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EarthsSon

Heed the Warning

INFATUATION ALONG WITH FANATICISM,
DISPATCH PREHISTORIC PREJUDICE
THROUGHOUT THE SPHERE,
ANNIHILATION AND DOMINATION
CONVOKE SUBJUGATION ALONG WITH FEAR,
ANARCHISTIC MASOCHISTIC JUSTIFICATION
SHALL SOON BE SLAYED,
CHARACTERISTIC PRAGMATIC
INTERPRETATION WILL CONQUER THOSE WHO DISOBEY.
PERMANENCE OF CONSCIOUSNESS IS COMPENSATION
FOR EVERLASTING SUPPLICATION,
BUT FOR SOULS OF DECEIVERS TOWARDS THE MACROCOSM BELIEVERS,
SHALL EXIST IN A LIFE OF DAMNATION.
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
I enjoy writing on all topics, this topic and that of Celestial beings would be my fav.
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Unknown

The Mind And Body ch1 : The free spirit.

Spirit flying free so far from the ground,
My body amidst the wreckage as caged in and around,
Admiration of others gained through the trial and tribulations ,
But my spirit adrift so far from it's station,
Drifted so far but wisdom that sought,
A tactical mind will never stay caught,
An alliance I need with one of great strength,
The one will guide through hell and great lengths,
To be my hope in this absence of right,
And be my moon in the absence of light,
Light the fires within to strengthen our resolve,
Any glimpse of doubt begins to dissolve,
No question of loyalty no fear or dismay,
The spark to my flame let's me free from this,
guarding my body as I fall from great heights,
Returning my spirit back into the the light,
Awakening now my heart filled with rage,
Then my guardian came to my cage,
opened the door freeing my mind,
We make our stand their a team for all time
Like yin and yang two become one,
This grasp of from which we run,
Temptations allure catches the eye,
Of my brave guardian from this devilish bride,
But my resolves stays strong I prepare for a fight,
But not with my guardian as it would seem,
But the rot of black sin that has takin him from me........... to be continued
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
I have been writing stories for a long time but this the first one I've ever done done in poetry it will be covering a lot of dark subject in a manner of metaphorical exaggeration. I hope you enjoy and If you do get some inspiration from this feel free to use what you want I have never tried to claim fame from my works but I also have never try to take from anyone.
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Unknown

The Mind And Body ch2: the Lady Black

What now go on here were may I be,
What feeling of lust has come over me,
My body and mind was given to one,
The yang to My yin has become undone,
This spell the rapture of know exquisite sin greater,
How could I the guardian be come the great traitor,
Deceived by this mind altering spell,
gravity of the state that I'm in,
Driving My mind into chaos again,
It's embraces caries me through the darkest of haze,
The torment of burden like being up for ten day,
The feelings I feel and images I see,
Longing for The one the I once set free,
The memories of two are ripped from my soul,
As know I'm alone trap in this black hole,
Strength from with in give me all of your might,
My strength from without has failed me tonight,
aimlessly striving without much success,
The power depleted I've become powerless,
Trapped in a whole surrounded by black,
I need bright light to see my way back,
I need a hint a glimmer of hope,
Panic sets In can't manage to cope,
I need this to end I will find out how,
To regain my willpower and put on and wear a new crown,
I must remember that man that I once was,
Regain my power and rise above,
the shroud of evil that has consumed my soul,
And fight darkness that has to regain my control,
Days trickle buy at the speed hot wax,
My insides burn like a newly forged ax,
This stretching turmoil has only two cures,
give into temptation and keep himself pure,
On that final coarse of his day when suddenly,
The sickness and pain brings him to his knees,
The battle inside has reached its peak,
The survivor of this cannot be timid or weak,
So strongly now the crave of her touch,
Even knowing when he has had to much,
When out of the dark a shall appears,
A sliver of hope a familiar voice draws near,
As the black fades this figure illuminates,
Lighting the darkness a sense of hope it creates,
As the voice called gather your strength,
The light grows brightest closing the length,
It's her the fire in his heart grows at last,
This women he treasured in his recent past,
The free spirit who taught him to fly,
Now because of him she is ready to die,
Must break free of these shackles of black,
And gather his power in in one quick attack,
Give what he can but it was never this tuff,
But he never gives in and enough is enough,
Screaming in pain he tears at his binds,
The pain echoes throughout till her ear it finds,
And then quickly to us aid she tears at the binds,
As they struggle to regain,
that moment they lost all in vain,
But as they focus on him the trap is on her,
Caught up in the moment the tables have turned,
No the Lady in black has what she needs,
When at her worst he tells her to breath,
Remember who she is and never forget,
The spirit within you must focus on again,
I'll will be your strength I'll give you hope I'll be your guardian,
......to be continued
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
This is the second part to the poem. And the struggles within are not light hearted and to those who have over come them be proud of what you have done and hold not regret for the past but hope for the future.
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Unknown

The Mind And Body ch3: two sides of the same coin

Ch3 part 1
Voice whisper in the darkest of hours
Taking there time leaving feelings so sour,
Plotting and planning no knowing she hears it ,
Planning a way to break the free spirit,
Steps grow closer the floor a sharp crackle,
Trying to move the free spirit is shackled,
Tied down pinned down upon an altar of black,
Starring at the ceiling also crumbled and cracked,
Not sure it's be is upside down or down side right,
Or Left side down the thought brought her much fright,
feeling the glow leave from her crown,
The perfect hem stone torn from her gown,
Then the Lady of black speaks in much reverence,
Let not take pride or wealth but take the innocence,
A sharp pain then felt in her side,
The feelings of euphoria began to subside,
A feeling of horror plague her minds gate,
It's the horrible feeling of not knowing her fate,
Two sets of strong hands the voices from before,
Grasp tightly each arm and pick her from the floor,
Now remove this vail I have cast upon open eyes,
Oh mystic black arts of the wicked and wise,
Look upon me now and see as you will,
a reflection of a future that time will soon fill,
And as it was its so shall be be,
The image before her she could not believe,
It was her doing. in jealousy and wrath,
Who put her down this evil path,
To late now to atone for to much,
You cannot see or smell
nor run talk or touch,
Why and how run thru her mind,
Tell me what brings us her to this mirage of rewind,
One you were the one who shone brighter then the rest,
The brilliance of you light was seen all evil at best,
They committed there time to turning you black,
Saw a sliver of me through the temporal crack,
brought me forth through means they knew nothing of,
And finally had there all black dove,
But I knew that more than one cannot survive,
on any plane of existence two of the same soul won't thrive,
As I began to fade I agreed to turn you black in shame
In return my return to the plane whence I came,
Kidnapping him caging you were merely chores,
Falling victim to my power because it was yours,
Did you think it odd that he came so easy,
His bowing to me obeying my orders it makes you queasy.
And when he save you again it will be me this time,
You forced to watch as I commit this crime,
But enough of this now give her more,
Two more needles full of this darkness began to bore,
Deep in her skin her veins turn black as night,
The feeling of more become her new blight,
The lady in black leaves saying this,
Keep her mind active her body choose what you wish, to be continued......
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
Chap 3 of my fable as it where is about personalities and the existence of infinite possibilities enjoy and comment tell me what you think
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misfit203

Drama Much

Even my malice is virtuous
For I don't bring harm to those who bring harm to themselves

To my dearest friends seeking drama
I hope to to rattle you well

Your minds shifted not to how I feel
But rather to sow the seeds that impregnate your drama fields, you've something to sell

I think it time you've gotten what drama yields
So be on your merry way and merry go, someplace liken to hell

I'm immune to you like winter, I'm well layered
Like petty crooks you've taken to claw at my flesh as if digging for gold
So I've left your carcass on the road

I'm glad to say that It's far behind me
As the stench was unbearable upon sight of it's truths there laying exposed
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
At the time of this writing, I had been reflecting on the gossiping and backstabbing nature of some of my co-workers/friends I used to hang out with regularly. After much observation, It seemed to me their relationships with one another were just a pretense. Really they only enjoyed degrading one another and gaining favor within the workplace.
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mcradloff

Ghosts at Work

My friend told me about the ghosts at work
Three of them that act like a jerk
Turning on radios when he would walk
The sound of foot steps without the ring of talk
Hiding his three-wheeled bicycle in different places
Closing doors to the outside in darkened places
Who are these ghosts that haunt this place
One was killed on a press that destroyed his face
The two others are older ghosts from another time
When bowling alleys and pins were made when a dime was worth a dime
They want their privacy like anyone would
See, it is you who are in their home doing no good
Soon they will have the place all to themselves after December
Until the wrecking ball comes some day to render
A place they once called home
To haunt and to roam
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
The plant is in Dubuque and I have been in it twice, though I didn't get to experience any ghostly disturbances.
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Unknown

SINGAPORE STEAK

You gave me a golden day
you never intended to stay
Roses were red Violets were blue
I adored you

You were my world my breath
You played in Macbeth
Our velvet sky turned grey
We were caught in a spider gray

You showed me a free-paradise
For us Twitter tweeted eternal sacrifice
You sang another song
Your Coral snake-tongue told me nothing’s wrong

We were on the Titanic
You turned satanic
You killed my heart with a wooden stake
You ate Singapore steak

Saw your empty golden finger
Our love-balloon tried to linger
Felt your black breath
when you gave me your kiss of death
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Posted: Aug 2016
About this poem:
This poem is about my former cheating husband and he used online dating sites to cheat on me
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wayne34

The Scream

Into the void
The open space
Light darkens surrounds
To the deafening

Noise
One coverts ones ears
to the noise that
increases

One is consumed by sound
Hands to ears
scream at the sounds to stop tormenting
scream consumed by sound
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Posted: Aug 2016
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Davy_1985

The Well Of Sadness

I know that you barely noticed,

Strange sadness in my eyes that day,

It was almost like you never saw it,

And it looked like abyss with no end,


My grey eyes reminded you the surface of water,

You felt like looking into deep well,

I am the water and i am solitude down there,

It is where i drown in my own sorrow,


That is what you saw inside this well,

That is actually a little piece of Hell,

I'll show you the invisible dimensions of perception,

It's my soul that shines down there,


It lies buried in this beautiful grave,

That used to be place for hopes and dreams,

Come down and shine together with me,

In this flame so vibrant and pure,


This is how i used to melt our souls together,

And when i look above - i still can see the light,

So pure like my eyes used to be,

In the times when you stil loved me.
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Posted: Oct 2016
About this poem:
I wrote this poem about 2 years ago, i felt kinda depressed - it was autumn just like now so i wrote it, it has not been dedicated to ex or anything like that, jut feelings of mine on the paper
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1r1shmale

awake

Silent screams like shards from a broken vase
Silent screams haunted memories from the past
Darkened is time awake
Leaves me lots of time to contemplate my faith

I no longer distinguish light and dark
Day and night no longer play any part
Just in my frozen state
A sweat stained bed I vegetate

Long is my time awake
My mind locked down
Racing without a break
I don’t know how much longer this world I can take

I hold my head
It eases the pain
I reach out in chat rooms
But it is all in vain

I look in the dark
My eyes so sore
My soul now ripped tortured and torn
I look in the dark
I hope to see who is this haunting me

Silent screams like shards from a broken vase cover the floor
I bleed I pray I will bleed until I can bleed no more
I look in the dark and evil mirror I see
It is me I am haunting me

My self-induce loneliness in destroying me
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Posted: Oct 2016
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