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Ravensgold

Beautiful Land

She lives in her own little fairytale land
full of colourful rainbows,
Its a beautiful land
Chasing the butterflies, laughing with glee
So wild and untamed, in a land so free
Yes, she lives in a beautiful fairytale land
Where the sun always shines through the rain
Theres candy stripe trees with chocolate leaves
And mountains of icecream on peppermint streams
Yes, its a beautiful land
A beautiful land.
As she smiles in her sleep at night
Of what does she dream
Are there white fluffy kittens or caramel creams
Just as long as that little light shines oer the bed
There are no worrys and cares in that pretty head
For shes lost in her beautiful fairytale land
Lost in her beautiful land,
Her beautiful land.
Oh its beautiful,when your just two years old
So much to do and everythings so new
You light up my life with your hair of gold
And that's why,.. these words are for you
As you run through your beautiful fairytale land
Just remember that I love you
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2013
About this poem:
This is part of a song I wrote as I watched my then two year old daughter skipping through the long grass some twenty six years ago...I am glad to say that she (as an artist) still lives in that fairytale land where anything is possible.
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cafetwo2010

Porcelain dolls (for Marikia)

With her head in hand she awakens
to another day of emptiness..
She is like her porcelain dolls she
keeps on her window sill, with a
fixed expression and colorfully
painted cheeks and clothes..
Time and the painfull years had
glossed over the yearnings of her
little girls heart, and the woman
she'd become had left her eyes
stained in hopeless tears
In early sunlight she'd pick up a
porcelain doll and imagine a lost
happiness
She'd look to the heavens and whisper
her timeless prayer, 'when shall it be me
when shall my turn come?'
But cruel years had turned her heart into
bitter stone and her dolls seemed to mock
the beauty of her soul.
Then one night she dreamed a dreams dream
Her lover spoke to her in a souls song..
He said, 'Oh, my beloved child, I would touch
the apple of your soul and fall on your lonely
heart as the spring rains carress a thirsty
field
I would clothe your neck with rainbows of
love such as the world has never seen..
And my love, when time has breathed its
last..I will lay my head upon your naked
legs and with bleeding roses in my right
hand we shall walk through heavens gate..
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2013
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Catfoot

A New Found Love

All forgotten are all those days
when my life was but empty plays.
Before you came my life was dark
but now it is like walking in a park.

Lately I think of you all day long
and my life is just a happy song
The greatest thing about loving you
is knowing that you now love me too.

Yes, I shall catch you when you fall
even when I am not really big and tall
I will guide and lead you by the hand
when you are lost or stuck in sand.

But darling, I’m not always strong
and sometimes I also get it wrong.
Many times I too will lose my way
And will need you every single day.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
#3
For Sharon
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darkhorse555

mystic rose

Oh mystic rose
magically blooming flowers
enchants within
one mind
opening up softly
from the heart
happiness salted
from ocean dew
sweetly dripping joy
golden honeydew kisses

Petals unfolding
holding beauty
in her loving cup
feelings velvet soft
caressing emotions
touching deeply
tenderly speaking
in a whispering voice
echoes endearing

Flying on wings
silently fluttering
a beautiful fragrance
breathing upon
the soul
landing beautiful
in one sweet aroma
adoring love
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
kisses a beautiful angel with a smile
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Unknown

reflections

I may not contain
the realms of your reflection
neither would you give me
the honor to be owned
and yet in your mind
I want to belong
and in its brilliance
get drowned
many a thousand times.

with your strong hands
you already fathomed
the bottom of my heart
and mapped my soul
with your piercing
and penetrating eyes
and
I am well aware, the world
is your playground.

you are nobody's fool
succinct and straight to the points
your exuberance
intoxicating at times
extends here and beyond
like a raging bull
stomping the ground
I stand on.

I know and I understand
when it comes to substance
my heart and my mind
dry like the arid sand
but you made me feel crowned
just by wanting to know
that I made it home
safe and sound.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
Dream. The power of the mind.

Thank you all for your reads and valued comments.

SR
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darkhorse555

moonlighting love

looking upon
a misted moon face
her silver fingers
draw on loves energy
touching feelings
gently caress
softly whispering
to emotions

beaming on destiny
one shadow
romancing night
sweetly dancing
lighting up beautiful
a dream

in the touch
of lovers hands
they all but hold
this love within
to behold you
deep inside
this soul
my angel
i do love
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
looking into the night sky hands held out for my sun shining angel the dream
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Spartacus2012

Beautiful Liar

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You lead me on
seeing my life was incomplete
whispering those promises
dripping honey sweet...

Now I am to understand
we are to be just friends
alone in my house of sand
contemplating inevitable end...

Such a comfortable liar
weaver of broken dreams
fantasier magical bean buyer
a dark siren mystifier...

Falling I must confess
I won't buy them anymore
demigoddess in little black dress
bedroom white liar galore...

I lived your beautiful lie
being the hoper and the prayer
looking for rainbow in our sky
and for you the proclaimed soothsayer...

But I became ensnared
in my self created fire
by such a beautiful liar
and a victim of my own desire..
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
They say the truth has its own form of absolution after much wine..
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Mizzy4

That Little Piece Of Magic.

Last night while in my wandering dreams,
I found a path that lead into Wonderland,
A wise little fairy at the old wooden gate,
Beckoned me fourth with her wand.

"Come hither" she said "no need to be shy",
"With me you won't get lost",
"To enter here admission is free,
Only back on earth there is cost".

A place of trees and flowers so bright,
Filled with Love and happy times,
An ocean of bluebells swayed in the breeze,
And the fairies all danced to their chimes.

I said to her that from where I hail,
We don't possess wands or potions,
Nor can we sprinkle some sparkling glitter,
To quell our sorrowful notions.

"In your reality" she explained "the same magic exists,
In the twinkle of a ladies eyes,
Not in complicating a tangled mess,
But in the giving of a simple surprise".

"Too much emphasis on possessions you place,
For money and property greed,
Simply hug and allow your hearts collide,
From vanity grow Love's seed".

"Before you leave I have a small gift",
As she rummaged in her brown leather pocket,
"Take care as you go and heed my advice",
Then she opened an old golden locket.

She said "now Mizzy it's time to return,
Find Love, for Love you must",
With an outstretched arm she presented to me,
A tiny handful of her magic fairy dust.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
Magic lies in simplicity.
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Nuwahri61

chilled...

Under the casuarina tree
where the sand meets the sea
and the gulls drift in the breeze
as they live a life of ease
where the whitecaps show the way
of the wind having it's say
and different colours allow the sea
to show the depths there may be
and the clouds march along
the horizon big and strong
where the warmth of your touch
relaxes me so much
i feel the coils unwind
as i leave the week behind
and drift into that place
where time has no grace
amidst my thoughts and dreams
i am relaxed and so it seems.......
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014
About this poem:
spending the arvo relaxing ...........
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Mizzy4

" Love's Lament "

A poem of Love I ne'er can sing,
Two hearts depart in broken bond,
Lost in the flutter of an Angels wing,
Her teardrops fell on a Love so fond.

In sad reflection I reminisc,
Of lustful days in long meadows unseen,
Our lips locked hard in fervent kiss,
We danced like butterflies on a sea of green.

Caution flung into the warm Summer breeze,
The broken chains of passion unleashed,
Bulging veins on swollen lips the moment was seized,
This Love never end...our spent bodies beseech.

Alas....our Paradise not destined to last,
We loved & lost and cried in vain,
Unending sorrow of a Love now past,
I stare across the meadow and taste the pain.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
The corner has some great love poems,
Unfortunately for me this is as close
as I can get.
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