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hariksna

Her Cosmic Dance

A crafted gift that eternal hath designed,
A half minded wind blew through the face
A drop of water kissed the cheeks...
An unshaped darkness descended,
A thunder struck from the heavens,
A mystic poem is in the offing by nature,
Earth smiled with her thunderous roar.

Ecstatic mind sang with the branches of trees.
Left & right they swung with the dancing wind,
Clouds awaited the god's order with patience- endless:
Delighted Sun withdrew his mighty force
And the communion of earth & rain began........
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
PS: Its raining....Fear not by her vastness, Feel bliss-ed & blessed by her tender love...
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nixxo

I Am Dead Inside My Sorrow

I see the fire.

I am the flames.

I am hurting.

Within the inside.

Next to which rests with the dead.

I do not linger.

Even to point one finger.

I swallowed my pain.

I am the nail in the cross.

I take.

I break.

For yours and heavens sake.

I carry my burdens.

You will never see me cry.

My tears are not forsale.

Not today and surely not tomorrow.

Never in the corner of the dark.

I will drown.

I will suffocate.

My heart hangs around a stake.

I do not have to die.

I am dead inside my sorrow.
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Posted: Oct 2013
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nixxo

Grave Which Lies Hidden

Chained before the change, I am absorbed into the shade of faint.

Painted to last by portrait, pictured to the brush.

I hang by the flames of my frame.

Morning to dawn, savage is the start of another brutal day.

Life consumes energy, worn as a dress.

Alive to feel dead, death comes to a stop but far from the end.

I circle the deepest holes inside my brain.

I broke straight through my mind, I turned left at every bend.

Prevent the explosion in between the chemical storm trapped by time.

Captured by the voice of violence.

Totally ignored by the breath of silence.

The trilogy of the square is where my shadow was seized.

Wrapped with plastic fanatics to feel fantastic.

I am healing inside my nightmare.

Bleeding that I am dreaming.

Burning with the aches of hate.

I do not feel any less to care.

I am screaming for an eye to see.

For one split of a second.

For you to believe me.

Taste my tears.

I will grave which lies hidden.

I will grave my fears.
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Posted: Oct 2013
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nixxo

Dag Of Nag

Deur vensters met krake.
Staar ek harteloos in die ruimte.
Regtig verlore.
Alleen onder die maanlig.
Alleen tweetalig.
Alleen.
Die spieel hang skeef in die gang.
Ek kan myself nie seen nie.
Die spieel is omgedraai.
Dit is nag.
Maar dit is dag.
My oe brand diep in my skedel.
Ek worstel onbepaald met die son.
Dit is die sterre wat my die hulp
aanbied.
Die sterre verstaan die gewig van
my trane.
Dit is dag.
Maar dit is nag.
Die pyn raak te erg.
Die pyn maak my net seer.
Ek kan nie meer voortgaan nie.
Ek wil nie weer agteruit gaan nie.
Maar.
Maar.
Maar.
Sonder jou aan my sy.
Kan ek niks klaarmaak nie.
Die oorlosie teen die muur fluister
saggies.
Met die hand van tyd word ek
gewys.
Dit is al twaalfuur.
Dit is nag.
Maar dit is dag.
Wat maak die tyd saak.
My hart klop te vinnig.
Bloed ontplof diep in my bors.
Kan ek lewendig wees.
Ek begin te twyfel.
Ek mis jou.
Ek is lief vir jou.
Jy is die enigste een wat my dors
les.
Ek is verslaan.
Maar ek doen my beste.
Ek voel soos n dooie hanswors.
Ek staan voor jou graf.
Ek weet nie hoekom nie.
Dit is dag.
Maar dit is nag.
Die probleem is dat ek my naam op
die grafsteen lees.
Oor en oor.
Weer en weer.
My naam kan nie leuens vertel nie.
Ek staar.
Ek staar alleen.
Heeltemal.
Is die werklikheid.
Regtig.
Is ek die gees van ons verlede.
My oe is vol trane.
Dit raak nag.
Maar dit is dag.
Alleen .
Met die donker.
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Posted: Oct 2013
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nixxo

I Love You Babes

I miss you babes -
When I am home -
Surrounded by you crafts -
Mr Dingles is sitting on my lap -
Favourably the skeleton scarecrow -
Which stalks you strawberry supply -
I miss the chocolate mouse, with the dark flavours, you so gently spooned onto my lips -
I love the taste after the taste, the one from your tongue, which splits my mouth to be accepted, by more to your one -
I miss you babes, when you lap by the dance, ontop of me, whispering my name, never stopping, then we play our game -
I miss you more everyday, my love which now is my passion, will never be complete -
I miss you babes when I am down at night, when I feel to the complete in lost, your life came at the price, no God can expect me to do the cost -
I love you babes, I never said those words to you, by the mean, to fulfill your dreams -
Do you hear my screams, I am a fool, I am a fool, what I thought was cool, was not to the measure in you -
I cry, I do not care, I love you babes -
I miss you more everyday -
Open is my heart by thought -
My chances missed -
So I miss you babes -
My mistake, I misjudged, I ringed the finger on your hand, with tears -
You wear the ring to your grave -
I said I do, but somehow, I expected an anwser too -
I miss you babes -
My heart was graved next to you
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Posted: Oct 2013
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Billwillie

The first war

Never will I forget,or should I,
I watched my sisters and brothers turn
The light was not as bright as before,
One third of heavens angels burned
There was no one to guide us then,
We fought friends for the souls of men
The sacrifice in eons made sense,
Now again we must make amends
Where are you,I need you father
I fear you have given up on us now,
Are we not worthy,a begotten daughter,
Michael,Rapheal,Uriel,tell me how?
For I truly can not do that again.
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Posted: May 2014
About this poem:
Its about the war in Heaven.Its told by one of the Archangels,I will let each viewer to decide who that is.The loss regret and futility of it all from an angels perspective.
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goodluck26

You Brought Me Back

All was set too far from,Thou love given new Alive....
And thee cant found wounds,By whom and which knives.
But only thee love can put,And things all with Same....
At last found in thou all,Why been here i all came.

But regrets still found thee,And same ask hide past....
And by all mean still go with,All not same,in world vast.
But was wrong with feel same,Each one try to hold Neck....
And was all set leave all hope,Thought of thou brought back.
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Posted: Jun 2014
About this poem:
Poem is just a humble message to same all,who without any relate with wants to trouble and tease.......and want to make ones life live as hell.
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Jelvis

Pink-bluish nightmare

Said the sailor in my pink dream sad is the man who follows peach green, weak at heart blink of an eye and in one night its all over, gliding on black skies gazing the day stars contemplating the next hour and its a surprise, hating on life living on ice burning inside and yet no cry, revealing only a little saying too much screaming aloud the calvary hasn't arrived, IT be the last call the last hope a single choice and a far cry and in a mere hundred letters few words i make no sense but i have endless meanings, its purple, inside and braking me apart, it has a choice and yet chose to burn me, i'm dead i'm buried and forgotten but aware, i love blue and its pink and they converge, its all i dream of and all what dreams are made of and its my pink-bluish nightmare because i'm awake! PUT ME DOWN...
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Posted: Sep 2012
About this poem:
the distance between existence and absence called life
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Jelvis

SUSPENDED...

I tried and i failed,they tried and success came, i did it but it wasnt worth it and when they did it, a legend was bon, now that its the final countdown Down we panic, how cruel has this world treated us, when we finally found freedom smile struck our faces, we never thought of the inevitable perils targeting us, i loathem, the world the inhabitants, the insides have died, cut me down like a flower of pain, bringing my soul from the inside out, and what do i have to say bout it?
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Posted: Sep 2012
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Unknown

Dolly on the tracks

Walking stick,
Beat up blue,
Hand in hand,
Me and you.

On the window,
On the chair,
Raindrops falling,
In my hair.

Broken whisper,
Inside out,
Upside down,
Then we shout.

Under water,
In the sea,
In the rain,
You and me.

Braided hair,
Shave your cheek
Another year,
Another week.

Christmas trees
Old and grey,
Gone tomorrow
Here today.


Sunlight, starlight,
Around once more,
In the bathroom,
on the floor.

Morning, evening,
Afternoon,
Wishing well,
Come home soon.
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Posted: Dec 2011
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