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I saw you sitting in the front of the post office.
You've said that you're waiting for someone.
Someone who will bring you a bag
of 2 million of stars in the sky.

I thought you must be dreaming.
You must be one of that dreamer.
The one who never touch the earth.
And dance in to a circle of life.

I thought you must be someone from another planet
called 'QRCCOZ-1-12'.
You must be one kind of alien
that will destroy humanity.

But i was wrong.
You're really looking for
someone who bring you
that bag.

And i am just a scum bag.
Maybe.
Knowing nothing in your hand.
Or your heart.

Well..i hope your 2 million stars
will made you happy.

Hasta la vista, Amigo.


Jakarta 2019

when all around come to speck
when all is done, but not finished
then, the longer the eclipse last
the shorter the diamond shined
in this change of brightness
light will escape, the smoke no more
and, there, could be morning
could be night.

Will there be happiness? Is it really a feeling that emerges at the best moments? Or maybe just some flash created by moments filled with complete joy? It will be my question a cliché, everything is based on the time we empty our mind, what never motivates us is what makes us take issue. Have I ever felt absent as if I no longer knew who I am or what I do in the exact place where it has always been a present, with my hands around my temple as if trying to bring a piece of coherence with me, I calmly close my eyes and that reality of which my question towards happiness was a beginning, torture my innocence and a naive and fatuous procedure simply, I stop knowing, I just do not understand, stop believing

Amed

if this is the last thing
I ever write, it is because of you
how could you throw love away
you were h*rny? you are mindless. soulless. worthless. and now a murderer.

Look deep inside the dark entrance of love
Rarely are its gates so open and inviting
What are we so desperately trying to hide

If the doors are left open too often we fail
To protect the sanctuary of our own heart
And over time we will become downtrodden

So its important to keep the gates closed
Allow only the truly deserving to enter
Experience us in all our light and happiness

Take the time to learn about each other
Such that our time becomes so immortal
And not just measured by light or distance

Seek to conquer our own fears foremost
Then and only then will we ever discover
The sanctuary of our greatest treasure

The sanctuary of our souls is so created
When we defend our innermost being
Identify and discover peace, serenity, and joy

She said, "I love you!"
He said, " My love for you is true, but my race is going extinct!"
She said, "All my love my heart can give is all I have, and all my heart I can only give to you,"
He said, "Could the love in my heart be enough?"
She replied, "I don't know?"

Human beings are inherently Social creatures. we like gather
Group,and share in memories and experience, and we find a lot
Of unique ways.so times ways to do so. As times have changed,
Technology advances have exploded into view, and new forms of
Communication were created and we’ve gotten less social in many ways, isolated were created,though connected, digitally tethered but Adift.still, we gether for aot of same reasons,and as ways, insolated were created, and we get older, they all tend to be centered around food and drink, and entertainment ranging from bewfests to concerts, movies to plays, house parties to clubs.
While all of these are amazing ways to connect, to combine with other like-madied and inspired people, they aren’t the only options And sometimes, a subtle shift in how social needs with that leaves us completely breathless?what if we shared memories that were centered not on food and drink, but on drisovery, on awe? What if we opened our eyes just a bit wider and saw so much more together?

The performance started when the conductor raises his baton with a swish
Providing the orchestra with direction, and the audience awaits with bated breath
Listening to the unique sounds of this masterpiece being reborn, born again
With avid fascination, as the strings create an appealing sound that takes you
On a journey through the masses of musical creation

Its a journey where the notes glide into a hauntingly beautiful respective melody
That casts a spell on your imagination and listening ear to keep up with such
A compellingly consistent pulsing beat, much like the rhythmic throb of your heart
Navigating the waters of consciousness in this magical union of musical voices
Known to man and its in this moment, you are reunited with the power of harmony
Resonating with the dissonance of passionate inspiration that breaths a new
Life into your listening ear, you are educated in the throes of classical music
Knowing yourself that you are enjoying this moment of truth and are spellbound
By the notes of this symphony

Though deep down in your heart, you know that all journeys come to a reluctant end, even though the possibilities are endless, and which pave the path forwards
Into a new beginning so that the magic can happen in another futuristic moment in time, captured by one man and his orchestra.

Have you ever wondered what would have happened if Adam had stood up for Eve instead of blaming her by saying it was that woman you gave me?
I mean that was a pretty ungrateful thing to say to God.

What would have happened if he took accountability...
The Bible states in Genesis that he was with her
If he could actually see the gift that she was from God to him and in turn protected her from being beguiled by Satan instead of blaming her as he did, especially as he was with her.
Plus blaming God for giving her to him in the first place.

I wonder if he had a little bit of humility, would we be in the same place as we are now?

I hope you enjoy this little playlet and it helps us reflect on our human condition.




THE ULTIMATE LOVE STORY



God: Adam, Where is eve?

Adam: My Lord she is behind the fig tree

God: Adam, ask her to show herself to me

Adam: My Lord she cannot

God: Why will she not show herself to me?

Adam: She is ashamed

God: Why is she ashamed?

Adam: A serpent appeared to her and deceived her my Lord

God: And this serpent what did he do?

Adam: He tricked her my Lord, I should have been there for her.

God: How did he trick her Adam?

Adam: He told her she would not die if she were to eat of the forbidden fruit

God: And what happened Adam?

Adam: She took of the fruit and ate, my Lord, I am so sorry!

God: And you Adam did you partake of the fruit?

Adam: After Eve partook of the forbidden fruit she offered some for me to taste

God: And did you taste the fruit Adam?

Adam: I was tempted Lord having seen Eve had not died, yet I could not partake

God: What stopped you my son?

Adam: Eve was snared and deceived I was not, I would have had to be deliberately
disobedient to eat of this fruit

God: Yes indeed Eve was tricked and deceived, It could have so easily have been you

Adam: Yes my Lord I know, that is why I beg you My Lord spare her life

God: I am so sorry Adam I cannot; the wages for sin is death

Adam: Oh no my Lord please let her live for she is bone of my bone and flesh of my flesh

God: I know Adam but you both knew my law

Adam: I shall be alone lord for there is no mate in all of the earth for me, every living Creature you have set before me has its mate

God: I shall create you another

Adam: I know you can Lord but I don't want another, I want Eve

God: I know you do Adam but Eve must die

Adam: But I love her Lord

God: I know you do and so do I

Adam: So please I beg you don't let her die

God: I am so sorry Adam she has to die

Adam: Lord is there any other way?

God: Someone has to pay the price for sin

Adam: Then let it be I Lord; let me die in place of Eve

God: You do truly love her my son, then you shall take the place of Eve.

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And so it was that Adam took the place of Eve, he dies that she may live & He bore her sin; yet because Adam had never sinned, death could not bind him and he was resurrected & Eve was restored.

As we are well aware this conversation did not happen in Genesis between the 1st Adam and God, Yet throughout the bible we see this interaction between the 2nd Adam and God the Father.

Unlike the 1st Adam, the second Adam being Our Lord Jesus Christ who loved us so much He was willing to bear all our sins to restore us back to His Father.

By one man the human race fell

And by one man the human race is restored

God is calling us to love like this, for there is no grater love than a man lay down his life for another. ©

After the disaster
my heartbreaks,
Simply struck
by a swan gliding
over Mirror Lake.
These are moments
I awake!
Surprising me passed
Time and Space.
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