bloody nose cold feet can not breathe burning up laying down for a week have a temperature of 103 called the doctor I'm going in took some blood going home 48 hours the phone rings come on in your results are back have a seat got some news what is it do I have doctor says you have 6 months to live cold stare in disbelief how can this be what is it do I have is it cancer how bout chemo doctor shakes his head no it is not cancer do I have aids did I get it from that b*tch doctor shakes his head no it is not aids I do love you your not a b*tch please forgive me you will be free I only have six months to live what is it do I have doctor please do tell you have just a flu why is it do I have six months to live you have a bill the doctor says if it is not paid you will have a bullet in your head
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
oh come on now I can see doctors using this as a scare tactic to get there patience to pay as the economy gets worse
Even the doctor's aren't safe to go see anymore!!! Yikes!! Please remind me to stay well and healthy!!
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 16, 2011
Good point, funny poem. Thanks for that laugh kickit
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USASep 17, 2011
Very funny kick.. I sometimes become a bit concerned myself about doctors fees. I'm especially concerned about how my doctor will react when he finds out I've been paying him with that Monopoly Game money..
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaSep 17, 2011
Hi Kickit,
Loved you poem...very funny...it really had me going but knowing you I was half expecting a quirky punchline and you didn't disappoint.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 17, 2011
nice one kickit
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 17, 2011
dang it,,kickit,..you made my heart pump so fast i couldnt breath,,till i read the ending,,geeeezzz...
now you made me scared to visit a doc.
you always have a good twist of your poem witty man
fantastic brilliant write always my dear
BilliegirlNotre-dame de la Salette, Quebec CanadaSep 17, 2011
Your good at cheering people up dont stop your wit is refreshing you are always a good read
Love
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USASep 17, 2011
Kickit, I LOL Great poem. I enjoyed it very much, although at first I was concerned.
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Loved you poem...very funny...it really had me going but knowing you I was half expecting a quirky punchline and you didn't disappoint.
now you made me scared to visit a doc.
you always have a good twist of your poem witty man
fantastic brilliant write always my dear
dont stop your wit is refreshing
you are always a good read
Love
I LOL Great poem. I enjoyed it very much, although at first I was concerned.
kickit.