she care
that a meaningful stare
was fixed on none other than she?

What was so outré about anyone
taking a drink at her favourite café
lauding the view
of the old and the new
at ease in the temperate sun?

Was there anything strange about her face
that until right now she hadn’t observed
or could this be
coincidentally
the starer’s most coveted place?

Was there a smidgen of food near her nose
or some dirt or debris on her jawline
or had she been
inconveniently seen
by one of her earlier foes?

The was the moment for sowers to reap
She commanded her eyes to obey her
Pivoting right
they then stopped in mid flight
for the starer was sound asleep!
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Posted: Jan 2022
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The end game

We live in captivity because we believe this is reality, nothing new, we can't see, the real you or the real me, it will always be the same, until we end this game, but then it starts anew, never a whole new me and never a whole new you.
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Posted: Apr 2022
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