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Love Scale
On a scale of one to ten
you might choose number
seven-
But if it's perfection
you want then ten you'll
hunt
Now there's a bit of heaven-
Eight is fine but not quite
nine and five will never do-
Three and four is just a bore
and if you're drunk you'd
settle for two-
And when the rating is done
there's only six and one
and you know that's way to low-
So add it all up on the scale
of love to see what the numbers
show~
you might choose number
seven-
But if it's perfection
you want then ten you'll
hunt
Now there's a bit of heaven-
Eight is fine but not quite
nine and five will never do-
Three and four is just a bore
and if you're drunk you'd
settle for two-
And when the rating is done
there's only six and one
and you know that's way to low-
So add it all up on the scale
of love to see what the numbers
show~
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Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
Just having fun with numbers..lolMy dream woman..
When I first saw your radient
smile my heart melted like
butter
But you had a boyfriend then
and he was your only lover
Your brunette hair sculpted
down your cheek..you seemed
a princess to me
But to hold you in passions
embrace was never meant to be
The months rolled on and I
watched you walk from your
car to your house
I lay in bed with a terrible
dread but grieved like a lonely
mouse
You found another abuser though
good looking he was
Oh, how the pain ripped me night
and day as I dreamed of your
sweet love
In the mornings you'd smile and
wave as I drove off to work
Yet my broken heart took years
to heal knowing you actually
married that jerk~
smile my heart melted like
butter
But you had a boyfriend then
and he was your only lover
Your brunette hair sculpted
down your cheek..you seemed
a princess to me
But to hold you in passions
embrace was never meant to be
The months rolled on and I
watched you walk from your
car to your house
I lay in bed with a terrible
dread but grieved like a lonely
mouse
You found another abuser though
good looking he was
Oh, how the pain ripped me night
and day as I dreamed of your
sweet love
In the mornings you'd smile and
wave as I drove off to work
Yet my broken heart took years
to heal knowing you actually
married that jerk~
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Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
True story that happened to me in 1995. A girl that lived four doors down from me named Debby. She was one of those super friendly to everybody type people and never saw the impact she had on me..Loving You
If I could love you
more I'd steal the
morning star..
And on every mountain
have I climbed to seek
you from afar..
When I reach down into
your crying heart I turn
your night to day..
And when your trembling
knees are to weak to stand
I chase your fears away..
'Oh, yes, my love! I treasure
you more than the finest choice
of gold..
I breathe on you my sweetest
love such as never can be
told..
Though you see me not I'm
holding you up though my
spirit from above..
And every twinkling star
that smiles on you can
never match my love~
more I'd steal the
morning star..
And on every mountain
have I climbed to seek
you from afar..
When I reach down into
your crying heart I turn
your night to day..
And when your trembling
knees are to weak to stand
I chase your fears away..
'Oh, yes, my love! I treasure
you more than the finest choice
of gold..
I breathe on you my sweetest
love such as never can be
told..
Though you see me not I'm
holding you up though my
spirit from above..
And every twinkling star
that smiles on you can
never match my love~
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Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
A spiritual write~Unfinished poem..
I leave these few lines
for you to complete
Whether you're swimming
in wealth or living on
the street
Only you hold the key
to your hearts sweet
chime
Only you can write the
words to your souls true
rhyme
So here is your story..x..
the one..x..you'll write
..x...Christmas eve..x..
and..x..special night~
for you to complete
Whether you're swimming
in wealth or living on
the street
Only you hold the key
to your hearts sweet
chime
Only you can write the
words to your souls true
rhyme
So here is your story..x..
the one..x..you'll write
..x...Christmas eve..x..
and..x..special night~
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Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
A sort of fill in the blanks...x...Ego
Ego is the flower on
a dead mans grave
Ego took the bullet
from the unasumming
brave
Ego struts high, much
higher than most
But the lowliest of
the low put an end to
that boast~
a dead mans grave
Ego took the bullet
from the unasumming
brave
Ego struts high, much
higher than most
But the lowliest of
the low put an end to
that boast~
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Posted: Dec 2011
Post CommentOld Man Winter
I'd rather dip summer
rainbows in my coffee
than put on old man
winters coat~
I'd rather Mr. Frosty
have a melt down and
let me go fishing in
my boat~
I'd rather my thermastat
say 90 than 45 below~
I'd rather be swimming at
bikini beach than shovel
this foot of snow~
Wish old man winter would
chill just once so I can
warm up this old house~
Cause if he had to pay
my electric bill he'd be
on the next train south~
rainbows in my coffee
than put on old man
winters coat~
I'd rather Mr. Frosty
have a melt down and
let me go fishing in
my boat~
I'd rather my thermastat
say 90 than 45 below~
I'd rather be swimming at
bikini beach than shovel
this foot of snow~
Wish old man winter would
chill just once so I can
warm up this old house~
Cause if he had to pay
my electric bill he'd be
on the next train south~
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Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
I don't play well in the cold..lol.Where's Mr Fellsman?
Where's Mr Fellsman?
Did he fly the coop?
Anyone with some info
Please give us the scoop
Is the poet master on
permanent leave?
I'm lost for words I do
believe
Did he over sleep or
wander from home?
Let me know if ya read
this poem~
Did he fly the coop?
Anyone with some info
Please give us the scoop
Is the poet master on
permanent leave?
I'm lost for words I do
believe
Did he over sleep or
wander from home?
Let me know if ya read
this poem~
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Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
Haven't seen Mr. Fellsman in a while..just wondering where he might be..My love
You said,'You'd meet me at the
rivers edge where we could talk
for a while..'
Yes, I knew what you meant, as
I made that drive..but inside
me was a smile
You probably thought we'd sit
and talk til I felt you were
quite at ease
But I knew in my heart of hearts
it was your soul I needed to please
I let you speak for a minute or
two but the fire was already
burning
And when I held your face in the
palm of my hands that passion was
ever churning
I couldn't heal the hurt you felt
when your lover had left you cold
But perhaps I could show you a
better way if only to listen and
to hold
After an hour or so of warm embrace
I kissed you on your cheek
Perhaps when your feeling stronger
and gathered yourself a truer love
you'll seek~
rivers edge where we could talk
for a while..'
Yes, I knew what you meant, as
I made that drive..but inside
me was a smile
You probably thought we'd sit
and talk til I felt you were
quite at ease
But I knew in my heart of hearts
it was your soul I needed to please
I let you speak for a minute or
two but the fire was already
burning
And when I held your face in the
palm of my hands that passion was
ever churning
I couldn't heal the hurt you felt
when your lover had left you cold
But perhaps I could show you a
better way if only to listen and
to hold
After an hour or so of warm embrace
I kissed you on your cheek
Perhaps when your feeling stronger
and gathered yourself a truer love
you'll seek~
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Posted: Dec 2011
Post CommentDOUBLE TAKE
I LOVE YOU TWICE......... I LOVE YOU TWICE
TOLD........ TOLD
THIS IS HOW THIS........ THIS IS HOW THIS
TALE UNFOLDS........ TALE UNFOLDS
THIS IS TRUTH........ THIS IS TRUTH
IT AIN'T NO FAKE........ IT AIN'T NO FAKE
HERE'S TWO IN ONE........ HERE'S TWO IN ONE
IN A DOUBLE TAKE~........ IN A DOUBLE TAKE~
TOLD........ TOLD
THIS IS HOW THIS........ THIS IS HOW THIS
TALE UNFOLDS........ TALE UNFOLDS
THIS IS TRUTH........ THIS IS TRUTH
IT AIN'T NO FAKE........ IT AIN'T NO FAKE
HERE'S TWO IN ONE........ HERE'S TWO IN ONE
IN A DOUBLE TAKE~........ IN A DOUBLE TAKE~
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Posted: Dec 2011
About this poem:
A lil fun with a re-write...Heart Damage
There's a healing in progress
for every stab to the soul
There's a sacred text being
written as broken hearts unfold
For every kindness unanswered
a reckoning must be met
And as the seeds of love are
planted
A flower shall we see yet~
for every stab to the soul
There's a sacred text being
written as broken hearts unfold
For every kindness unanswered
a reckoning must be met
And as the seeds of love are
planted
A flower shall we see yet~
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Posted: Nov 2011
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