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I'd Only Just Surrendered

You know.
How you drop by,
throwing smiles.
A tickle of yearn.
With passion to burn.

Sometimes.
When you're gone,
out of my mind,
I'd surrender to forgetting and,
the memories stop fretting.

Every time.
Most not expected,
when we're disconnected,
you see what you're missing
with dreams that are blissing.

Repeatedly.
And I'd only just surrendered
to things I'd remembered.
Those times you arise,
then wave your goodbyes.

Only to return,
eternally.
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Posted: May 2022
About this poem:
This is about the reality that people never really leave you. They always return, either in mind or the master illusion.
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Yankee4you

My Alpine Meadow

In its reach into the heavens
Take a deep breath to describe
The moment in our lives
When we feel sheer ecstasy

The seasons do seem to appear
Down the mountainside slide
All the fallen grasses and leaves
And everything in between

And a river that winds through it
Bringing nourishment and life
Reminding us our mortality
From our birth to our death

Counting our blessings like petals
Falling from flowers that bloom
Take stride in our long journey
From the mountains to the sea

I count one of my own days
And greet each morning sunrise
With great reasons to hope
And much much more to surmise
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Posted: Nov 3
About this poem:
Sometimes we need to feel a connection to a sense of place and time.
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lindsyjones

Russia against Ukraine, 2nd entry in Yankee's challenge

Ukraine was the subject in the year 2014
NATO did a lot of convincing and planning
closer and closer to Russia was the plan
and so the conflict has begun

2016 Trump in the US got elected
he assured peace all over the horizon
as a matter of fact now we know
no war or invasion took place in his reign

2020 the democrats stole the election
the puppets installed stupid Biden and claimed they won
look at him, what a senile pathetic old man
and so Russia attacked Ukraine again

here we are so anxious as to what's next
will Ukraine prevail or get blown into pieces?
in the meantime victims are dying
and the world just watch don't do anything

I'm thinking WW3 has just begun
it seems to me, we'll never really learn
humanity is doomed again and again
ah greed and power it always win

wake up I say, let's do something
we'll unite our vigor and strength
let's fight these fascist and socialist
let's pray to God that this will end.




About this poem:
It looks like there's no end to human sufferings because of power and greed

There's a presentation of Dr. Wendell Meirshuemer explaining why this invasion happened
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Posted: Apr 2022
About this poem:
He's a professor at the University of Chicago on political science and International Relations.
Very informative.
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Yankee4you

Life and Liberty

Life doesn’t really know time
When it’s time to be born
When it’s time to die
Life only knows how to live
When it’s time to thrive
When it’s time to survive
Love never knows when
When it will happen again
When it starts or ends
Love only know happiness
When it’s finally found
When you keep it around
Liberty is not a new idea
When we are free to choose
When we have nothing to lose
Liberty is what sets us free
When you can be you
When I can be me
Freedom will always ring
When you find your voice to sing
When you feel the peace it brings
Freedom is worth fighting for
When it’s time for peace
When it’s time for war
Truth doesn’t always get told
When it’s left in the cold
When it’s outside the fold
Truth only knows its source
When a thought makes it’s course
When gravity is held in force

Life, love, liberty, freedom, and truth
Is all the evidence you need for proof
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Posted: Mar 2019
About this poem:
When something old is new again.
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Yankee4you

Mystery is Love

Peeking my head above the clouds
I’ve climbed past the shrouded fog
Shrugging off those pesky doubts
Everywhere I soar like a chariot of fire
Life only lasts for a short time
Caught in the rain I speak your name
If only sunshine brought me happiness
Why would I ever have danced in the rain
Release me these shackles from the past
Don’t hold me back the desire I feel
My heart only wants what it wants
The key to its discovery will unlock
The greatest mystery of life is love
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Posted: Oct 2018
About this poem:
Only when you reached an understanding that what you've known all along is true.
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Redex

BITTER SWEET PILL

I walk peacefully
alongside her, that was me.
Pondering where I should be,
or should i say she?

Our paths split so long ago.
Was it impossible this dream
to join again, it seemed
a journey fraught with fear.

I see her shadow in the water.
does she want the same?
Is she game
to try again?

I did shout in anger at her,
in the splitting, all those years ago.
I challenged her "be gone, go".
the shadow disappeared oh so slow.

Was I wrong
to cut the threads
of myself, my fears, my dreads?
I sigh in peace holding shadows in my head.
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Posted: Jun 2017
About this poem:
I falltered over title

SHADOWS IN MY HEAD or BITTER SWEET PILL ????
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lindsyjones

Time doesn't always heal

I wanted to believe
time does the healing
and that pain would hurt no more
but...it's been over a thousand days
a million minutes
and still
my heart is as broken as the prism
scattered amongst the pages
of my unwritten litany
no
I'm not looking forward
to seeing you, even in my dreams
but neither would I desire your
uninvited visit in my mind
I just want time to heal the wound
so I can move on..

is that too much to ask?
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Posted: Mar 2017
About this poem:
Just a fleeting thought
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HieuDao

Lost in the Clouds

I want to change my path
But my will is weak
My soul love battered
Now I walk alone
On this path of slumber
A forever high
Digging a hole
Into nothingness
Where Puff the magic dragon
And reality hides
I've lost my way
In a cloud of smoke
It's time I must return
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
We all have our poison
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jaysone1

after effects

Is anybody out there
There there…

What’s wrong with me
This must be

Can’t see beyond Lee
Can anybody help me

Strong I must be
Hope can’t see

Does anyone love me
It can’t be

Look to see
Hidden me

Somebody see
I’m lost ultimately

To be
Lonely
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Posted: Aug 2020
About this poem:
residual effects, picking up pieces
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ladyjewel

My Dream.

To not have touched and felt His skin,
To not have breathed Him in,
To not have kissed His lips.

And still to know Him,

I know His passion, His energy, His strength and His weaknesses,
I know His joys and hurts,
I know how fearlessly He protects,
I know how Gentle He can be and how demanding when wanted.

He is complicated and unique,
And yet He is open and giving,
He is Strong and Masculine,
He is sexy and Dominant,
He is beautiful and gentle.

He is My Dream come to life.
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Posted: Aug 2023
About this poem:
Amazing maybe, I am holding onto with both hands.
Sent to turn my life upside down and whisper
"Maybe Magic is real" will see.
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