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Beachman61

Fools Gold

Saw a sad dog so thirsty I gave him my water.
Got a big smile today from my neighbours baby daughter.
Everything's in colour. Clarity so sharp.
This is the effect that you have on my heart.

Laughed with a stranger at the bus stop this morning.
Found a four leaf clover with the new days dawning.
Everything is possible. Nothing's too hard.
This is the effect that you have on my heart.

Amid raised voices lay the silence of the future.
The silence of fools gold is hollow. Come over (where)
Everything's so beautiful. These words I impart.
This is the effect that you have on my heart.

Broken hearts swim alone, lonely in yesterdays tears.
So swim to my island. Sand pristine. Love clear.
Everything's so ready. It's next to you. Not far.
This is the effect that you have on my heart.


© lsd
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Posted: Apr 2013
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Beachman61

Thinking About You

on your darkest of days with your lonliest of thoughts.
when love seems to have dried up at it's source. (and)
time for others may be is a luxury you just can't afford.
remember, someone should be thinking about you.

words can be given freely yet they can cost the most.
broken hearts in their wake should hurt dare encroach.
but ah the magic certain words can bring, especially bespoke.
remember, someone might be thinking about you.

whether they be 3 streets over, or a million miles away.
someone wonders how you are, and cares enough to pray.
in time they might be there with you, smiling for your face.
today, someone is thinking of you.


© lsd
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Posted: Apr 2013
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mcradloff

Going to the Bathroom

I like to slack off
I really do
I brownnose the boss
And compliment him too
My coworker are so jealous
Of all the work I don't do
They don't know the game like I do
Cause I'm going to the bathroom
And I'm gonna sit on my throne
Going to the bathroom and I'm gonna slack off
Going to the bathroom and read the newspaper
Going to the bathroom I love
Morale is low and I know why
Cause I'm always in the bathroom
They have to do their work and mine
I don't care cause I make the most pay
It's not how hard you work but who the boss likes
That's why I'm going to the bathroom
And I'm gonna sit on my throne
Going to the bathroom and I'm gonna slack off
Going to the bathroom and read the newspaper
Going to the bathroom I love
That's right
I'm going to the bathroom I love
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Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
A parody of Going to the Chapel. I had this coworker back at a job I had up till 2006 and he would do this constantly. He did get written up once, but still continued to do this. I figure he worked about half his shift and the other half did stuff like this to get out of work and he was the highest paid. He was also my favorite coworker which shows how bad some of my coworkers were.
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fjamesj9701

Taenia Solium

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I cannot deny
All of this anger in my veins
Its bleeding out with all this pain
But you cannot disguise
All of your faceless apathies
They're all swallowed by your travesties

So why should I even try
If you say you hate me
Than why won't you let me be
Because you only want
What you cannot have
But then you killed the love we had

No More
I push you pull
I stay you go
No More

I cannot describe
What its like to feel this drain
As you infiltrate my brain
But you cannot define
What it means to live in peace
Instead you blame your hate on me
So while I rot inside
I let you get the best of me
But I wont let you kill the rest of me
Because you cannot live my life
Although I know you'll try
But I would rather die

No More
I push you pull
I stay you go
No More

GIve me a knife to cut you out of my throat

*JJF*
4/14/2013
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Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
(Lyric) I posted this once before, but figured while Im on the subject of parasites I would stick with the theme..Too far off the deep end?
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Jonroan

" Desparate Love " by Jonroan

If you loved Me,
You know what I would Do,
Anything you Asked,
Or told me To;
I'd give you my Money,
I'd sing the Blues,
I'd live in a Ditch,
And go without Shoes;
I'd shave your Legs,
And suck your Toes,
Sleep Naked in the Rain,
When the Cold Wind Blows;
I'd scrub your Toilet,
I'd mop your Floors,
And I'd never, Ever,
Fool with those other Whores;
But, most of All,
I'd give you my Heart,
And swear by God,
We would never Part...
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
I wrote this when an old girlfriend put me out on a snowy night in Arkansas. I showed it to her the next day, after I had thawed out, and she put me out again. I called her a B****, to which she responded, ' Thank you ', just as sweet and sincere as can be. She really was one, by the way.
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fjamesj9701

My Lucky Silver Dollar

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Yesterday was a little dismal and today is still a little gray
But I'm hoping before tomorrow comes that you will stay

We can lay under the moon and look up at the stars
We can talk about how long it takes to fly to mars
Or we don't have to say a word and just meditate on love
Give our bodies to the heavens when hell has had enough
The first second that we met wasn't true romance
She was an angel in the dark so I had to take a chance
You see Ive been searching this whole world just to meet a girl
One who knows the lyrics to my song or one sung by The Cure
Then my compass pointed in her direction when I wasn't searching for affection
I was looking in my wallet to see if I had protection
She was dancing to her own beat- - Letters to Elise
Striped pink and green socks pulled way above her knees
I could see it in her eyes they were different in the light
She wasn't standing in the sun, but I knew she was the one
So I grabbed a shiny dollar, yes a silver dollar
I didn't have any cash just my lucky silver dollar
I held it in my teeth as she came down to me
I dropped it down her top and she kissed me on my cheek
She then said lets get out of here I really hate this atmosphere
I said let me tell my friends while I finish drinking up my beer
We jumped into my truck I said my Porsche is in the shop
She laughed and said that I was funny and she thinks thats really hot
We pulled up to my house and barely made it through the door
She started tearing off my clothes and threw them on the floor
We made our way down the hall bouncing like a ball
Knocking down my family pictures and breaking holes into the walls
I kissed her on her cheek, I kissed her on her head
I kissed her on her navel, and then I kissed her on her neck
I kissed her everywhere, but we never made it to the bed
And when we were laying there breathing this is what I said

Yesterday was a little dismal and today is still a little gray
But I'm hoping before tomorrow comes that you will st..............

The next morning I woke up naked on my rug
There wasn't anybody there just a lot of empty rug
I started looking all around I must of really been knocked out
Because the angel in the dark took everything inside my house
But there was a letter on the counter it said thank you for your truck
You can find it on the highway probably burned up
Just to let you know If things were different I'd want you to be my man
But I had a really great time so you can have your silver dollar back
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Posted: Mar 2013
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mcradloff

Are You Smarter Than a Highschool Dropout?

Are you smarter than a highschool dropout?
Cause there's gonna be some consequences later
Officer Officer
Now we're back in jail
Are you smarter than you used to be?
Are you smarter than a highschool dropout?
Grab some weed and a bag of shrooms
Officer Officer
Now we're back in jail
So are you smart enough for state prison?
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Posted: Feb 2013
About this poem:
Parody of one of my favorite show songs, Are You Smarter Than A Fifth Grader? I think it would be funny to have a show with high school dropouts as the kids helping some contestant answer the questions.
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Unknown

You never came

...when it was raining
I had my window open
The evening was full of pounding
Music
I had no mind to get traped
In my room
I wanted to get out
Besides all those noise
I wanted to breadth out
There
I have waited for you
By the door
I could have collieded
In kiss
But
You have never come
I waited for you
All through the Evening
For a touch of you
And tremble in cold
The wind gave me
In the absense of
You....
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Posted: Jan 2013
About this poem:
Sometime we wait for a face , sometime we wait for a sound , sometime we wait for a touch in silent DEW...all life long...
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mcradloff

The Illinois Hillbillies

Let me tell you all a story about a man named Todd
The poor salesman barely kept his cats fed
Then one day he was playin the lottery
When up from the computer came the winning numbers
300 million that is
150 million if you take it as one lump payment
Next thing you know old Todd's a millionaire
Kinfolk said, "Todd! Move away from there!"
They said Illinois is the place you outta be
So he loaded up his crap and he moved to Illinois
Cub fans that is, Bear fans too
The Illinois Hillbillies
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Posted: Jan 2013
About this poem:
Parody of the Beverly Hillbillies. I have a friend who is always talking about winning the lottery. In this country it has become a kind of religion. I mostly despise gambling, preying on the dumb and uneducated. It does give people hope and it surpasses all other forms of entertainment in this country combined.
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lonelydaisy

in my mind

You have stolen my heart away
I beg you let my heart close to you stay

If you dont want it please
then my heart release

My heart been borken before
It cant take much more

How will i ever tell you
that i already love you
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Posted: Dec 2012
About this poem:
only something i fell inside of me and its hard to tell when you dont know the word to tell someone about fellings
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