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The unspoken words

In the realm of so many words,
I stumble and fumble, lost in the blur,
But when I catch a glimpse of your tender face,
All my eloquence fades, I'm left without a trace.

And in the quiet moments, when the world falls away,
I hope you'll always hear, the words I don't say,
For sometimes the silence speaks louder than sound,
In the language of love, where true hearts are found.

So let's revel in the spaces that words cannot hold,
as we find a deeper meaning in what is untold,
For in the unspoken whispers, our connection is found,
my words may fail me but my heart's song is loud.
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Posted: Sep 2023
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Magic

We all have a bit of magic,
Coming from within,
You can see it twinkle in an eye,
or a wicked little grin.

Think of all the people,
For whom life is so grim.
they drag themselves from day to day,
with no vigor and no vim.

Just living in the moment,
Makes life a thrilling ride.
Life begins anew each day,
like the changing of the tide.

Don't ever let life grind you
Down to a lifeless bone.
let your inner magic lift you,
before all your dreams have all flown.

Live life as an adventure,
every second filled to the brim.
If you live life just for the moment,
Pure magic will shine from within
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Posted: Jul 2022
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Amber Hawkes and the Dragon's Fire

Red hair worn in plaits, always with a smile.
Amber Hawkes, the female wizard with a spellbook on her hip
Her eyes meet with the dragon's glare, and she's ready for the fight
No fear in her heart, her magic will ignite


Amber Hawkes, with her spells of fire and ice
She'll take on any challenge, and she won't think twice
Through the trials and the flames, she'll emerge victorious
For Amber Hawkes is the hero, always glorious


The dragon's breath was fierce, its flames were hot
But Amber's magic shielded, and she fought with all she's got
The battle raged on, as the dragon continued to roar
But Amber's spells were stronger, and she couldn't be ignored

Amber Hawkes, with her spells of fire and ice
She'll take on any challenge, and she won't think twice
Through the trials and the flames, she'll emerge victorious/ For Amber Hawkes is the hero, always glorious


The dragon let out a final roar, as it fell to the ground
Amber stood victorious, with no need to look around
For the spell book on her hip, and the magic in her soul
She's Amber Hawkes, the wizard, and she's unstoppable


Amber Hawkes, with her spells of fire and ice
She'll take on any challenge, and she won't think twice
Through the trials and the flames, she'll emerge victorious
For Amber Hawkes is the hero, always glorious.
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Posted: Jul 2023
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Song For Cordor

Cordor what will you do when winds blow bitter cold,
When your children are dying in the streets?
Do you turn blind eye?
Will you walk on by?
Past mothers of dead babies as they grieve and they weep.
Oh Cordor,
This is my song for you
Oh tell me Cordor
What are you gonna do?

Cordor what will you do if I tell you,
you grind poor people into meat?
If the truth be told,
I see lots of gold,
But I still see people dying cos they cant afford to eat
Oh Cordor,
you know what I sing is true.
Oh please Cordor,
Tell me what you're gonna do

Cordor make new plans to lend helping hands
Or it will be your utter ruin and defeat
I foresee a day
when there's barricades,
And the blood of the innocent will flow around your feet
Oh Cordor
Do what ever you can do
Save yourself Cordor
Dont let my words come true
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Posted: Sep 2021
About this poem:
Nerd time
I play Fantasy RPG games
In one D&D setting I play a Character that is a Bard
He writes and sings about the social evils he see's in an attempt to make the powers that be open their eyes to the suffering of the common folk of the city
So this song is really by by Allwyn Marcher
When he first performed on the Streets of Cordor, it got him beaten thrown out of a city by the city guards.
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NOTHING LEFT

You think you may see me,
but your eyes only perceive my disguise.
What you see is a mask,
I look out, from behind at the word,
with careworn weary sad eyes.

You’ll only see what I want you to see.
Never the real me inside.
I’ll never show you,
my expressionless face.
Just a mask,
always wearing a smile.

No more feelings
They have all gone
Nothing left on the inside

I stare down into the abyss
It stares back up at me
Both us sharing the nothing inside
That I hide so nobody can see
No more feelings left
They have all gone
Nothing left here on the inside

Outside I’m laughing
Inside you won’t hear a sound
My mind is a prison,
Where no trace of emotion is left
behind to be found

No means of escape
There is no way out
No doors not even a key
Sit in darkness and silence here inside my head
Nobody can set me free

No more feelings
They have all gone
Nothing left on the inside

I stare down into the abyss
It stares back up at me
Both us sharing the Nothing inside
That I hide so nobody can see
No more feelings
They have all gone
Nothing left here on the inside
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Posted: Nov 2019
About this poem:
Not much to say about this one. It's dark but I like it
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I RISE

You can write me down in history
With your bitter, twisted lies,
trying to stamp me to the dirt
Still,
like fire,
I rise.

Just like moon and sun,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes high springing
I Still,
like fire,
Arise.

Did you want to see me broken?
Bowed head and lowered eyes?
Shoulders fall like tea-er-drops,
Always,
like fire,
I'll rise.

You can stab me with your words
cut me with your eyes,
Try kill me with your hatefulness,
I shall,
like fire,
Still rise.

Does my truthfulness upset you?
should I be despised?
I'll dance like i'm a diamond
Forever
like fire
I rise
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Posted: Oct 2020
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CHANCE, SERENDIPITY, DESTINY OR FATE?

Seems like just yesterday, I wandered astray,
Caught in life's bittersweet journey, lost in disarray,
But lucks gentle hand intervened on a fateful day,
And there you were, my newfound heart's array.

In a crowded place, where strangers fill the air,
Your eyes thought they saw a spark so rare,
Senses heightened, the world faded away,
your words, to me spoke more than words should say.

With every exchange, a simple truth unfolded,
The immediate connection, relentlessly emboldened,
We're charting new territories, casting away doubt,
The undeniable pull, there's no turning back now.

Chance serendipity, destiny or fate
Our souls collided, time suspended in space,
A cosmic dance, an intoxicating trance,
Oh, that lucky meeting that bestowed our chance.

Together, we now dance on this tightrope of fate,
Bathed in the glow of love, forever we'll vibrate,
Oh, lingering serendipity, our hearts forever entwined,
Maybe testament to the beauty that destiny designed.
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Posted: Aug 2023
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Hopeful Hearts

The veil uncertainty, covers mist-shrouded road of time
Two souls entwined, united in a common rhyme
With hopeful hearts they venture forth, treading paths unknown
Seeking solace and a destination they dream to own

Shadows and echoes chase their every stride
Their souls intertwined, on this journey side by side
Through the daunting obstacles they boldly push through
Feeling the weight of the world, yet pressing on they do

Whispered secrets of the past, they reminisce and recall
Beneath the moon's gentle glow, memories enchant and enthrall
Yet future beckons, a destination yet unseized
In search of everlasting peace, their hearts do plead

The road is long, and trials abound
But they walk hand in hand, steadfast, unbound
Through treacherous valleys and mountains high
They stumble, yet always together they rise

In this tapestry of life, they harmonize their hopes
Trading whispers of encouragement, helping each other cope
As the stars flicker above, casting celestial light
They feel a resonance, a bond that's pure and right

Time will test their fortitude, so it seems
But with steadfast hearts, they pursue their dreams
In the shadows they persist, their spirits will not yield
Together they travel, longing for the same revealed
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Posted: Aug 2023
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ON THE TELEPHONE WITH YOU

Don’t wana disconnect,
Never end this call.
You dialled up my heart’s number,
Made it beat like a dance hall,
I try to play it oh so cool
but I’m your devoted-fool
Emotions high
I just fly
everytime I’m talkin’
on the telephone with you.

In so very little time,
I’m surprised to find
You’re the first and last thing
on my mind
Wonderin’ if what you see in me,
is the same I see in you.
I can’t believe its happening
Is it really true?

Don’t wana disconnect,
Please dont end the call.
You dialled up my heart’s number,
Hit it like a cannon-ball,
I try to play it oh so cool
but I’m your devoted-fool
Emotions high
I just fly
everytime I’m talkin’
on the telephone with you.
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Posted: Nov 2019
About this poem:
this may be getting a more added to it and slightly rearranged, but for now I'm done
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habib02

lost

_In my room looking at the ceiling...
_No willing to be cured. such a bad feeling...
_And the dreams in the tears are sailing...
_I miss something may complete my life's meaning...
_The sadness fill my heart completely...
_Maybe i'm not sad. Maybe i'm the sadness personally...
_What's wrong with me. I was wandring there happy like a bee...
_unfortunately, no body could listen or see...
_So, i write, and those words are the bandage...
_Of my heart when it was damaged...
_In that life i'm a tourist. They are my baggage...
_My source of hope and courage...
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Posted: Jul 2023
About this poem:
i wrot this one when was at class i was feeling down being a writer is something very helpful if you are sad
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