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trurorob

Last Poem (Two versions)

I dreamt that I had penned my final poetic verse
Like a petal
That fell to the ground
That had floated around the Universe
Looking for somewhere
Perhaps to rest its weary head
Or a leaf, twisting and turning
Distraught in its final journey
Seeking solace in grounds bitter welcoming
So, unlike all the trees
I envisaged the finality of life’s falling grace
Like them, my history would leave no trace
But when the Lion roars
Because it failed to catch the Boars
Then it would seek
To come again on another day
For nature has no reasoning
To ever understand the meaning of finality
For what may be relinquished today?
Tomorrow anew will find time to replay
But I will not weep
For knowledge of mortalities sleep
But how I do envy them their ignorance
To live with no penance
For what I know to be the truth
That is left untold
To all the trees and the majestic Lion
Therefore I shall continue to write,
Until I know I will meet my Zion



Last Poem
I dreamt that I had penned my final poetic verse
Like a petal
That fell to the ground
That had floated around the Universe
Looking for somewhere
Perhaps to rest its weary head
Or a leaf
Twisting and turning
Distraught in its final journey
Seeking solace in grounds bitter welcoming
So, like all the trees
I envisaged the final felling
Left with a story not for the telling
But when the Lion roars
Because it failed to catch the Boars
Then it would seek
To come again on another day
For nature has no reasoning
To ever understand the meaning of finality
For to it
What may be relinquished today?
Tomorrow anew will find time to play
But I will not weep
For what I know to be the truth
That is left untold
To all the trees and the majestic Lion
Therefore I shall continue
To write, until I meet my Zion
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Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
The understanding of mortality, I sent versions to friends who came back with their favourite version, yes and they differed. personally I dont know which i prefer??.
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Unknown

~~~To My CS Friends~~~

I COME TO CS TO SEARCH FOR TRUE

LOVE. AND I NEVER THINK THAT I MEET

MANY GOOD FRIENDS HERE, FRIENDS THAT

READY TO EXTEND THEIR HAND WHEN I'M DOWN.


MY CS FRIENDS ARE THE ANGELS ON EARTH THAT GOD

SENDS, YES..I ADMIT THAT BEFORE I HAVE THIS THINKING

WHY? A BIG QUESTION IN MY HEART ..BUT IT COMES

THE DAYS WHEN I HAVE MY UPS & DOWN HERE...THIS

FRIENDS...COME TO ME AND GIVE ME A HAND TO

KEEP GOING.. MY CS FRIENDS THAT I NEVER MET IN

PERSON, BUT I FEEL THE KIND HEART FROM EVERYONE OF THEM..


MY CS FRIENDS I DONT KNOW HOW TO THANK YOU ALL,

WORDS IS NOT ENOUGH TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS FOR HAVING

YOU WITH ME.. AND I THANK GOD TO SHOW ME THE CS SITE

NOT ONLY FOR SEARCHING A LIFETIME PARTNER..BUT HE

SHOW ME THAT GOOD FRIENDS IS HERE AND,I NEVER LONELY

AGAIN..I HAVE MY FAMILY MY CS FRIENDS & I WANT

TO THANK YOU ALL FOR BEING HERE WHEN I'M DOWN & LONELY..

WHEN THE TIME IS COME.. AND I NEED TO LEAVE THIS PARADISE..

REMEMBER MY FRIENDS..YOU ARE ALL IN MY HEART & MIND..

I NEVER FORGOT YOU ALL..Ahh!! MY CS GOOD FRIENDS IS MY

FAMILY... I PRAY THAT SOONER OR LATER, WE FIND WHAT WE ARE LOOKING

FOR...MY CS..FRIENDS.. MY TRUE FRIENDS... I LOVE YOU ALL..

FRIEND FOREVER,,

YURIMA~EDNA,
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Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
This is for my CS friends..
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QuietStormF

Broken

A framed print upon your wall..
A still shot of the two of us..
Sitting close together, on a bench,
Near the falls..
And to the casual observer..
I'm sure we must have seemed the perfect pair
But if you look a little closer..
If you took the time to ponder..
The naked eye..
You'd see a picture of me without you..
A broken picture in a broken frame..
And if you look a little closer..
You'd see just a broken frame.
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Posted: Sep 2009
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boyshchrm6

Love Virtually

My mind and eye each inch caress and trace,
From my computer as I view your lovely face.
O'er hill and dale I've searched my life yet nothing more appeals.
Reason has surpassed me now the virtual world seems real.
The shrouds of dread and emptiness will drape upon my head
..and my anxious brain and craving heart will leave infinity unsaid
Should technicial problems prevent my communication with thee.
This feeling that has come o'er me has usurped reality.
I beseech you virtual world go on so love can surely grow.
Equinox of time set forth please do not deprive me now..
Quite rightly give me fortitude and prove t'is not surreal,
Until I find out if the golden hearted creature truly is for real.
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
The potential for Virtual
Feelings to become real.
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boyshchrm6

My friend

He comes to me when I feel low.
He looks and senses that somehow.
He gives me reassurance when I feel alone.
He never angers and never moans.

He's been my friend and confidente,
For 15 years and not been paid a cent.
I value him above all my friends.
We don't fight so no need for amends.

He loves me unconditionally,
And I love him as he loves me.
No other has so consistently
Seen me thru troubles and adversity.

When I am blue he knows that too.
He keeps me company just we two.
When I am feeling tired or sick
He comes to me and shares a lick.

If I'm restless and in bed cold
He marches in oh so very bold.
He wraps around my feet and toes
And I really think he truly knows.

He never goes and he never strays.
I'll hold him dear til his final days.
He doesn't have any bad habits,
Unless you consider chasing rabbits.

If you wonder who would be so loyal
Tis my cat that treats me royal.
He is now old and getting thin
But a true and tried friend he's been.

Occassionally complains, seems to talk,
Only because I forget to clean his litterbox.
l'll love him fiercely 'til he's passed away.
And will grieve untold in my own way.
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Posted: Dec 2009
About this poem:
Pet theme
This is why we love our pets
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Unknown

Lie To Me

Lie to me,
Help me in illusion,
Lie to me,
Let me get delusion.
Lie, softly whisper in my ear...
I know truth...
I need it not to hear.
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Posted: Sep 2009
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Bentlee

"Behind the red Door"

who'd dare knock
for behind's the unknown


a quest to muster the strength to see
oh it's not what you think
only what you feel
for the feelings good
the think is scarey
too close to the past
to be brought to the now

there's a window in the door
hmmm slight glimpse you'll see
blinds open one glide
eye to the glass
on the wall ahead . . . . . . . .
a mirrored eye from your side of the pane ~
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
Introspect? Imagine, sitting here an it's the colour of my back door, an write it into a verse lol.
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Unknown

(To be with You )

No road would not far for me if it leads me to you.
Distance would be nothing, If our hearts honest to one another..!!

If every word I said made you smile..!!
I would say forever!!
If every song I sang make you happy..!!
I would sing forever..!!

If counting stars above the sky to be with you..
I would count without tire to be with you !!

If dreaming is only way to be with you forver !!
I would never wakeup and open my eyes...
(Just to be with You)
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Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
I wrote....
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andrew149

DRAGONS BREATH!

These days, I seemed almost always down,
My brow creased with an almost permanent frown,
I had almost given up on my latest story for good,
Wrapped round my warm coat, pulled up the hood,
Headed for the beach,
Maybe, for some inspiration to reach.
The waves were rough, sparse clouds rushing, blowing up a storm,
Wind getting brisker, though it seemed to be pulsating, eerily warm,
I remember feet lazily kicking the sand,
A short distance from the stormy waves crashing on land,
…BANG!
I involuntarily jumped!
…BANG!
Heart thumped….Blood pumped,
My ears rang, my senses surrendered,
Surrounded by the unearthly scream of air being rendered,
Stinging, blinding sand…. Shadows, flying, fleeting,
The sound of…..Flapping….Beating,
An eruption of flame, glowing coal red eye,
Defying the dark cold of the starry night sky.
I was struck dumb, immobile, completely smitten,
For…Exactly as from my imagination I had written,
There…..THERE!…
Sitting on the beast’s back, wand held high in the air,
With starry eyes and floating hair…..
He looked at me….A full on stare,
I gasped!….dreamweaver himself!
He nodded…..A smile crossing his lips, full of care,
Then suddenly, the feeling that the time had come,
To leave this realm and to wakefulness succumb,
Then the mental wrench,
Ozone stench,
My dream,
Does seem,
To die…. A sudden death…
………………..
No… Wait……
The eerily warm pulsating breeze, there, though fading,
A false memory?……..
No…..Realization growing…
A smile….A knowing….
The Remnants of Dragons Breath!
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
AHA!....dreamweaver returns....lol....Andrew...xxx
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trurorob

Mystery

It’s amazing you know
How long my body has remained
Such a mystery to me
I had a heart once
But it bled to death
Eyes that once saw
As clear as a bell
(Why do they say that?)
Are now blurred and raw
Skin that was smooth
Hangs like wrinkled washing
And my eyebrows have decided
To have a mind of their own
Whilst my head goes on thinning
My ears have new growth
My nose is getting bigger
(I suppose it’s a thirst for knowledge?)
And my hands
That never seemed to frown
Are gloriously speckled brown
I remember the days
When I was six foot two
And my feet had size nine shoes
Now a size eight slipper will do
I shall not talk about teeth
For we have parted our ways
And the magnificent browns
Have all turned to greys
But I will soldier on
Though I think my rifle is empty
Still nothing to fire at
When the browns turn to greys
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
good job I am still a hunk then!!
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