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Most Commented Shape Poetry Poems (108)

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Unknown

Path Forever

It’s been a very long road that I’m still walking down
This path is forever, in till I have reached town.
Though I can’t predict the future
This one I knew
It was a fact that I had down packed yes…this one was true
You were always here. Like a leaf you returned.
I made some mistakes
But as they say its life,
You live and you learn.
I feared taking the wrong path
Yet I had no clue
When I went in a different direction
This road led straight back to you.
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Posted: Nov 2012
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Unknown

The Beauty of Nature

The beauty of nature I am. I am beautiful and everything that follows beautiful. I am simply a smile, a blessing from God. My beauty stands out and attracts positive things. My beauty shines within me bright like the stars gleaming at night. I am beautiful and everything that defines beauty. Like the flowers blooming in early spring or like the stones in a diamond ring. Beauty is nature all within. The sky, the trees. The grass, water, and wind. The Birds and leaves ocean and sand. That I am and will forever be. The inner and outer beauty of me. Love, joy, happiness. What a beautiful thing. The beauty of nature.
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Posted: Nov 2012
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Unknown

my pet dog

If you have or had a dog
who has made you laugh,brightened
your life.And every day has silently eccepted
your tears without judgement,snuggled with you forgiven
your faults and loved you unconditionally

dogs are a gift some dont deserve
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Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
i love my dog and i see other people treat their dog with no love at all it makes me sad for the poor dog
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Omg666

I like you

I Like you for who you are
Not for what you can be
Likening you is the best thing ever happened to me
With you my world is at peace just because you like me
And not for what I can be
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Posted: Apr 2017
About this poem:
Went you like someone simple don't be afraid getting to like that person well probably be the best thing you have ever done in your life.
You see that person everyday an because of you are you afraid to approach the person to tell them I like you
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Knhaylah

My Valentine by Knhaylah

I know my heart would break
But I had to let it be so
Cause if I didn't let you go
I know my tears forever will flow
And with fear of the pain that is to come
I strengthened myself for that hurtful blow
It was hard, so hard to let you go
But I wore a smile, so no one will know
And all the vanities of life couldn't dress the pain
The most beautiful gowns I wore in vain
The truth, no matter how long, could never hide
Cause when I said goodbye to you, a part of me had died
A broken mind, a broken heart, a broken soul
To ease the pain, I wanted to turn back to you.........
A heart that was so cold
I stopped and think and began to comprehend
That with or without you this pain has no end
So dream me a dream for a very long time
Not in this world or the next, you can never be.............
My Valentine
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Posted: Feb 2017
About this poem:
The inequality of feeling two persons may have for each other
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jitch1022

u put a lable on it

Under lieing depression,has me locked down in my room,is it your lieing or my depression that has watered my garden of confusion,i should pull the weeds that are growing between the crops,feel better all ready just taking some direction thats movin away from you,under lying depression things seem to turn into one,where are my blue swede shoes,i will make some consessions that will help me make it through the night,maybe i should just count my blessings,enjoy mornings first light,cant put a lable on it,under lieing,depressing isn't.
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Posted: Oct 2014
About this poem:
Lies.there impact on a soul
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ImagineLove

Hope with Love

Close your eyes and see
All the suffering and pain
In a world we hope to gain
A feeling of security
With visions of surety
Preached with maturity
Promises of purity
Tainted by obscurity
Filled with animosity

Can you fathom
Fill the chasm
In a world of pain
While trying to gain
The promise of a better life
Free from strife
Yet cutting like a knife

I want to spread my arms
Hold you and breathe your pain
Look into your eyes
Feel your tears, hear your cries
If I could I would
Make the pain cease to be
In a world filled with misery

Know the depth of your soul
Have a conviction, a role
Is there something you would die for
Ceasing to be ever more

I want to see the tears
Feel the tears and cry with you
I want you to know I will die with you
I feel your pain in the depth of my being
One human to another, a sister or brother

Agreeing, seeing, guaranteeing
Not fleeing, only freeing, are you seeing
Loves deep understanding
Challenging the lies that became belief
That has filled us with grief

Holding you and feeling your soul
Standing, expanding and commanding
No misunderstanding, not withstanding
A crash landing
Making us whole
The love that should bind
Not blind, only kind

The meeting of our hearts
Masters of fine arts
Taking our minds
Are we blind
We are mankind
Stop digging for gold
We need to be bold

Stop telling stories renowned
So cold, all foretold
Controlled and two fold
Out of the protective fold
Life paroled

Like a boat run aground
We’re bound
So profound, downed
Meanings that confound

Lost in the allusions
The millions of exclusions
Taunting with confusions
Conclusions that bring delusions
Stop the intrusions

I want to cry with you
Hold you
I want to feel your pain
Really feel your soul
Nothing to gain

I want to hold you
Die with you
Feel your tears
Feel your fears

Look into your eyes
Take away all the lies
Meant for our demise
My sister, my brother
We need to love each other
Like a mother

Close your eyes and see
Imagine what could be
Feel the pain in that moment
It’s extremely potent, when
There is nothing to gain
In feeling the pain

Love someone and hold on
A new world will dawn
Filled with promise and glory
As we write humanity’s new story

Nothing to gain, destroy the pain
A world where love reigns
Breaking the chains
Humankind will remain

Suffering derailed
Love prevailed
Forever more
We soar

Close your eyes and you will see
This is how it has to be
For you and me
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
I wrote this poem on Saturday as I was overcome with the emotion of comforting the people suffering from recent tragedies around our world. I wanted to write through my tears of compassion.

"Our human compassion binds us the one to the other - not in pity or patronizingly, but as human beings who have learnt how to turn our common suffering into hope for the future." Nelson Mandela
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Unknown

Eternity...

I see clearly now....
Now i see...
From the tunnel of Light,
I'm willing to carry this Sacrifice...
This cross...

To the Dark and Nothingness...
In the name of love... In the name of Loss

I'm not afraid,...
Trying not to collapse,...
under this cross...
I'm not afraid...

I'm slowly dying,...
To know i have to go..
I know i was trying...
Quick,...

The time is running, yes it has...
It's only left for me to go,...
To carry it to the dark,...
To become something,... That was...

The time will heal all the scars?..
maybe... but not my fears...

I see clearly now...
Remember my shadow...
In the name of Love...
I love you...
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
About the Love, who gets ripped by Life...
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Unknown

The Moon (Shape)

......................................................................Together beside
...................................................... the Earth it strides, gives
.............................................. ebbing and flowing to the
................................. ....tides. Worshiped as the
...................... .......goddess on high, opposing
.................... the sun god in the sky. Through
..............myth andlegend a story told, of
.......... a dance with the sun we can
....behold. To Selene and Phoebe
...the Greeks will pray, Romans
..homage to Luna and Diana
.pay. Máni runs behind his
sister, Sol to chase. Followed
.by Hjúki and Bil in their place.
..A dead völva attests to this eternal
....pursuit, to cloaked Odin who’s future
......he can’t refute. Walked upon by just a
.........chosen few, This celestial body with awe
............we view. With shimmering colour ..and
.................changing shape, it darkened side and
...................cratered scape, as sure as the sun will rise,
..........................the moon declines as a compromise. To
....................................return once more another night, in
...............................................this satellites journey through
.....................................................................................the night
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
In the poem Völuspá, a dead völva recounts the history of the universe and foretells the future to the disguised god Odin. Hjúki and Bil are the children of Máni and together they are the three phases of the moon in Icelandic and Norsk mythology. I had forgotten this story which I read as a child until I started writing this poem.

If this post badly like i suspect it might, it is suppose to be a crescent moon.
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Unknown

Love Affirmation

look baby what you did to me,
ohh, dont worry,
You didn't break me. No,
"Sweetie",You completely destroyed me,

Those beautiful eyes of yours,
put the city lights in shame

-Were so cute-
&& there'll be those awkward times,
when we look at each other,
&& I remember how things use to be,
No matter what,
I still feel your existence around me.
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
For you from yours
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