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Unwishful Thinking

You're dead to me.
and it brings a smile to my
Evil side
Can't watch you breathe
No Breath will ever enter your chest
Again
Even though to me it means every thing to see
Your corpse start to
Rot away
Before my eyes
I can't look away
From this beautiful site

So sad to say.
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you
So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you.

I wish the worst
Possible way to make your heart just burst
Inside your chest
Inside the empty place that's now
A cavity
Bring it all to me
Bring back the life from your buried smile
Even though to me it means every thing
Just to watch you die

So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you
So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for tot

You're dead to me
You're dead to me
You're dead to me
You're dead to me

So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you
So sad to say
So sad to think these evil things of you
Every bit of this is all for you
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Posted: Jul 2013
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IvoryPetals

How I fell.

In a gaze or a sleep,
a piece of me you always keep.
When it comes to you I'm weak.
Trapped in an existence so bleak.
Could you listen to a plea when this weary heart speak?
Place one last kiss on my cheek.
Because i'm wrecked.
No more can be stretched.
Its time to put down your pet.
Do it fast before a second guess cause regret.
They'll sow me up with thread,
after you push me off that ledge.
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Posted: Jun 2013
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Unknown

"The Darkness"

Lightening flashing ominously in the Window,
Trees swaying violently in the rain and wind,
I hear a knocking at my heart's door, as memories from the past start flooding in.

I think of all the people that have come and gone in my life,
And I remember all of my scars ~ all of the scars I had forgotten,
They burn once more with fury,
The pain is unbearable,....I don't know how much longer I can last.

Why had everything happened as it did,....so unfortunately,
Everyone that had meant anything to me had been pushed away,
Either by myself, or by circumstances uncontrolled,
Maybe my unhappiness, this darkness inside me had done it.

This dakness that stands knocking at my hearts door,....nock,....nock,....nock, it pounds, waiting for me to let it in,
Robed in Black, it's skullen form whispers into my ear, and beckens me to come fourth.

It's time, it says: "It's time to go."
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Posted: Jul 2013
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madtat29

Dancing in the dark

A haunting melody drifts through the dark,
Tugging and pulling at strings in my heart,
As I swing and sway the music abounds,
I see the light but move towards the sound,
Slowly as they lower me into the ground,
I'm going to a better place now,
In the empty black is a beautiful song,
Singing of all the things I've done wrong,
Showing what I'll leave behind,
A sad pathetic twisted life,
A horrid world of broken lies,
Now it's not so cold inside,
In a firey room warm and soothing,
This is the doom of my own choosing,
I go to meet my ultimate end,
Come and dance with my friends...
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Posted: Aug 2013
About this poem:
We all choose our own path...
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iluvisis1

HEARTACHE

What have I done??
Why must I pay
for things that
I've not done-no way!
This avalanche of
weighted doom
has locked me in
a small black room.
There are no handles,
doors, or holes-
prolonged detention's
warped my soul.
The jackpot of ill fortune
came
and on the side
it had my name.
The ashes of
the fire left
me burned
and totally bereft.

A little light still
shines inside
after misery's
evil ride.
Do not go out
my sovereign star,
for what I am is
what you are.
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Posted: Aug 2013
About this poem:
HARD TIMES.ALONE IN A WHEELCHAIR WITH BADLY BROKEN ARM.TIMES HAVE IMPROVED SINCE 12/12.
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Israelis122

THE WORKING MANS WORLD

1. Teenagers let loose in the working world
without morals & supervision,
it's just like walking through A jungle
full of wild animals.

2. Many years ago A friend of mine
had told me A true story that happened
in A Taco Bell Restaurant.

3. He replied, "there were two male teenage kids
working late night shift drive through."
"One car had pulled up 2 order,
teenager had looked out 2 see who it was,
he saw some other teenager, [his high-school co-student]
had his girlfriend in that car."

4. Before they had pulled up 2 the 2nd window,
original teenager of that girlfriend,
he got very furious & said,
"my he friend co-high school student,
he has my girlfriend in his car with him!"

5. He was so furious that teenager
took-off his pants & under-garments climbed
upon the big vat of Taco Bell Beans,
he pottied feces falling into the beans,
then climbed off putting his under-garment
& his pants back-on.

6. Then he mixed the new ingredient
into the huge vat of Taco Bell Beans,
then he sold the new mix to them
before they had reached the 2nd,
Taco Bell Window.

7. This was this High-Schooler's way
of handling A fight over someone else
he saw that had stole his girlfriend from him.

8. Get this: the day manager had left 4 the day
& night,
these 2 teenagers were left 2 manage
the late night drive through by themselves.

9. I'm sick & tired of hearing pastors
& preachers, bishops say:
"Lady, U better find A man that has A job."
A job doesn't make A man A man!"
In this story:
They haven't become adults yet
& their teaching themselves
how 2 make people's health sick.

10. If he didn't know nothing about responsibility
when he goes 2 work he will soon learn that,
he will also learn how 2 budget his finances.
I don't agree with it but I see homeless gentile women
walking the streets with their homeless gentile boyfriends.

11. To raise A family the first thing is to have plenty
of finances & A home 4 your wife & kids.
Some form of transportation
2 go back & forth 2 work & home again.

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CLICK ON THIS LINK:
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Posted: May 2
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Israelis122

Love Part-1

1. To A woman That Seeks What's Pure & True,
Here's Experience Shared & What U Do.

2. Get Rid Of A Man Whose First Love Is Money
And His Second Love Is 2 Cheat On U,
After He's Played U He Thinks It's Funny,
When He's Done,
He's Back On His Run,
To Shark The Next Girl Out Of Her Honey and Money.

3. If A Man's Heart Could Hold True 2 His Word
Regardless Of His Handsome Look,
Trueness Of Heart Is Where She Would Be Hooked
And Their Relationship Would Be Booked.

4. If A Man Hates Change
Then His Actions Have Shown
His Heart Is Made Of Stone.

5. There Has Always Been 2-Classes Of Men
In The Dating Realm.
Sharks That Come 2-Ruin 2-Destroy Heading Your Helm
And Dolphins That Come 2-Enrich Heading Your Helm.

6. A Man That Is A Shark At Heart,
He's More Concerned About Yours Not U.
A Man That Is A Dolphin At Heart,
He's More Concerned About U Not Yours.

These Two Men's Hearts
Are As Far As The East Is From The West Apart.
One Man Lives 4-Yours
And The Other Man Lives For U.
What A Huge Difference Between The Two.

7. Talk Is Cheap,
When A Man Refuses 2-Honor His Word,
That His Promise Has Failed 2-Keep,
And his wife or girlfriend begins 2-weep.
[When Ananias and Saphira had lied to God
after they had given God their Word,
they both got smote by God -- Acts 5]
A number of women all over the world have
the same complaint about men as God does the human race
of men:
"They honor me with their lips
but their heart is far from me." Mark 7:6

8. A woman is a human being to
just because she's a female doesn't make her
any less than a human being that she is!
Mr. Man if U refuse 2-be willing as her mom
and dad was spending quality time with her,
24-7, 366-days and nights a year,
then leave her alone!

9. Being legally freshly married to her
that doesn't say nothing yet!
Mr. Man if you're always going out of your way
spending most of your time with your he-friends,
refusing to spend quality with her as her mom and dad did,
then your actions have shown
your heart is made of stone!

A stone never changes
it will aways be a stone.

10. A Sister In The Church Many Years Ago said,
"I'm Getting Married 2-A Christian Millionaire!"
Before Marriage She Worked 2-High Paying Jobs.
Millionaire said 2-Her, "Quit Your Jobs
I Will Take Care Of U 4-The Rest Of Your Life."
So She Quit Her Jobs Before She Had Married Him
Then After She Had Married Him,
He Had A Sudden Change Of Heart He Kicked Her
Out Into The Streets Where She Had Become Homeless.

11. For decades after decades a number of men
had refused 2-pay the money back
they had borrowed from women.
When they go 2-ask U 4-some money again
tell them: "Go find your own job
and borrow money from yourself!"
If he keeps plowing into you
call the police on him!

11. A wounded animal is more fatally dangerous
then way before it got wounded.
If U men force her when she's not ready
and she's still fatally emotionally wounded
from her previous relationship.
Then she can get U on rape charges.
2-Samuel 13:14 Kings James Version
this version mentions the word "FORCE.

Song of Songs 8:4
"I charge you, O daughters of Jerusalem,
do not stir up or awaken love
until it is ready!" [New Revised Standard Version Updated Edition]
This means: "When She's Ready For That She Will Come
and Get U."
You men don't force her
unless U want 2-go 2-A New Playground
called prison?

12. I knew of several people that had gotten married,
well, it didn't go well after their weddings.
These newly married ladies they weren't ready 4-the bed seen,
as soon as she entered his home hours after the wedding,
these men forced them 2-perform 4-them in the bed.
Guess what happened next?
There were 9 women that had gotten married,
5 of them got divorce papers a day after the wedding
the other four ladies had their newly wedded husbands jailed
on rape charges.
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Posted: May 2
About this poem:
1. Yes I'm going to speak in their Language for a little bit.

2. I do not want and I will not accept no hard a** woman to be married to.
If she's that hard she should be married to an Alien on another planet.
I will refuse to be married to a woman that acts like she's
the secretary of war.
Mary the earthly mother of the Savoir she was a simple woman
she always kept to herself and to her husband.
she refused any kind of trouble that was a threat to her church.
She had her grown-up girlfriends she had fellowshipped with in past accounts
nothing wrong with that, which is a good thing.
The research I had done on some of their different races,
you cannot even get too close to them without them pulling out a weapon
on you.
Once they find out you are for peace they will stand down.

3. Adam had royally f*cked-Up God's Earth.
You cannot even take your family out to enjoy the wilderness
without some wild animal wanting to maul you.
The ocean is the same way sharks are horrible
just look at all death they had caused to human lives in past accounts.
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optimisticmeonline today!

YOU AND ME

The screaming hoards that invade, trying to be involved
in this history,,...noone cares about you, noone really
cares, everyone is involved in themselves, take that as
true,.... noone cares about you!.

Easy to leave it at that, but you need more, proof that
you have a life worth living.. so...what are they giving?
a promise, never fullfilled?, words?.... angry ways,,,
and you?....who are you?......


Imagine, you are unique, without the need to be anything
more than what you want to be.....to create what you want
to see?....just imagine....and then.... find yourself....
here!!!!!!!!

What makes reality real is YOU... HONESTLY.. without you
nothing exists,...do you know who you are?.... do you know
how you can take this?...how far?

NICE TO BE HERE WITH YOU.....ME!
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Posted: May 10
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Angeldancer

The Storm In Me

I stood at the edge of the cliff top
Watching, waiting as life slipped on by, through
My fingertips, as I stood, mesmerized
By the beautiful sunset in the sky

Captured in these times ahead,
The sunlight beams as the sun has wed,
A new dawn is coming, transferring to the new night
That wanders in, bringing with it
A sense of the blues as the warning spotlight gleams
Through the clouds, searching
For me, for my own stupidity

As I gaze at the scene unfolding below
Nobody knows which way I'm meant to go
It could be Death for its incessant taking
It could be me wondering why I'm here, just waiting
It could be Life for its endless ways of nagging
Frustrating choices are afoot, no way of telling
What's kaput, as the wisdom hails in from the West
On a startling new revelation

I blink, thinking that I'm too late in reminding myself
And preparing my fracture mind for humiliation
Too late in preparing for the powers that be to decide
My fate, needless to say should I now just wait?

I step back, realizing that the choice is within me
The power that I had has gone with the rightousness of the sun
Knowing that the worst is yet to come, as the storm
And I become One, melding and aligning as the rain
My fears becoming tears of what's collected over the years
As the rain pelts, one by one, I'm sure in knowing what I've done
Or was about to do, the momentum hits me deep within
An aching heart, but I'm not here to win

I'm here on this Earth to be loved and to love,
To learn about what's sent from the Universe above
A collective consciousness, not to throw away in a game
Of chance, where entitled wits don't stand a lasting thought
Where none of my enemies end up being caught
And where love prevails the sense of injustice, serving
The beauty of Karma in all its reigning heights, bringing
A new beginning a chapter unravelled, I stretch my fingertips
To grasp out right, as they flow through the words that are typed
Which remain golden

I watch as those golden words dance in front with all possibilities in action too,
a sense of hope fills me and my soul anew
Reality has changed from one stance to another, wherein
The spotlight has gone and I run away from the scene and duck
For cover, my wits are with me now, as the storm passes by
Its gone in an instant with a blink of my eye.

I realize now that the storm wasn't on the outside raging on
But it was more in the mindset, within the realms of this verse
Words that will call out to many that hope to be heard
An emotional battle of self-control it would seem that
Not everything is as it stands in your everlasting dreams

This consciousness knows that to be true
And its only you who can rewrite the future as to how you want it, too
Whether that's by setting up boundaries and holding to your close
The friends and family who you hold dear the most
Those that you count as soul family too will always be with you
Through the hard times and good, they won't leave you stranded
As some folk ordinarily would

Its time to end this poem now for good or for the bad,
Think of the times you shared between the happy and the sad
Be glad of the memories made for all within and involved
May the problems that aren't problems feel as though they've been solved
May resolutions be found and solutions solve what's not been solved,
May you find hope and peace, happinness, within the depth of your soul
May you not wonder about what might have gone wrong
May you find inner freedom within the words that belong
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Posted: Jan 10
About this poem:
a little inspiration
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optimisticmeonline today!

Another one of those questions one's!

Aint it hard to be YOU, aint it soo hard? If I asked you to write one line on a card, explain who you are? how would you take it? how far? One line to quantify you?, Would it be?, I'm me and I'm glad that I'm not you? Or, I wish I was YOU, thats what I want to be!,,Wow, that could be true, depending on what you see?
decisions you make, paths you take, life will be ultimately lead you where you have to be! So?,,,,,,,,, do you want to be you?,,,,,,,,,, or do you want to be me?
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Posted: Feb 2022
About this poem:
he knows!
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