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Sweet Release

When things are going badly,
And you're feeling down and blue,
The whole world seems against you,
Here is something you can do.

Find a quiet, private place,
Where nobody will intrude.
Lock the door and draw the blinds,
To ensure your solitude.

Take a moment to relax,
Let your mind and thoughts run free.
Remove restrictive clothing,
And indulge your fantasies.

Dim all lights except your screen,
Play some music nice and low.
Now don't get in a hurry,
'Cause it's best to take it slow.

There's nothing wrong or sinful,
In composing poetry.
Just wash your hands when finished,
And don't read that cr@p to me.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Just for fun... :D
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Unknown

Sad State of Affairs

People killing people,
And grownups raping kids.
The sickness and disease,
This country's on the skids.

The money is all gone,
I wonder where it went.
So after paying bills.
There's nothing to be spent.

The price of gas is high,
The cost of living too.
So many unemployed,
Just what are we to do?

You can't walk down the street,
Without a gun and knife.
Just hope to make your car,
And lock it for your life.

Hate to be a downer,
But these things are all known.
Just hope the powers that be,
Might throw us down a bone.

So help your fellow man,
He needs it much as you.
And lend a helping hand,
For you may need one too.
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
Usually I can ignore the madness, sometimes I have to speak out...
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Tomorrow's Promise

Tomorrow holds so much promise,
May be great but you never know...
Will she be glad when she sees this?
Does wishing ever make it so?

Will she be pleased with how I look?
Oh why'd I have to cut my hair?
Will she enjoy the things I cook,
And what about my underwear?

I know it's insecurity,
But I just cannot help it, my sweet dear.
And yet in all sincerity,
Will you still love me when you're here?

My greatest hope and dearest wish,
Is that we will be our best friends,
And each tender loving dish,
Will make a meal that never ends.

Freinds and lovers, bound together,
Free enslavement, entered gladly.
My one hope is love forever,
I can't help it, love you madly.
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
Quivering with anticipation...
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Unknown

Psychology

Psychology can mislead you,
Make you sometimes read too much.
Often just taking face value,
Can be read simply as such.

I am not that complicated,
Although women think me so.
What I say is simply stated,
I'm just telling what I know.

An inflection or expression,
May be only random chance,
And can give a wrong impression,
Though it's only happenstance.

So please hear what I am saying,
Just my words and what they mean,
And don't try to insert meaning.
My lines have no inbetween.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Got tired of being busted by what was interpreted rather than what I said. That's one reason why today I am freeatlast.
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From a Conversation With a Stranger On a Plane

High school sweethearts, from Sweden they'd gone.
He moved to New York, she came later on.
They moved to L. A. and built life for two.
When they reached the age, retired near you.

No children they had, but a dog instead.
And after some years, knew he'd soon be dead.
They couldn't leave him home alone, and so,
On seperate vacations, they had to go.

For the first time, since crossing the pond,
They traveled alone, though still had their bond.
He didn't say, just where she had went,
But for the first time, he'd sleep in a tent.

And so for a week, he'd hike and he'd camp.
No worries, two guides would be leading the tramp.
Expensive it was, but well worth the price,
This wasn't a thing he'd be doing twice.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Told to me by my love who'll be spending the weekend with me next week.
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Unknown

Collision!

When two worlds collide,
There's mayhem far and wide.
Equators and poles,
Explode with gaping holes.

In orbits sublime,
We've spun through space and time.
Not knowing one day,
This crash would come our way.

Now pending events,
Will end our ignorance.
But surely, it's true,
We will collide, we two.

On that fateful day,
Will true love come our way?
Will this be our start?
I pray with all my heart...
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Anticipating the meeting of two worlds...
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Unknown

Courage

When someone uses violence,
To control another's life.
It causes lack of confidence,
Be it daughter, son or wife.

All the anger and frustration,
Can build up inside of you.
Til your desp'rate situation,
May lead you to vi'lence too.

It is often carried forward,
To the children of abuse.
Who then point the finger backward,
Use their parents as excuse.

But you always have your choices,
On this long and winding road.
You can listen to those voices,
Or just choose to change your mode.

You can stand up to that bully,
And thus remove his power.
Even though you realize fully,
It could be your final hour.

All the courage you can manage,
Will just barely be enough,
But you can control the damage,
And prove you're of stronger stuff.

So be kind to those who love you,
So that love may come to you.
Just don't let your demons shove you,
And to thine own self be true.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Dedicated to TP4G and her amazing courage that probably saved several lives. Those of her children and abusive ex-husband as well as her own.
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Unknown

Seeking Truth

Ev'ryone seems to have answers,
But speaking for me I have none.
Naked to all, I take chances,
Just try to survive and have fun.

Purpose in life has been living,
While doing no one any harm,
Once in a while maybe giving,
Somebody a hand or an arm.

Seeking the truth, staying open,
To other's suggestions and thoughts,
Although it is blather most often,
The answers still need to be sought.

If your beliefs and convictions,
Lead you to share them with me,
I'll give them my full attention,
With a mind that's open and free.

If you be Christian or pagan,
I'll listen, but don't be deceived.
I won't dispute your conviction,
But that doesn't mean I'll believe.
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
The ever-elusive...
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Unknown

LOVE

Love doesn’t need eyes
It’s only heart enough
Doesn’t need wealthy
What with authority
Love in your heart, will teach you sincerity

Love wouldn’t care less about
It’s enough the feel exist
Wouldn’t care with class
Or also with race
Love in your heart, will scrap disparity

Love is not a dream
It’s enough loving and affectionate
Without memory
Or hope
Love in your heart, will give a serenity

Perhaps you don’t realize,
This gift is beautiful

Get started to try to experience
Life will be wonderful
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
Love is Love
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Unknown

Was There a Chance?

She told me it was nothing,
That I had done or said.
Which left but one conclusion,
Twas who I am instead.

Though I will always love her,
She's not in love with me.
Sure seemed it was, but sadly,
It wasn't meant to be.

If I had fought and argued,
What diff'rence would it make?
Was there a chance to change things?
Or was it much too late?

It's hard to know what action,
To take or what to say,
When someone tells you gently,
It's time to go away.
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Posted: Jul 2010
About this poem:
Last poem on this subject. Time to move on.
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