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BrooklynPoet

Give My Regards.. Verse 1

She took my virginity
I smoked my first blunt with her
She let me love her and I swore I wouldn't quit her but...
sometimes a promise is made to be broken
when I left-between us, no words were spoken
tears ran down her cheek
I wiped them with my finger
kissed her on the lips and said
"I wish I could bring you"
we went through alot
beef with knuckleheads and chicken heads
when I came home late, she was there on the bed
there to hold my head over the sink after too many drinks
looking at her with pink eyes
she made things better in a wink
we made wished on stars, had water fights in the summer
we held each other tight when on cloudy days-it thundered
I left my heart with you so until we're reunited
you;re the inspiration for this song and how I write it
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Posted: Jan 2013
About this poem:
I wrote this many years ago when I was an aspiring emcee.. I now recite it as a spoken word piece. It is dedicated to Brooklyn, after I moved to the Bronx for a while
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Torrieenchanted

Expose Your Heart

I CAN SEE IT RIGHT THERE
I CAN SEE IT RIGHT THERE...FALLING DOWN
TEARS DROPPING ON YOUR PILLOW
YOUR STAIRING OUT THE WINDOW...

BUT WHY'S IT SUCH A SHAME TO SHOW
A SIDE OF YOU THATS WONDERFUL?
SO BEAUTIFUL, EMOTIONAL.
IT MAKES ME CRAZY, MAKES ME FALL
MORE AND MORE IN LOVE WITH YOU.
YOUR SO SAD AND YOUR SO BLUE.
BUT IT'S OK, YEA IT'S ALRIGHT, TO EXPOSE YOUR HEART TO ME TONIGHT.
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Posted: Dec 2012
About this poem:
Its about how some guys like to hide their pain in front of their friends and girls. But i just want to know why some guys are so proud to the point where they think tears are for weak people. Im saying why hide something so beautiful and true?
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Rebel20127

Fiegn'n to love

It's like being in a room and no one else is there
Straight glued to a zone and got no reason to fear
So filled wit bubbles inside and wanna let them go
Use to put on the girls in the past but they just couldn't understand it


I'm fiegn'n to, fiegn'n to love somebody
If you are the right one to receive it
Then I am the right man to give it to ya
I'm fiegn'n to roc wit cha and love your body
Say the word girl and u will get it
I'm willin to hit u off......................................
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Posted: Dec 2012
About this poem:
Love is its essence. The desire to lavish someone with the power of love has a life of its own.. The feelings that follow such desire are expressive, felt in the inner parts of a being with the ability to empower another, forming a bond.
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duggsilver2013

The Hopeless Hopeful

Today an old couple kissed in the middle of the street.
Time ceased in mid traffic as their pothole became their retreat.
Thats when I knew I had to find you
Heaven knows my humble plea. Even if it takes eternity,
I'd search the concrete jungle to the congo deep.
A thousand hurricane Sandy's couldn't keep you from me.
Tomorrow will be sweeter with you right beside me.
Today's the day I met you because yesterday's dream woke me.
Alone at the bar in a club full of people eye to eye the scenery,
90 proofing what's bottled up inside until they're stress free.
It's singles night and where could you be,
possibly hidden in cupid's cliche'd fray waiting for yours truly?
As someday permeates through a few stoic faced hopefuls
and the DJ contiues to play through a few stolen moments
where are you? I'll find you. Your out there,flesh of my flesh and bone of my bone until the next chapter.

written by duggsilver2013
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Posted: Nov 2012
About this poem:
This poem is a snapshot of a hopeful hopeless romantic. This goes out to all those single who beleive there is someone out there for them in the name of love.
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Dementiaonline today!

The Tragedy

Woke up to a thought
That never crossed my mind before
You and me, we finally
Even up the final score
So many ways to break up
That you no longer try anymore
In the moonlight I saw you cry
Like so many times before

And I wonder now
If I could've saved you somehow

But can't you see, it wasn't me
I never meant to hurt you this way
In the park with a broken heart
I'll never forget the day
The tragedy that wasn't meant to be
Unfolded before my very eyes
Stubborn hopes only kept you afloat
And you never even said goodbye

Now days go by so slow
And all I can do now is think
Even ships, solidly built
Can crash and suddenly sink
We must have been so blind
Not to see the missing link
We all have addictions
But you never would give up the drink

And I wonder now
If I could've saved you somehow

But can't you see it wasn't me
I never meant to hurt you this way
In the park with a broken heart
I'll never forget the day
The tragedy that wasn't meant to be
Unfolded before my very eyes
Stubborn hopes only kept you afloat
And you never even said goodbye

And the tragedy
Is that you wouldn't believe...
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Posted: Nov 2012
About this poem:
One of my songs I wrote
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scottishjohn

short but sweet

loving life for life is loving
to smile and sing and dance about to walk and run
to breath and feel to see and touch
to wish then have to give and get
"will you forget?"
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Posted: Sep 2012
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pinklady1967

DARKNESS..A.R.R..

There's something mysterious..but magical about darkness..the birds glide back to there coups..most creatures sleep..most creatures except me..out come the stars..gone are the clouds..just listen to the crickets wide eyed and schreeching with glee..sounding so proud..in this darkness..down goes the moon away from the hills..but..most of all..i love the darkness..no cteature sees or feels my totured soul and sadness..no creature but me..Written By robyn bashford..
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
TO DARKNESS..
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pinklady1967

MY WISH..A.R.R..

I wish i had loving angels to guide me through the day..i would happily pay them a penny each then merrily be on my way..i need these sweet little angels to save me from this internal war..i guess for now i'll have to fight with all my strength to achieve what i'm searching for..i know my loving angels will suddenly appear some day to guide me through my troubled world then no longer will i live in saddness and fear..so..dear illusive angels do answer my prayers..don't leave me here in this world alone frightened and despaired..so..once again sweet angels..help me ! guide me ! let me be me !..yes ! i want to be internally free..that's all i wish to ever be..free ! free ! free !..Written By robyn bashford..A.R.R.
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
DEDICATED TO THOSE THAT ARE TROUBLED..
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pinklady1967

CHILDS PLAY..A.R.R

A little boy wakes up with a love for life..full of mischief then gets into strife..he says..mummy..i love you..and gives her a cheeky big hug..in a distance mum watched him play..she is hoping what he builds will stay..what ever the little boy was building comes apart..then joined with a horrid display.and pouts..mummy comes along..its ok little love..she gives the toy a poke..click..then said to her little boy..now it should stay..the look of delight on the little boys face as he says thankyou mummy and continues to play..Written By..robyn bashford..
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Posted: Aug 2012
About this poem:
DEDICATED TO ALL MUMS..
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nayden0

Kiss me

I feel you laying close to me,
but who are you, my gentle dream?
Your beauty seems to be
the gorgeous I`ve ever seen...

I beg you, wake me with a kiss
in the early hours of this rainy day!
I know that happiness exist
and I hope it is here to stay...
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
Life is short. Forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably and never regret anything that made you smile !
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