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Angeldancer

A note on the veranda

I left you a little note
That says how much
I could have wrote, what
I couldn't put into words
Just has to go unheard

I am sorry that it has to be this way
I didn't want to go away,
but after time and time again
We can return to being friends
I don't want to hurt you anymore
Before even I need to walk out the door

I left you more than a little note
But take what resonates with you
To keep afloat, and I will rush
To get my coat

These words I wish to say to you
I love you until the moon turns blue
Beyond the moon and the stars out back
Beyond the eclipse before it goes black

I will love you, friend, until the bittersweet end
Knowing that you have heartfelt matters to tend,
Don't be daft and be a stranger, if you need me, yell!
I will be there next to the willow tree near the wishing well.
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Posted: Mar 2023
About this poem:
Friendship poem
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Unknown

I CAN SEE CLEARLY NOW!!!!

Like a dark cloud you darkened may days,shaded out all of my light.
Now that your gone..how much better I feel,all of the wrong is made right.
Darness dispair ,I thought that you cared..but in the light things are seen as they should,you were just using me..oh why couldn't I see?I'dd take it all back if I could.
Saddness and gloom, how you have been doomed,were the crys that came from within..So foolish was I to heed to your cry..and take on your burdens and sin.
Never again will you darken my door,never again not like before.
You chose to go,YOU walked away..and I'll never again have something to say.
Dont you remember you did this before,and I was a fool to let you back in.Now again we are here and wont be again, wont go where I've already been.
You brought me such joy, and then came the pain..I will never fall sucker to you ,not me..not ever again.
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Posted: May 2010
About this poem:
Just feeling like a sucker...
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LifeThirst

I Traverse The Path

I traverse the path, groping in darkness,
In search of salvation;
I lose my way now and then;
My head bumps against the stony walls;
I return to the prison
Where all sense is lost.

I want sunlight and the open sky,
I want the touch of affection of the wind,
I want to travel from galaxy to galaxy,
But I lose my way and am compelled
To return to my dark cell of vanity.

So the beauty of the life remains unseen,
The sky remains unknown,
The sunligh and the smell of the wind
Remain beyond reach,
I am sorrounded by endless darkness
Of futile vanity.


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Posted: Apr 2014
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lorentz

and the death came..

one night the death pushed the door and said:
-its time to follow me now,venerable master..
master oshiba retorted:
-may I leave the door open ,compassionate death ?
and the death closed the door and went out..
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
tell me,where's the key ?
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ImagineLove

Understanding

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New dawn enters
Silver light opens
Mind centers
In jest words spoken
Hearts feels broken
Thoughts left unspoken
Not well chosen
Souls splinter
Bleak like winter
Tears fall
Puddles dark
As night
Upon paper white
Emotions write
In golden speech
Like autumn leaves
On red littered paths
Regrets pour forth
No mirth uttered or said
Before sweet slumber
Deep like solemn umber
Wounded hearts together
Like falling eagle feathers
Come back to us gladness
Place within our breasts
Words needing expressed
Misunderstandings suppressed
Create day to soar anew in
True love to begin again
Held secret between two
Me, and only you
Halves make gleam whole
Drops like azure dew
Fall softly and skew
Feelings gently pursue
Come quietly to me
‘The best is yet to be’
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
Contemplating understandings and misunderstandings and how to speak to those feelings.
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darkhorse555

Pulsing Highest Note Distant Love Sings

A delicate balance held under
one cool breeze warmed by the sun

Frailty in love fragrantly echoes
deeply carried on birds song

Peace and serenity holds the air
on a vapor trailing thought

Looking around at heather blossoms
withering caught in a web

Silent blowing warm brushing whispers
rustling through the trees golden

Baby blue dressed with mother of pearl
clouds scatter the sky sparsely

Star of the sea beautiful vessel
sails upon salted remains

Your music plays the sweetest strings tug
swims to the heart in each beat
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Posted: Nov 2015
About this poem:
The highest wave hence seven syllables beginning

soaring into cloud nine syllables creating waves warmly peak

couplets join as two in one dream

sailing into paradise i call it

sweet sixteen lines
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nonsmoker

nu's challenge

If I could change the seasons or the colours of the world.
I would use that power to light your way, and watch your road unfurl.
If I changed direction of the hands upon the clock,
I would let them spin us back in time and at our meeting they would stop.
I'd change the words I said that day to truth instead of lies.
I'd tell you that I love and loved what I see in your eyes.
and if i had that chance again to hold you on that day.
Id never let you go again and watch you walk away.
And that would change my future sky's to blue instead of grey.
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Posted: Jan 2018
About this poem:
Things to change if things could be changed.
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yaspark

A wave ride

Hold on there
Do not let the dark wave
Overpower you
Give in without giving up
Take a ride with it
Let it carry you
Away from the sea of troubles
Under the rain of streaming light
Shout out your pain
Dig it deep into the ground
And the flower will grow
Splash it on canvas
And mix with colors
Pour it on paper
It may turn into a poem
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Posted: Nov 2018
About this poem:
What I have learned from riding the dark wave
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yaspark

Impolite dreams

I pulled myself
From the dark abyss
Of my morning dreams
My brain my restless CPU
Has scrambled bits and pieces
Of my thoughts
Into the colourful
Collection of randomness
I tried to remember it
But the shadows of my dreams
Whispered unspoken words
And fled from me again
Giggling impolitely
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Posted: Nov 2018
About this poem:
It's all about dreams
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Yankee4youonline today!

A Single Pebble

That which is rarer than anything exposed on a beach
Gives me meaning and purpose that few of us reach
A pebble, a single pebble now kept in my pocket
I will keep safe inside this special keepsake locket
And will wear it around my neck for my protection
And hold on to your substance in my life once more
That which once was part of something much grander
Gives me the courage to ask where are you from
No more wait for incessant makes ups or breakups
Washed smooth by the rolling tides still breaking in
Worn out and perhaps weary from such long ago origins
Now all the drama of a past has gone by and been forgotten
Forever now I behold its value be held with sacred love
Glowing with each sunrise in such a warm surprise
Could it have taken me any longer to yet surmise
All that you have given back to me for that I will keep safe
All that you have given to me and now I will give back
I will always be, yes my love, I will always be here for you
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Posted: Mar 2019
About this poem:
Love is an all powerful pebble found on the beach......
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