Last Commented Sonnet Poems (335)

meter for the sake of its merit
to say it's too hard to trick it
i hear, but i just can't bear it
or the poetic law will ticket

while the meter is nice i agree
to write more freely and state
past it's ticking, a rhythm to me
the point one is trying to make

matters much more than the meter
even the unrefined linguistically
can give thought an outlet, sweeter
and be sage to some who strictly

feel demands only fit Iambic box
blankly ticking on metered clocks

© agoodguy2have 2011-03-01

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Q:
If I can hold your gaze and tell you truly
That you mean more than all the world to me

A:
I would smile and reply you softly
that you mean all the universe to me
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Q:
If you would think me brash - but not unduly
Would you accept this heart of mine for free?

A:
I would n’ver deny it finality
No matter how nervy that you would be
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Q:
If I would love you like I love no other
And overcoming all impediment

A:
I would not look for anyone never
You would be the one my heart adores
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Q:
If we could spend our lives with one another
Would you suppose your time with me well spent?

A:
I would give you all my time; moreover,
The rest of my breath would be for'ver yours.
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^_^ MY POEM IS AS FOLLOWS:
(I wanna answer Fellsman's BIG Q! lol thats all...LOL) :P

I would smile and reply you softly
that you mean all the universe to me

I would n’ver deny it finality
No matter how nervy that you would be

I would not look for anyone never
You would be the one my heart adores

I would give you all my time; moreover,
The rest of my breath would be for'ver yours.

here it is, yet another day. my true love has passed away.
finding it very lonely here, without someone i can hold dear.

someone to cuddle with, someone to hold, someone who will make
me feel not quite so old.....
i have a lot of love to give to someone while i still live.

are you out there? I dont know. I keep trying to find you, but we know how that goes....

it would really make my life complete to find you while im still
on my feet.

i need someone to love me, someone to care. i wonder if you are
really out there?

been looking and looking on all of these sites, i search and search
way into the nite.

but no one responds, guess they are just playing games
you dont want what i want. isnt that just the way?

most of you just looking for entertainment on here, not really
looking for one to hold dear.

if you are out there, i dont know where, so i will be alone,
and i really dont care. yes i do, but what else can i do?
but keep trying to find you and not be alone.


nevada lady Nancy

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Across the Miles

A Christmas spent so far apart,
Can still be touching heart to heart.
Though distance great seems misery,
Soft words of comfort hearten me.

Just knowing that there is that one,
Who truly cares, all said and done,
Enough to ring the telephone,
That let's me know I'm not alone.

With friends and family far away,
I'll not be lonely Christmas Day,
For I will know that love has found,
The way to reach the world around.

All precious gifts aren't tied with bows,
The best ones are where true love shows.

what once is said in jest or haste
when all was said of times before
can turn out to be such a waste
and can't be taken back no more

like slings and arrows hit a mark
so too words can injure and bleed
think carefully before you embark
with harsh words misbegotten seed

all the empathy that was lack
when care-filled heart is not shown
can not for want be taken back
only amends can then atone

i am reminded as often is mentioned
speak only kind words as intention

© agoodguy2have 2010-12-07

Cutting back on the drink and the smoke,
The reasons are many, you see.
There's the money and mess and the choke,
It'll make a much better me.

And there's one who I hope to make mine,
Objects to the smell and effects,
Of the vile cigarettes and the wine.
Her wishes I do so respect.

Though withdrawal's gonna be painful,
It's pain I believe I can stand.
Overall results will be gainful,
Of taking my habits in hand.

Addiction's insidious voices,
Try to make you think it's a need,
To make you think there's no choices,
While itself it is trying to feed.

It's my own hands, my lips and my mind,
They're mine to control with my will.
I am sure as I try I will find,
My wish to abstain I'll fulfill.

The beginning is so scary,
cause that's when you remember the past.
At the times when it seems so blissful
is when you hope it all will last.
I took time off from love,
cause I didn't want to get hurt.
But I don't want to forget how good it can feel,
that would hurt even worst.
I've forgotten how to trust,
or maybe I've surrendered.
I've forgotten how to hope,
or maybe I don't want to remember.
Will you save me from myself?
Will you kiss my tears away?
Or will you make me cry,
and offer false promises to stay?
All I ask is for your kisses,
and your arms wrapped around me.
Your lips, your eyes, your smile and strength
are everything i need.

LOTS OF TREES IN THE DISTANCE
THE RIPPLING WAVES ALONG THE SEA SHORE
OVER TO THE LEFT A SMALL BOAT RISING UP AND DOWN ON THE RIPPLING TIDE CLOSE TO A SMALL ISLAND

THE GENTLENESS OF THE RIPPLING WATERS FLOWING IN AND OUT BY THE EBB Of THE TIDE
THE FLUTTER OF THE BREEZE THE SEA AIR
THE SMELL OF THE SEA THE WARMTH OF THE BREEZE THE FRESHNESS OF THE SUMMERSDAY

THE CALM THE SOLITUDE THE PEACFULLNESS OF THE SEASHORE
THE CLEAR BLUE WATERS THE CLOUDLESS SKY ,THE CALMING SKY SHINING BLUE
THE GLARE OF THE SUN HIGH IN THE SKY
BLAZING DOWN ON EVERYONE

THE SOLITUDE THE PEACE ,BIRDS IN THE TREES CALLING TO EVERYONE
THE SEAGULLS CALLS LOUD AND CLEAR CALLING TO EVERYONE

The prince is having a ball
The stepsisters make their grand entrance
Everything is a mystery around midnight
What will happen next
Oh the suspense is building
Fairy God Mother has come and gone
The nasty sisters deperately try to fit in the shoe
But the truth will come out
Honesty is the best policy
True colours are always present
Across the universe we have a different setting
Dorothy and Toto and the Wizard of Oz
The Tin Man and the Lion and the Scarecrow
The dream nightmares moments of silence
Follow the yellow brick road
Oh those golden slippers or were they red
The song goes good with oh them Golden slippers
The journey goes on warp speed Scotty
Here we find Snow White and the seven dwarfs
Sleeping Beauty resting peacefull and content
All is quiet on the Western Front
John Wayne rides them out of town
Clint Eastwood has arrived on the scene
"Make My Day"
"Do you feel lucky"
All is topsy turvy
back to the future again
Warp speed Scotty
My mind has wandered astray
Freedom of thought is a good thing
The Cinderella story has a wonderful ending
The prince discovers his lady and
If the shoe fits wear it
She wears it well
Stunning and beautiful is she
What a journey we have taken
And they live happily ever after

It is interesting how it all starts out
Everyone is excited and moving about
Love is in the air
Show up with a flair
The conversations get deeper in thought
The lies a spider web ready to be caught
some times people need more love than one
therefore they think they must have some fun
playing with a persons heart is not nice
both parties endure what a slice
At the end a story is told
Seems just a little too bold
However the fall has taken place
The fall the despair from grace
Pick up the pieces and go on
like a trendy old fashioned song