ATTN: Native English speakers please.

Is there another way you can interpret this poem other than it's coming from a dead person ?

Do not stand at my grave and weep
I am not there. I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow.
I am the diamond glints on snow.
I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning's hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circled flight.
I am the soft stars that shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry;
I am not there. I did not die.

Thank you in advance. bouquet
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Yes

You can interpret it writed by live person becase dead person don't write poems.
Usha, very nice poem!

The person could be alive and thinking of what he/she can contribute upon their death!thumbs up bouquet
You could think of it as the words of someone who knows they are about to die soon, I suppose. hmmm
I think it is written by someone who faked their own death as they wanted to escape their old humdrum life and live a new life of adventure far away from their old life.
dont waste time at the grave because the dead person is elsewhere....if you see diamond glints in the snow, thats the dead person...you see the glints and think of whom ever...........
I agree with Hoobie.
Also..whoever wrote it could see it as a spiritual experience...their spirit not dying..returning to Source..and being one with Source in every moment and everything.

Very nice poem Usha!
This poem is written by a person who does not hold the physical life in high reguard or as the only life there is, they know that their spirit lives forever..
It is a popular funeral poem as it seems to soothe people who are grieving. It is not a great or esoteric poem and so trying to force a subtext and secondary deeper meaning is silly: after all, you can do that also with a shopping list. Then it becomes more about you and less about the poem itself. So no, it is in deed about death and in dying re-forming as part of nature's cycle...
You seem to know what you are talking about, whereas I do not know what I'm talking about. It is, therefore, with some trepidation that I must respectfully disagree with you. uh oh

I see the poem as being written by someone who has reason to think they may die in the near future. She wants someone who she has a very close relationship with to think of her as not just being a physical body that may be here today and gone tomorrow. She wants the person to think of their shared memories and the things that meant something to both of them -diamond glints on snow, soft stars that shine at night, etc.- as being her also. I think she is saying that as long as all those things exist, then she will also exist in the mind and heart (if you like) of the other person. professor

I really don't see it as a poem about being recycled back into the Universe.
I believe it's written as comfort for those who will feel agony when she or he departs from their lives.

It's her/he's way of saying I will continue to live my life by other wonderful means.
It is supposed to bring comfort to the person standing at the graveside. I like it very much, thanks for posting it. thumbs up

one of the most famous epitaphs has dozens of variations, all more or less on the following 'speaking from the grave' theme

Remember me as you walk by,
as you are now so once was I,
as I am now, soon you will be,
Prepare yourself to follow me.
Merc, snap!
Mourn not my passing. By Harbal

Mourn not my passing when I am gone.
For life has favoured me and I have had my due.
Let the children grow, take my place and carry on,
And so life’s cycle constantly renew.

And when they speak of my earthly dwelling,
The lives I touched, the hearts I fed,
Bid them hush, his story needs no retelling.
What’s past is past, what’s dead is dead.

So when this place I do depart,
This mundane patch of earth transcend.
Allow no grieving in your heart,
I’m only going for a long weekend.


I find this poem incredibly moving. crying
Hoob, that ex-member, Harbal , was indeed poetic.
Yes he was, molly, and much more besides.

I think we should all just take a moment to quietly remember him. sad flower
Hoob, he is already engraved in our hearts sad flower
Hoob, that ex-member, Harbal , was indeed poetic.

I thought his name Hairball.
Oh my U, how hot you are. If you saw the lingam, you'd say---better by far. Am I improving?
The poem, in my opinion, is saying the person who’s passed on is simply stating that he or she in death, has rejoined the earth, wind, rain, the elements all around us that indeed are alive in unison, the earth, elements, Stars, the heavens and all.

Cool! cool
A great poem indeed, and it's coming from a very conscious mind. Exactly how I think about the death.

I was at my parents, sister's and brother's grave only on the day of their funeral. For I believe nothing's there.
What impress me is the attitude of the religious ones, who belive in kingdom come, yet they cry by the gravestones and consider the graveyards the Holy place.
Noone wants to die.
Not even Mr Stringman. laugh

..... so much about paradise up there.
The autumn rain, without rain, could be simply a few water drops, catching the sun, on brown autumn leaves.

To recreate the snowflake, maybe try the white ice from a freezer.
Thank you Molly. hug

This is my daughters videography assignment for yet another Multimedia degree she enrolled in.

I do the homework. Not always but when she is struggling with time uh oh doh
No probs.
Multi-media is interesting, and good for her creative brain
My tasty little morsel, U. In an ongoing effort to keep CS a family endeavor, Please note that I said the lingam, not mine.


You've Heard My Voice (And You Know My Name)
This version sung by Art Podell. Can't tell if he's the original composer. Goes back to mid-'60s Sample verse:

Well now you've heard my voice in the winds of spring
Seen my face where the roses cling
I am the touch that the warm rains bring
I make my home in the heart of everything
In the drivin' rain of a summer squall
When the summer's gone and the petals fall
When the day is done and the night birds call
Then you've heard my voice
And you know my name
usha, I think the reference of this poem is about the spirit that is free from the body and did not die.
Thank you Korn and Chat.hug
I think the poem highlights the author's awareness of his/her personal connection to Nature.
The following is a piece I wrote and posted on Poet's Corner recently exploring this theme:

Connection to Nature
(Author: socrates44)

I am connected to Nature
And Nature is connected to me
From the tiniest insect
To the largest tree
From creatures in the deepest ocean
To those on top the highest mountain
From the tiniest ant
To the largest elephant
The tree takes in what I exhale
And returns to me what I inhale
I consume as food, plant life from the earth
After I die, on my remains they will feed
I am connected to Nature
And Nature is connected to me
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 22

About this poem:
Dedicated to those who experience a direct personal connection
to Nature independent of any explanation.
(Any attempt at explanation detracts from the immediate empirical quality
of the experience which is the focus of this piece.)

Thank you Socrates. bouquet

I think according to the poet death is not dead and is it is not a negative, depressing thing.

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust. We are recycled back to earth and we are present in each season, but not dead.

Now making this into a Vfx movie and writing a script? frustrated crying dunno


Maybe this will help Usha. The link does relate to universal conscious concept in the poem.
Thank you Raphael. Very interesting.

My scatterbrain can't understand much science. But I find it similar to Shintoism.

bouquet hug
Hi Usha applause yay bouquet

Absolutely. They wrote it, therefore they are alive. Dead people do not compose, write then publish poetry. In fact of about 10,000 dead authors (I am sure there are more, but I never met many of them) I know of, not a single one of them wrote not even a single word once they had died.
Ken, hug bouquet

laugh

Hmmm. . I got you. I think.
Badly drawn beat me to it by four minutes, Longfellows is better too.laugh
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