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my one love the one i been looking for i hope u been sweet to me i been here just thinking about u so much that i made my heart fall in love with u so dont worry about me but i will tell u that i always been ur only one and its called love

I know that you barely noticed,

Strange sadness in my eyes that day,

It was almost like you never saw it,

And it looked like abyss with no end,


My grey eyes reminded you the surface of water,

You felt like looking into deep well,

I am the water and i am solitude down there,

It is where i drown in my own sorrow,


That is what you saw inside this well,

That is actually a little piece of Hell,

I'll show you the invisible dimensions of perception,

It's my soul that shines down there,


It lies buried in this beautiful grave,

That used to be place for hopes and dreams,

Come down and shine together with me,

In this flame so vibrant and pure,


This is how i used to melt our souls together,

And when i look above - i still can see the light,

So pure like my eyes used to be,

In the times when you stil loved me.

The Inevitability of those that search it
The blame leaches that think they are worth it
Wow es me, its just my luck,
Alas im nice, a usual iq f*ck,
The blame game starts with want,
Followed by blame, friends, them, family and shant,
But its never ones fault for then this leech is visible,
And you see what they want…yours and there life to be both miserable

All My Life I've Been The Same Me,
Full Of Life And Strength,
I've Faced Many Obstacles Along The Way,
I Finally Made It Is What I Say,
I've Had Heartaches And Trials That Have Challenged Every Part Of My Being,
But Through It All My Hope And My Faith Is What I Am Seeing,
Changes Have Come All At Once At Times And Sometimes Seem Overwhelming,
My Tears May Fall,my Heart May Break But I Still Have Hope That You Are My Everything,
Just To See You Smile And Feel You Take My Hand,
Helps Me Realize And Understand,
That You Are Everything I Need.

<MY THOUGHTS> like BEE GEES....

Thoughts were all that I had, I think I was mad ,because all those crazy times...My thoughts
that come when it wants, to turn into romance or just an insane world, it is only thoughts that drive me to deep hole or take me to the top, anyway it goes....
I know after all those times ,dont smoke cigarette or another stuff.... my girl asked me for a time,and she needs thinks and hope that I understand.....
Well now I think I must tell
all those words i have kept
I can´t bear anymore....Oh my
Thoughts were all that I had
I think I am mad for all those times passed, such thoughts that come and that goes, Baby please dont let me alone, without you is really down... my words are all I have, I think I am mad because all those crazy times, my words
are all that I have, that takes me to rest ,when I get excess. , my thoughts will never let me lone,
it always in my heart , untill I finally die

Winter is colder than sun
Sun is hotter than winter
Some cats are very meow, others are not
Mice are very tricky
Mars is not so far
So let's be together

I do not understand it either
I only know you loved me
No matter how many people
Since then, have done their best
To reassure me it was not so.
You weren’t there in the cold dawn
Warm arms wrapped around me.
It was not your voice I heard
As I staggered to the window
Eyes swollen from grief and loss
I try, I really try to forget
How it was for us
Lying in your soft arms
with overflowing love
Almost breaking out of my chest
The feelings were so intense.
Grey sky, lashing rains
Wash away all my tears
Give me back the power to trust again
Alleviate all of my fears.

If I could but with a wave
Change what is not, and into what is desired,
The cloth would fall, the darkness exposed
In the face of shining light, the joy;
Of stars, moon, sun and the universe.
What would wisdom do but grow?
That clouds be spared, time more kinder
And desire in love never elusive.

if love visited me tonight,
would i be the same?

if love touched you tonight,
would you remember his name?

if love visited us tonight...
would we dance beneath the sheets,
or return to the safety of our restless shame?

duplicity and reckless steps are sometimes the symptoms
of passion, but never the cause.

passionate glances, soft touches,
long kisses and dark dreams...
relevant modus operandi.

the nectar saturates my tongue...
canvasses my loins ~
and pierces my heart.

what if love touched us tonight?

would we both be the same?

"This Dance"


If there were days enough...
I would learn this Dance,
to dance with you.

The flood light .... the sunrise...
like Icarus - we ascend to the heavens,
like Icarus - only to fall to the earth again...
and again.

This is my dream...
our feet shifting the dust,
ancient and coarse,
cold and splintered planks, worn and true...
do they selfishly hide the passion and words from years past?
Or simply crude constructs of oak...and yew.

Another stage to attend Sir Will!
where genius rings true...
and the plagiarist is found and scorned.

Gnostic flames (our path embellished)
illuminate our face,
certain to displace the darkest of shadows...
while leaving enough to hide our scars,
and portend any claim to grace.

This is the Dance,
when steps and twists and turns,
left us both to chance,
and we knew the Light never to leave...
while the wax and wick....contorts, spits and burns...

Much like this Dance.



GMS75
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