Elo's challenge

blood pumping out of my heart
into my vains steam rolling out
of my ears and into the air

gravity pulling the lava down
seeping out of the pores of the wall
heat rising coming out of the top
the lava is about to blow

ash covered window pain
for the rain will wash it all away
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
from piping hot mad to a chill out

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Comments (8)

fjamesj9701
Fine poetry my friend.must have been quite hot.good chill thoughvery mad beer
Poetnumber1
This is deep my friendyay banana handshake
country_lady67
you must have really been mad over that phone lol awesome jon Kickit..
Billiegirl
Beautiful teddybear
Happygolucky4u
thumbs up Excellent travel through emotions.
kickit22
thanking all of you for your wonderful comments. handshake teddybear

kickit
jazzy75
great minds think alike!! lol...for a second time!!!

i see the lava is flowing....cool write kickit!!angel
Redex
Loved it kickitcheers
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