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Neighbors (part 1)
Once, everything finally set into place,
All got scattered out- deep into space,
Aliens, they're always watching me,
They hang with my neighbor,
From across the street,--
Strange lights and sounds,
As if making they're plans,
Speaking some language,
No one here could understand,--
So, I set up my perimeter,
Tripwire and landmines,
But, like angels from above,
Lights fell from the sky,--
(chorus): Is this real or in my head?,
What in the Hell is this?,---
Well, out came my neighbor,
Just as no surprise,
With a spacesuit on,
And a glaze in his eyes,--
"Why don't you come take a trip with me?"
"Good accommodations and upper class hospitality,"--
Imagine different places and different worlds,
But just like from Sling Blade,
He sounded like Carl!,--
"ah hmm, You shouldn't be singing songs like that,
you gonna scare these boys and girls! hmm,
Why don't yaw kids come on with me,
We'll go get some of them there French fried taters, ah hmm,--
(chorus) Is this real or in my head?,
Who in the Hell is this?,---
I took a few steps back,
And then I cocked my gun,
But, then came the military,
And the Air Force One,--
What I saw,
Please allow me to explain,
That Biden and the aliens,
Knew each other by name,--
Pissed off and hurt,
Well, my neighbor he walked on home,
His 15 minutes of fame,
That day is now long been gone,--
But, I still see him around,
Once in a while,
Staring towards space,
Wearing a smile!,--
(chorus) Is this real or in my head?
Where in the Hell is this?---
{{ The music fades as a Coocoo bird chirps louder; then,
different sounds of birds over sound into Neighbors
(part 2) Only The Birds Understand. }}
All got scattered out- deep into space,
Aliens, they're always watching me,
They hang with my neighbor,
From across the street,--
Strange lights and sounds,
As if making they're plans,
Speaking some language,
No one here could understand,--
So, I set up my perimeter,
Tripwire and landmines,
But, like angels from above,
Lights fell from the sky,--
(chorus): Is this real or in my head?,
What in the Hell is this?,---
Well, out came my neighbor,
Just as no surprise,
With a spacesuit on,
And a glaze in his eyes,--
"Why don't you come take a trip with me?"
"Good accommodations and upper class hospitality,"--
Imagine different places and different worlds,
But just like from Sling Blade,
He sounded like Carl!,--
"ah hmm, You shouldn't be singing songs like that,
you gonna scare these boys and girls! hmm,
Why don't yaw kids come on with me,
We'll go get some of them there French fried taters, ah hmm,--
(chorus) Is this real or in my head?,
Who in the Hell is this?,---
I took a few steps back,
And then I cocked my gun,
But, then came the military,
And the Air Force One,--
What I saw,
Please allow me to explain,
That Biden and the aliens,
Knew each other by name,--
Pissed off and hurt,
Well, my neighbor he walked on home,
His 15 minutes of fame,
That day is now long been gone,--
But, I still see him around,
Once in a while,
Staring towards space,
Wearing a smile!,--
(chorus) Is this real or in my head?
Where in the Hell is this?---
{{ The music fades as a Coocoo bird chirps louder; then,
different sounds of birds over sound into Neighbors
(part 2) Only The Birds Understand. }}
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Posted: Sep 2021
About this poem:
This song (poem) I wrote 1-18-11 should be easy to understand. It's about my neighbor and politics at that time and place; but, a few changes in my writing to fit into today. I once had a neighbor who claimed he was abducted by aliens and the way he spoke sounded actually just like Carl from Sling Blade. At that time Obama was president. This song is comedy.War And Peace
One day; the invalid king, well, he raised his brow,
Sent off the best that he had,
To slow that army down,
Against demons, warlocks, witches, imps,
And beasts of the unknown,
Before the battle began,
It was already carved into stone,--
What stands between war and peace,
Is that love between you and me?--
A psychedelic storm,
Then the moon broke through,
Hail to the Captain!,
Was sung from the crew,
A rumble in the waters,
And, who could that be?,
It was Neptune himself!
Was the last thing they would see,--
What stands between war and peace,
Is this love between you and me?--
Thousands of years come to pass,
From the price we've paid,
What has happened to us all?
No one here would say,-
The life we live now,
You know it's only a game,
Chivalry long gone,
And everyone's to blame,--
What stands between war and peace,
Is there love between you and me?--
Sent off the best that he had,
To slow that army down,
Against demons, warlocks, witches, imps,
And beasts of the unknown,
Before the battle began,
It was already carved into stone,--
What stands between war and peace,
Is that love between you and me?--
A psychedelic storm,
Then the moon broke through,
Hail to the Captain!,
Was sung from the crew,
A rumble in the waters,
And, who could that be?,
It was Neptune himself!
Was the last thing they would see,--
What stands between war and peace,
Is this love between you and me?--
Thousands of years come to pass,
From the price we've paid,
What has happened to us all?
No one here would say,-
The life we live now,
You know it's only a game,
Chivalry long gone,
And everyone's to blame,--
What stands between war and peace,
Is there love between you and me?--
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Posted: Sep 2021
About this poem:
I wrote this one 1-18-11. It consists of story, myth, to reality; or, just a song depending on how you look at it.
Ball Game
Take me out to the ball game
Take me out to the crowd
Give me Corona and Crackerjacks
I don't care if I never get back
Root root root for the home team
If they don't win it's a sin
For it's 1 0 4 and you're out of the whole ball game!
Take me out to the crowd
Give me Corona and Crackerjacks
I don't care if I never get back
Root root root for the home team
If they don't win it's a sin
For it's 1 0 4 and you're out of the whole ball game!
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Posted: Sep 2021
About this poem:
I wrote this parody of Take Me Out To The Ballgame last year when the corona virus was shutting down all sports. I remember seeing the Minnesota Twins play on TV in a bar in Minnesota and seeing cardboard cutouts of people in the stands.Laughter Of The Wizard
The Wizard grinned at his forsaken sins,
Up from the gallows- there he went,
Hearing the sounds of the ancient chimes,
"The moon is full- now I must fly,"
Spreading his wings aimed towards the sky,
Of what Angels feared, mortal man had to hide,
Demons warring by his side,
On the ground, the great warriors ride,
The first warrior, he withdrew his sword,
Through demon flesh- there it soared,
His piece of steel spoke so loud,
The Wizard laughed, then struck him down--
The second warrior, he carried his axe,
Stepping into a world of all black mass,
Almost victorious across the land,
The Wizard laughed, and turned him into sand--
The third warrior fought with his spear,
For in his heart, he had no fear,
Killing over a thousand in one day,
The Wizard laughed, and cast him into clay--
The fourth warrior, protected by his shield,
To no man; nor, beast he would not yield,
The Wizard laughed, without giving chance,
He changed the warrior into grass--
The Wizard got jazzed!
The fifth warrior killed with a dagger,
But, the odds against him made him stagger,
Beginning to lose his will and desire,
The Wizard laughed, changing him into fire--
The sixth warrior had no soul,
His weapons were his guitar and Rock-n-Roll,
Through his music the Wizard frowned,
Blinded his magic due to the sound--
The Wizard found himself at his wishing well,
Screaming out of how he failed,
Sworn to vengeance,
But, now he dwells,
Inside the deepest hole in Hell-
Up from the gallows- there he went,
Hearing the sounds of the ancient chimes,
"The moon is full- now I must fly,"
Spreading his wings aimed towards the sky,
Of what Angels feared, mortal man had to hide,
Demons warring by his side,
On the ground, the great warriors ride,
The first warrior, he withdrew his sword,
Through demon flesh- there it soared,
His piece of steel spoke so loud,
The Wizard laughed, then struck him down--
The second warrior, he carried his axe,
Stepping into a world of all black mass,
Almost victorious across the land,
The Wizard laughed, and turned him into sand--
The third warrior fought with his spear,
For in his heart, he had no fear,
Killing over a thousand in one day,
The Wizard laughed, and cast him into clay--
The fourth warrior, protected by his shield,
To no man; nor, beast he would not yield,
The Wizard laughed, without giving chance,
He changed the warrior into grass--
The Wizard got jazzed!
The fifth warrior killed with a dagger,
But, the odds against him made him stagger,
Beginning to lose his will and desire,
The Wizard laughed, changing him into fire--
The sixth warrior had no soul,
His weapons were his guitar and Rock-n-Roll,
Through his music the Wizard frowned,
Blinded his magic due to the sound--
The Wizard found himself at his wishing well,
Screaming out of how he failed,
Sworn to vengeance,
But, now he dwells,
Inside the deepest hole in Hell-
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Posted: Aug 2021
About this poem:
I wrote this one 10-17-94, just barely over two months after I "turned on, tuned in, and dropped out" and went to Woodstock '94! lol Putting this in here, I thought it might put a little change of climate into some readers minds. Something wild and out of the ordinary, perhaps?WI Dells
Wisconsin Dells
Is a place I feel pretty well
Mini golf at Pirate's Cove
Walk up main street where i like to rove
Fudge shops, souvenir shops, and cheese
There's always something that will make you pleased
Timbavati Zoo is better now in any weather
Especially when they thinned out the Macaw Parrots
So they weren't pulling out each other feathers
Wisconsin Deer Park is nice this time of year
If you like feeding deer
Kalahari has it all
If it decides to rain, you can mini golf and hit your ball
Moose Jaw and Macs are good places to eat
There are plenty more good resturants for a treat
Cambrian sandstone rock formations on the Wisconsin River
They have a beauty that will always deliver
So the place up there is just fun
And the 95 mile drive is a pretty run
Is a place I feel pretty well
Mini golf at Pirate's Cove
Walk up main street where i like to rove
Fudge shops, souvenir shops, and cheese
There's always something that will make you pleased
Timbavati Zoo is better now in any weather
Especially when they thinned out the Macaw Parrots
So they weren't pulling out each other feathers
Wisconsin Deer Park is nice this time of year
If you like feeding deer
Kalahari has it all
If it decides to rain, you can mini golf and hit your ball
Moose Jaw and Macs are good places to eat
There are plenty more good resturants for a treat
Cambrian sandstone rock formations on the Wisconsin River
They have a beauty that will always deliver
So the place up there is just fun
And the 95 mile drive is a pretty run
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Posted: Aug 2021
About this poem:
I've been going to WI Dells since 1985 when my friend Todd and his mom and dad took me to Family Land(now Mt Olympus, Noah's Ark(Waterpark), and Tommy Bartlett's Robot World, which are still there.
Scar on my skin
my wrists shackled to her feet
Laughing at my will breaking
a wretch in black lipstick has me
without bones I'm crawling
she stakes her nails in me
scratching my back
blood drains free
venom seeps in and I'm shaking
I sit at my alter
she is my goddess
for her not faulter
she'll keep me in bondage
I am the stain on her soul
she's the scars on mine
without her I'm cold
without me she's fine
Laughing at my will breaking
a wretch in black lipstick has me
without bones I'm crawling
she stakes her nails in me
scratching my back
blood drains free
venom seeps in and I'm shaking
I sit at my alter
she is my goddess
for her not faulter
she'll keep me in bondage
I am the stain on her soul
she's the scars on mine
without her I'm cold
without me she's fine
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Posted: Aug 2019
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I’m stuck in Medford (Oregon)
Giddy anticipation
as the wheels are touchin, dowwwn
Can’t contain excitement
once my plane is on the grouuund
Grabbing my suitcase, a’rollin
heading through the gate
I’m prayin all’s okay
cuz the flight’s a little late
a little laaaa-ay-eh-ate
Been tryna hook up, darlin
ever since the light of day-ay.
But when I call ya, honey
well your phone just rings awaaay
Awayyy – ay – eh hay
Well I, been stuck in Medford
and I don’t know what to do – ooo.
I’ve done all that I could,
tryin to get ahold of you.
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do?
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do – ooo?
See the plan’s to be out
in celebration of Thanksgiving
Holy rollers giving chase:
“Repent, you do the Devil’s bidding”
Anxiety’s a’houndin me
inside this airline
No matter how I’m callin, you
just won’t pick up the line
It was kinda short notice
so things didn’t go as planned
Plus the phone went dead
meanwhile, traffic is at hand
aaa-aat haaaand
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do?
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do-ooo?
You approach, shaking your head
so, apologetically
You say: “Traffic outta nowhere
and a dead phone battery-eee”
Somehow forgot the charger
so I couldn’t let you know.
I’m so sorry, by the way
How did your flying gooo?”
“It’s alright my love, shit happens
The flights were, such a breeze
Now I’m ever-so elated
cuz I’m with the bee’s kneeees
The beeee’s knee-heee-eee-eees
Been tryna hook up, darlin
ever since the light of day-ay.
But when I call ya, honey
well your phone just rings away
I, been stuck in Medford
and I don’t know what to do – ooo.
I’ve done all that I could,
tryin to get ahold of you.
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do?
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do – ooo?
© November 17, 2020, L. Karriem
as the wheels are touchin, dowwwn
Can’t contain excitement
once my plane is on the grouuund
Grabbing my suitcase, a’rollin
heading through the gate
I’m prayin all’s okay
cuz the flight’s a little late
a little laaaa-ay-eh-ate
Been tryna hook up, darlin
ever since the light of day-ay.
But when I call ya, honey
well your phone just rings awaaay
Awayyy – ay – eh hay
Well I, been stuck in Medford
and I don’t know what to do – ooo.
I’ve done all that I could,
tryin to get ahold of you.
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do?
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do – ooo?
See the plan’s to be out
in celebration of Thanksgiving
Holy rollers giving chase:
“Repent, you do the Devil’s bidding”
Anxiety’s a’houndin me
inside this airline
No matter how I’m callin, you
just won’t pick up the line
It was kinda short notice
so things didn’t go as planned
Plus the phone went dead
meanwhile, traffic is at hand
aaa-aat haaaand
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do?
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do-ooo?
You approach, shaking your head
so, apologetically
You say: “Traffic outta nowhere
and a dead phone battery-eee”
Somehow forgot the charger
so I couldn’t let you know.
I’m so sorry, by the way
How did your flying gooo?”
“It’s alright my love, shit happens
The flights were, such a breeze
Now I’m ever-so elated
cuz I’m with the bee’s kneeees
The beeee’s knee-heee-eee-eees
Been tryna hook up, darlin
ever since the light of day-ay.
But when I call ya, honey
well your phone just rings away
I, been stuck in Medford
and I don’t know what to do – ooo.
I’ve done all that I could,
tryin to get ahold of you.
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do?
I’m stuck in Medford…
wooo wooo.
I’m stuck in Medford,
what can I do – ooo?
© November 17, 2020, L. Karriem
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Posted: Aug 2021
About this poem:
This is a song that I wrote when I was dating the Scorpio Chiropractor. I'm still trying to get a melody on it - when that doesn't come, it tends to be the absolute most difficult part of the song writing process for me.Wish I played an instrument, I am certain that would help.
Vacation to Maine
Three days to get there
Bangor, Maine is where
Saw Acadia National Park
Ate some lobster on a lark
Saw Steven King's home and it was eerie
Found it thanks to my best buddy Siri
She told me how to get there and back
My only complaint is the music I had to lack
While I waited for her to tell me where to turn
Spending too much time on my phone I could have been burned
It's dangerous to play with these phones going down the road
You could get squashed like a toad
I saw Niagara Falls on the way back
The good view from Canada was all I lacked
Then it was to Sandusky, Ohio to walk on the beach by Lake Erie
The next day I was on the beach by Lake Michigan, you should have seen me!
Since Monday it's been daily trips to Madison to Chuck E Cheese
Played at a video game place for 15 bucks with ease
Then to Dubuque to eat some cold guacamole with Doritos
Play some video games, my favorite Pacman was broke, that's the way it goes
I went to a record store in Janesville
Got my latest Adam Sandler CD, what a thrill
Ate some Panda Express
The sauce got on my pants, what a mess!
So today it's off to Davenport for Ruby's, Goodwill and the mall
Lots of dollars paid for it all
Bangor, Maine is where
Saw Acadia National Park
Ate some lobster on a lark
Saw Steven King's home and it was eerie
Found it thanks to my best buddy Siri
She told me how to get there and back
My only complaint is the music I had to lack
While I waited for her to tell me where to turn
Spending too much time on my phone I could have been burned
It's dangerous to play with these phones going down the road
You could get squashed like a toad
I saw Niagara Falls on the way back
The good view from Canada was all I lacked
Then it was to Sandusky, Ohio to walk on the beach by Lake Erie
The next day I was on the beach by Lake Michigan, you should have seen me!
Since Monday it's been daily trips to Madison to Chuck E Cheese
Played at a video game place for 15 bucks with ease
Then to Dubuque to eat some cold guacamole with Doritos
Play some video games, my favorite Pacman was broke, that's the way it goes
I went to a record store in Janesville
Got my latest Adam Sandler CD, what a thrill
Ate some Panda Express
The sauce got on my pants, what a mess!
So today it's off to Davenport for Ruby's, Goodwill and the mall
Lots of dollars paid for it all
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Posted: Aug 2021
About this poem:
I have managed to keep myself busy, but next time I'm flying, the road traffic was too much.
Dog on a Chain
When they get you down
down on your knees
never buckle
never buy the sleaze
who'll be rising
in the morning breeze
from the firestorm
gimme shelter please
FIST HIGH
FOR LIBERTY GAIN
BURNING FLAG
DOG ON A CHAIN
down on your knees
never buckle
never buy the sleaze
who'll be rising
in the morning breeze
from the firestorm
gimme shelter please
FIST HIGH
FOR LIBERTY GAIN
BURNING FLAG
DOG ON A CHAIN
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Posted: May 2021
About this poem:
Hold up in the storm comradesWhy you ghostin?
Talk to me
chu got up yer sleeve?
Talk to me
Why did you leave?
Say something
You know that I'm home
Say something
Don't leave me alone
Jus nursin my tea
thoughts of you in my head
Sittin crossed legged
Indian style, on my bed
Layin back on the pillow
wish it was your chest
Yeah, that "S" is for Super
We know what you do best
You were the peace
that silenced my tears
You were the beast
which chased off my fears
Two years now, yer gone
with nuthin to say
How you jus dip
and leave me this way?
I thought we were friends
Shit, I kept you close
You are the one
I dreamed of the most
What the f*ck, man?
Say something
You know that I'm home
Say something
Don't leave me alone
Talk to me, bruh
chu got up yer sleeve?
Talk to me, Boo
Why did you leave?
I don't understand
What the hell is this crap
You vanish & leave, like:
"Peace b*tch, it's a wrap"
Like, I can't even fathom
What got into you
When I told you my past
The shit I been through
I trusted you, bruh
My heart open, exposed
Like a surgeon, you left
The wound sat unclosed
I can't innerstand
How you jus walk away
What are you thinkin?
Have you nothing to say?
Talk to me, love
chu got up yer sleeve?
Say somethin, Boo
Why did you leave?
Talk to me, please
You know that I'm home
Say something, just....
Don't leave me alone
© September 10, 2020, L. Karriem
chu got up yer sleeve?
Talk to me
Why did you leave?
Say something
You know that I'm home
Say something
Don't leave me alone
Jus nursin my tea
thoughts of you in my head
Sittin crossed legged
Indian style, on my bed
Layin back on the pillow
wish it was your chest
Yeah, that "S" is for Super
We know what you do best
You were the peace
that silenced my tears
You were the beast
which chased off my fears
Two years now, yer gone
with nuthin to say
How you jus dip
and leave me this way?
I thought we were friends
Shit, I kept you close
You are the one
I dreamed of the most
What the f*ck, man?
Say something
You know that I'm home
Say something
Don't leave me alone
Talk to me, bruh
chu got up yer sleeve?
Talk to me, Boo
Why did you leave?
I don't understand
What the hell is this crap
You vanish & leave, like:
"Peace b*tch, it's a wrap"
Like, I can't even fathom
What got into you
When I told you my past
The shit I been through
I trusted you, bruh
My heart open, exposed
Like a surgeon, you left
The wound sat unclosed
I can't innerstand
How you jus walk away
What are you thinkin?
Have you nothing to say?
Talk to me, love
chu got up yer sleeve?
Say somethin, Boo
Why did you leave?
Talk to me, please
You know that I'm home
Say something, just....
Don't leave me alone
© September 10, 2020, L. Karriem
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Posted: Jul 2021
About this poem:
Jeeze, I forgot about this one. When I compile my list of poems to go into my book for publishing, this will be the starting poem.Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.
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