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fjamesj9701

Learning To Fly

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With the determination of an eagle I stand upon the highest cliff
Feeling the wind beneath my wings as I await for thermal lift
My eyes are focussed on the world below, a gentle breeze against my face
As the morning sun consumes the dark I claim this day and all its grace
At the speed of light I freely fall miles above the earth
With my faith flying above the clouds and like a jet my engines burst
My spirit breaks the barriers of sound over shadowed decades of pain
Above empires of decadence I reign through greener fields and grassy plains
Beneath the dirt the coals of hell are rising to burn me from the sky
I may never leave this world behind, but I'm still learning how to fly

~ JJF~
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Ignorance is the curse of God; knowledge is the wing wherewith we fly to heaven.
~William Shakespeare~
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trurorob

My Soul (Paloma Challenge)

My soul seeks its final destination
Is ataraxia so far beyond my vision?
This journey has taken me so long
Psiturism, I sit and await your song
I look upon the clouds of Nacreous pearl
Is my destiny so linked to Cosmogyral?
Do the storms of nature rule my future?
Aeolian! Aeolian!
Let your soothing breath sooth my suture

How long can I live in reminiscence
Am I not to find that eternal bliss?
I know I have scorned to be reverent
But are not my passions so less fervent
Yet the tenuous threads that bind my sin
Seem to me to remain ever gossamer thin
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
Bit late, but I always take my time!!, thanks for a great challenge my friend.
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cherryreggae

Humanity challenge smmerwind(can do)

Can do!!
As I arise to face a new day
The governments in foul play.
Taxation is a total drain
Crime is a money gain
Pollution clouds my, cell brain
Healthcare is a crying shame
Love is a constant pain
Hatred may never end.

You ask me what I can do,
I measure life as you do to
We can't get away from it
Life is basically, what it is
I can only pursue, my own
Happiness.

Blaming, fighting, fear & pain.
We all know it, there's nothing to gain.
No sense in crying establishment blues
Hunger, disease, poverty, love, hate nothing new.
It only feeds the anger, we fuel
It's human nature, win or lose
Chose not to be like them
Love unconditionally that's your tool.

You ask me what I can do,
I measure life as you do to.
There's only so much, one can do.
When time to give,
gift with a open heart.
A peaceful demeanor,
is a pure start....
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
Change is slow. Although I (we) contribute, in our own way.
I am a realist!!!. No man is a island!! This is the world we live in....for now!!
Corruption & greed is a crucial part in how we help ,love, respect, & value one another.
Thanks for the challenge smmerwind ,,best I could do...
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jazzy75

peach

your smell,
your juice,

drip down my chin,

I swirl my tongue,

capturing,
licking,

dewy drops,

off

the crease of lips,

savoring nectar’s
sweet taste,

I close my eyes,
in reverence,

planting
the seed,

deep,

deep
within
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Posted: Aug 2010
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trurorob

Epitaph

Do not weep, do not sigh
For I have been granted
All my wishes
On the day you were born
I once said
That to catch a rainbow
You must grasp
All the colours
Of life
The fish never swam upstream
Without a tale to tell
The tiger did not roar
For meaningless purpose
I as one person still left life’s imprints
On the track that
Had been worn down by
So many that had passed
This way before
And so I left, my purpose fulfilled
Allowing you to greet the new dawn
So smile at your grief’s shedding
For I wore your hearts on my sleeve
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
for my children!
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thesunandthesea

ARE YOU A FLIRT? LOL no I'm not!!!

I am just a girl
Living in a big big world

I love 'LadyBee'
I want her to be LADY of ME :")

I love 'FELLSMAN’
I want him to FILL ME

I love 'ANDREW'
I will change my name to AND YOU
Now we will be ANDREW AND YOU
(which it means Andrew & ME)

^_*

Oh-O I love ‘Macduff’
Would you be my MC Love?

Oh that’s ‘Boyshchrm’
Does he know he make my heart alarm?

ahh Whatta sexy ‘Grandad’
If he is not mine that would be sad!!!

hey wassup 'Mike'
Would you mind being my Knight?

^0^

Hello, 'hedistuff'
A smile from you is not enough
May I also have your heart?

I also love ‘Marikia’
I want her to be near

Awww That’s sweet ‘Niah!’
I fear I can’t live without her

My princess ‘SWAN’
I miss you from night until dawn

^_^

I can’t choose who’s the best
But I’m afraid to lose ‘Pilgrim”

Oh that’s ‘Moonontide’
Would you be my moon this night?

Come over here ‘Jazzy’
My arms long to hug you badly

NOoooo don’t smile at me 'byfaith'
It makes me think you are “my faith"

^___^

Nice to meet you 'Jihadmeathello'
you know you had me at HELLO >_</

oh o that ‘Trurorob’
If you were a cop
I would be a robber
Now you and me will be COP & ROB (ber)

^_*

Excuse me ‘Stillframe’
Haven’t we met?
May I have your name?

Oh-O 'SCatlyn'
I meet you I need aspirin
Cus you make my heart SPIN!!!

^_*

Mr. 'Mitch' Excuse me?
Are you free tonight?

Oh that ‘Serpico’
May I know is your heart available?

awwww hi there 'GNJ4u’
If you let me kiss you
That’d be so cool

'I am who I am you see'
Here’s my heart for you, you see?

ahh—My sweet lady 'Readerofsouls'
Can you read my soul sweeties?
It’s keep calling ROS ROS
Instead of SOS
^_*

Wait a minute ‘lonewolf’
Please come stay in my heart
you’ re approved.

Hello ‘earlgreytea’
I long for you come over me

Hi ‘a good guy to have’
Are you really a good guy to have?
If so, May I have you?

Howdy ‘Bentlee’
Can you come and sit next to me?

^0^

Mr. ‘magykmir’ please wait
Look at me and tell, do you believe in soul mate?

Excuse meeee, Mr. 'mcradloff'
Is there an airport nearby??
or is that my heart taking off?

OH-OOO Mr. ‘Swade’
I see Swade I scare
I scare to love you


LOL I’m so funny
Whom should I pick to be my hunny???!!!!
this Valentine’s Day!!!
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
LOL I am happy to write it and you MUST enjoy reading it!!!! My COMMAND))) LOL I'M SORRY I'M KIDDING))) >_</// I just love FEBRUARY))))) AND I LOVE YOU ALL)))) ^_______________^
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boyshchrm6

Valentine

Be mine............................................................V'lntine
Please be mine.............................................A Crimson stein
Wont you be my Valentine.................... I don't want a Frankenstein
I will ask until I'm finally blind............thoughts of you within my mind
Wont you be my main Squeeze..Wont you if I ask you double please
You know I dont want a tease. Ill even give you some pink cheese
Won't you kiss me now geez. I wont give you a deadly disease
I promise that it will please me at least if you don't sneeze
Won't you be my Idle Vine, a kind of strawberry wine
If you would that would be so possitively fine
I'll even give to you an elegant dine
Flowers as my constant sign
Be my Crimson Baby
Yes not maybe
Won't you
Huh!




Won't you be my Idle Vine
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
Be my Valentine and bring some Idle Vine
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Bentlee

~of CENTRE attention~

ME ME ME ME ME ME ME, it's ALL bout Me, DON'T care bout you, it's all bout Me, MY DAY was good, NOT askin bout your's! ME ME ME is all bout Me, I'M feelin fine, don't care bout you, ME ME ME an I'M doin great, don't care bout you. . . WHY YOU want ME to ask such things! it's all bout ME an not bout you. . . really I'M selfish, don't you dare point it out! ME ME ME, oh poor pitty ME, the ME ME ME'S from a hardened heart I CAN'T SEE, oh poor pitty ME, I give to others when I'M too blind to see..~
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
Hmmm, whats life brought to your table to share?
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jazzy75

congruency

you
heart . . . . . . . . . . beating
breath . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . deepening
awareness . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . creeping
body . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . tingling
consciousness. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . expanding
silence. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .exploding
stillness. . . . . . . . knowing
me
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Posted: Nov 2009
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Unknown

My Warrior Princess

I miss you my warrior princess, I miss your beautiful feminine way and your point view. I am fighting life's battles all alone and without you. I have simply lost my way, bring me back to the center of our souls our home, where I want to stay. The void in my heart and soul will be filled, my life will start anew.

I miss your tender touch, the smell of your skin, and your natural sweet perfume. How I lost you, how I've missed you, I haven't a clue. Now I stand here looking up at the moon wondering where you are in complete and utter gloom. I realize now, that no one can fill my heart my soul and make me glow like you.

A beam of light cries out and comes forth from within me, a ray of love from the very deep recesses of my soul, it's desire is to reach you and to be complete and whole, it reaches far, far out into the universe and where ever you may be. This beam of light and love will never stop until it reaches it's goal. Come to me my darling, come to me my love end my missing you, make me complete and whole.

Rubendario
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Posted: Jul 2009
About this poem:
I was thinking about my soulmate when writing this poem.
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