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morgen90210

Betrayal Fall

You stole my loving wife,
Bruised her body blue and black,
I never laid hands on her,
Watched you made her cry every night.

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Broke my son's leg,
coz he didn't listen,
Nor follow your orders,
He's only a teenager.

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Terrorized my little girl,
She will never trust another stranger,
I saw fear in her eyes,
She will never face that again,I promise.

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Following your every move,
Every waking hour everyday,
Time for us to meet comrade,
And just to be certain I'll stabbed your heart.
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
Betrayal Rise
Betrayal Fall
Betrayal Ire

Don't look back. .
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morgen90210

Betrayal Ire

I am the ghost of your past,
The one you thought buried at last,
You never watch your back,
And I'm here to clear my debt.



It's cold and raining,
Just like the last time we met,
Surprise to see me in the flesh,
By the way how's my family Jack?



What happened, you seem all white,
Oh yes, You left me stone dead,
But somehow God got some other plans,
Coz you've been treating my family bad!



You took away my family,
For some piece of stupid contract,
How much was I worth?
For you to betrayal your comrade!
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
Betrayal Rise
Betrayal Fall
Betrayal Ire

Time for a Rain check! ! ! Pay back
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hedistuff

more meaderin'

in the morning you greet me with a great big smile
that's wider than a country mile
makes me feel so good
when wrapped around me are your loving arms
I feel your tender charms
so good, just like it should
every single moment is a new tomorrow
yet time stands still the whole day through
forever happiness, no time to sorrow
it's true, whenever I'm with you
you've got me whistling a happy song
humming to myself the whole day long
out in space, silly grin on my face
I shoulda known that we would finally come around
be on top of that same firm ground
we'll share the shoe...to stand...inside...the same place
we'll travel forever, our lives together
for we'll have our own fair weather
to see us through...it's true
yeah you, and me
...can we be just like
happy puppy on a warm spring morning?
able to soar high as we can sing
or just to look in the eyes of each other
...and say everything
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Posted: Dec 2013
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Stedan

Saying Goodbye

You watch their eyes and look for the smile,
each day you held them close, touching and holding,
telling yourself, that love is worthwhile,
no cross words, not even a scolding,

You held their hand and snuggled close,
each precious moment treasured,
kissed their cheek, lips and neck, trying never to be gross,
actions of affection given but never measured,

Each day you loved their smile and eyes aglow,
you asked most times if they was happy,
hoping these are really her feelings they show,
talking slowly and not being snappy,

Communication at times was hard,
Even though you understood every word said,
reading you was like a card,
you never told me what was in your head,

Our Golden rule number one,
to always talk things through,
we both agreed this to be done,
somehow this got lost in you,

Even though my love I shared,
washing, cleaning looking after you,
it is obvious you never cared,
to say I did not love you, made me very blue,

Now your gone and loves not here,
how many more have you done this too,
I shall not hold on to your memory, even though it was dear,
there was never any us? just only you.
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Posted: Dec 2013
About this poem:
Saying Goodbye and letting go.
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Unknown

love flow

.A little love note.or even a quote that makes your heart glow show and let it flow share it with someone you don't even know.let the love grow. its like a seed u sow and let it grow for all you know what you sow will always flow.
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Posted: Dec 2013
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hedistuff

liberi

may our footfalls carry us tandem friends
ever fenced only by beginning and end
green fields of forever lie before us and we are a great sythe
never to reach an end to our thrashing, thus never to die
though be of deep golden grain or lush valley clover
sweet bounty will fill as our sate uncapths over
with no predilection of path, we’ll leave no trail
any thought of intercept could never prevail
for long ago caution was tossed overboard
we’re of no hesitation to fall on our sword
preservation lends itself only to thrive as free
without that, it’s no place for you and me
as loose of all rein was ever our vow
no past and no future, our destiny now
but we’ve become twisted, racing to unwind
we sought to have all, leaving nothing behind
as there is no beginning, there can be no end
our wiles may but lead to a land of pretend
that has captured and held us with nothing to gain
only ending up leaving us life without aim
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Posted: Dec 2013
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MaxxHeart25

A beauty...

A beauty..
like the one you read about in fairy tales,
A beauty..
One who has a heart that can tip all the scales.
A beauty..
To see the heart that lies within the darkest tragedy,
A beauty..
Who can screen out the worst to bring back the greatest memory.
A beauty..
To look up at the stars or to push you forward,
A beauty..
To give you something to put you're mind toward.
A beauty..
To be my heart
A beauty that can show me how true love can be the missing part
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Posted: Dec 2013
About this poem:
One day I hope to find this missing piece
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mcradloff

DARE

Drug and Alcohol Resistant Education
The police officer comes into the 6th grade classroom
He educates the children on the dangers of drugs and alcohol
A man serving time in jail for drunk driving gives his speech
This is what can happen to you if you drive drunk
You can lose your family to booze
You will get drunk every day and lose
You will lose your dignity
You will lose your health
You will lose your wealth
So I still wear the shirts 18 years later
A gift from the first cop who came to my classroom
Did it help the kids who are now approaching 30?
I am reading a book on how most charities are ineffective
How most waste the money that is given to them
Is DARE effective in curbing abuse of drugs and alcohol?
Or does it encourage some youths to start up these abuses?
It doesn't really seem to matter
If it feels good then do it
Regardless of the results
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
Just started reading a book on the ineffectiveness of most charities. As this is the time of year to give to charity, I found it very interesting on how the number of charities has grown since our founding with the pilgrims. They now number 1.4 million.
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hedistuff

muddle

can still recall the moment
I saw it coming from her eyes
an all too clear reminder
I could be taken by surprise
so I merely closed my eyelids
turned my back to block a view
I felt that I must walk away
better that than be subdued
a lifetime spent in paradise
was just a glance away
yet I kept my eyes tight shut
and far away I stayed
could illusion carry me?
all the lying to myself
is my act avoiding her...
just an act of selfish stealth?
could I be just a hypocrite?
in a bed that I had made
or am I only of reason?
a man who's just afraid
though she is all I've ever wanted
with indifference shall I don
with my collar up, ignoring her
quite soon enough, she'll just be gone
so I went upon my way
without her in my life
little did I have to say
just another day of strife
but still sometimes I wonder
with lonely gaze into the sky
what really may have happened
.....had she but seen into my eyes
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Posted: Nov 2013
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Reyuniq

Naan Aanathai

Ora vizhi parvaiyal ennai othukkiyavale!
Nirkinren anathai!
Unnai parththa muthal nodiyil...!
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Posted: Dec 2013
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