Natures Best

A snow man falling
one flake at a time
A rain drop falling
in a melted pool of ice
Sun rays beaming on
the white grass
A frozen river
drifting down stream
A green leaf turning
golden brown
drifting to the ground.
A cool sunday morning
turns into a hot monday evening.
The dancing boats in a bay
with the ocean waves.
the cut grass once
stood tall
blowing in the wind
a gentle breeze.
stop and listen
nature is at it's best.
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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
it is the small things in life that keeps everything going.
if your problems seem big look for small solutions it only takes
just a little to change direction.

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Comments (16)

schawalski
so true kickit ,
Redex
That is one true piece I do know if I am not a peace with myself I go for a walk for hours and see things we just pass over in our busy lives. So I have been down this walk and feel at peacethumbs up
caroljoyce
This is a beautifully thought out and written piece,
CJthumbs up
Ladybee42
lovely words - thumbs up thumbs up
kickit22
Thank you all for your wonderful comments.. Kickit22.
andrew149
Nice write, good read kickit...Good to see you back.....Andrew...cool
kickit22
Thank you Andrew
we tend to look for the big things to change our lives but it is the small things that is needed to start a change/way of life. it is this we miss out on when we overlook the small things. this is my conclusion and my conclusion i have found out from my own circumstances. now i feel like i can make my life the way it is suppose to be.
Odette67
The dancing boats in a bay
with the ocean waves.
the cut grass once
stood tall
blowing in the wind
a gentle breeze.
stop and listen
nature is at it's best.

So true, such wise words, if only all the peoples of the world could think the same. Beautiful poem. teddybear
Fellsman
Love the imagery and the philosophy... an enjoyable read...

Regards

Bill (Fellsman). cheers
kickit22
thank you for all your comments. your thoughtful thoughts soo much appreciated. kickit22
jazzy75
The best for sure...nice writecheers
kickit22
Thank you Jazzy
jeddah12
a poignant write from you you dear,,very true and good to see yah,,thanks for sharingkiss teddybear cheers
SCatlyn
Great poem - esp. love the description "a snow man falling, one flake at a time" thumbs up
kickit22
Thank you for your comment Jeddah. Glad you like it. Good too see you again also.
kickit22
Thank you SCatlyn for your comment.
If we break our problems down to one snow flake I think it will be easier to solve our lifes issues then if taken the whole entire snow man. I guess it's just another way to view things.
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