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Nuwahri61

OZ …..Haiku Challenge

The stillness of cloud
A breathless silence of wind
Warmth of winter sun


A moth in night light
A gecko’s dinner tonight
Through the window pane

Lazy are the days
Awaiting the suns warm rays
Upon gazebo
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Posted: Jun 2021
About this poem:
Just having a crack ……
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Oceanzest

Haiku 2

soldier on the road
cold parchment letters from home
time gathers desire


implore Morpheus
regale me with restful dreams
sacrifice the day


symbols in circles
riddles of a nation state
fist on the lectern
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Posted: Jun 2021
About this poem:
575 syllables again, seems limiting but creates discipline grasshopper
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Yankee4you

Troubles Behind (Haiku Challenge)

Sunshine in the rain
Peaceful is this life again
Breeze on the water

Green as a wet fern
Freshness as a mountain kissed
Blue as summer skies

Run away with me
I will help you find your way
Going home again
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Posted: Jun 2021
About this poem:
I love Haiku!!
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Yankee4you

Forever Love

Fresh as a flower
Love that doesn’t fade with time
Blowing in the wind
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Posted: Mar 2022
About this poem:
Experimenting a little more with Haiku (nature) versus Senryu (feelings) .....5-7-5 format. Using a very structured format when writing poetry often helps to create such creativity and emphasis on words denoting feelings......amazing how descriptive language becomes....like music almost following conventions.
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Oceanzest

Haiku 5-7-5

cool marble relief
nasturtiums in a vase
passage of the day
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Posted: Jul 2017
About this poem:
ah to walk the cool corridors of elegance in Summer
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manicmike

since u left

since you left my hearts grew weak ,since you left its hard to speak, above this earth you now fly why you left I know not why, Summers day is a lesser glow, I'm even sadder amoung the snow, An angel you where here on earth, but taken way I find no worth. Free my soul and mind I pray from remembering your lovingness every day. since you left I feel less glad to heaven I am a little mad. since you left my days are unfilled as each memory I'm my mind I find a chill. Forever lost to my touch I anger long and suffer much. since you left a world darkens more as angry tears flow ever more. since you left.
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Posted: Jan 2017
About this poem:
was an ode to my loving best friend with was taken too fast from me I only hope no one else would ever have to exsprience such loss.
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Unknown

True Beauty 5-7-5

Not Shallow But Deep
Inside Glowing and Breathing
Love And Life To All
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
Real beauty radiates from within.

Can be read as one sentence.

Thanks for reading.
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shadow1950

Water, Sun, Clouds

Water

Water flowing down
babbling, full of joyfulness
giving life to all

Sun

Soul of life are you
blazing ball of sparking fire
lighting up our world

Clouds

Gentle clouds drift by
casting shadows over all
blanking out the sun


written 08/21/2013
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Posted: Aug 2013
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socrates44online now!

Haiku 1 (diamonds in the snow---)

what new plant is this?
flowering bees this morning
and butterflies too


at the roadside
solitary flowering weed
vision of loveliness


look! in the garden
the poinsettia is bringing
its first Christmas


walk softly please
streetlights are making
diamonds in the snow


blown in with the wind
hummingbird nuzzles a bloom
and is blown away again


perched on the treetops
iguana closes its eyes
soaking in the sunshine


the new doorkeeper
of this deserted house
one mister spider


loud feathered thud
- flight into eternity
deceptive glass pane
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Posted: Jul 2013
About this poem:
For those who may not know, Haiku is a form of Japanese poetry. The standard structure consists of three lines in which the first line consists of five syllables, the second has seven syllables and the third has five syllables.
"Haiku is a finger pointing at the moon. If the hand is bejewelled, we no longer see that to which it points." The idea is to draw attention to what is being said and not to the words used to say it.
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socrates44online now!

3 Dog Haiku

dog breaks wind in sleep
awakens and sniffs the air
then bolts from the room


dog in playful mood
spinning around and around
to catch its own tail


dog sniffing the grass
searching for the perfect spot
to put down a poop
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
dedicated to dogs and dog lovers
(the funny side)
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