A snow man falling one flake at a time A rain drop falling in a melted pool of ice Sun rays beaming on the white grass A frozen river drifting down stream A green leaf turning golden brown drifting to the ground. A cool sunday morning turns into a hot monday evening. The dancing boats in a bay with the ocean waves. the cut grass once stood tall blowing in the wind a gentle breeze. stop and listen nature is at it's best.
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
it is the small things in life that keeps everything going. if your problems seem big look for small solutions it only takes just a little to change direction.
That is one true piece I do know if I am not a peace with myself I go for a walk for hours and see things we just pass over in our busy lives. So I have been down this walk and feel at peace
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKMar 6, 2011
This is a beautifully thought out and written piece, CJ
Thank you Andrew we tend to look for the big things to change our lives but it is the small things that is needed to start a change/way of life. it is this we miss out on when we overlook the small things. this is my conclusion and my conclusion i have found out from my own circumstances. now i feel like i can make my life the way it is suppose to be.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 6, 2011
The dancing boats in a bay with the ocean waves. the cut grass once stood tall blowing in the wind a gentle breeze. stop and listen nature is at it's best.
So true, such wise words, if only all the peoples of the world could think the same. Beautiful poem.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 6, 2011
Love the imagery and the philosophy... an enjoyable read...
Thank you SCatlyn for your comment. If we break our problems down to one snow flake I think it will be easier to solve our lifes issues then if taken the whole entire snow man. I guess it's just another way to view things.
Comments (16)
CJ
we tend to look for the big things to change our lives but it is the small things that is needed to start a change/way of life. it is this we miss out on when we overlook the small things. this is my conclusion and my conclusion i have found out from my own circumstances. now i feel like i can make my life the way it is suppose to be.
with the ocean waves.
the cut grass once
stood tall
blowing in the wind
a gentle breeze.
stop and listen
nature is at it's best.
So true, such wise words, if only all the peoples of the world could think the same. Beautiful poem.
Regards
Bill (Fellsman).
If we break our problems down to one snow flake I think it will be easier to solve our lifes issues then if taken the whole entire snow man. I guess it's just another way to view things.