Most Commented Abstract Poems (471)

Yes indeed, freedom it is,
to write a poem that is
But why do you have to be a prick?
Been here for a very long time
Hoarder as you are I've never seen one

You might feel the need to keep writing
Fine and dandy I would say
But if you're not selfish and inconsiderate
The rules we'd expect, you should respect

Oh I think you can feel and understand
This place is enjoyed by everyone
So if you keep doing what you want do
There's truly nothing that can stop you

So this comment I've posted for you
Doesn't weigh any merit or value
But if you have a heart and mind to know
You must refrain from giving us more blow.

God bless you
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Common sense we all have it. Without which our understanding of one another is impaired. Need I say more?
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Need I say more?

The Priceless Gift of Nature


Amidst the darkness we are going through
there is something that is constant in our hearts
that is the priceless beauty of nature
That is always within our sight

Let us give thanks to our Lord.
His Art is for us to Behold.

Amen

I didn't mean for you to leave
And so my apologies
I only wanted you to heed the rules
And don't flood this place

I am aware you're so enthused
And that's a very good sign
But keep them in your journal
Then post it one at a time

I assume you didn't read the rules
And therefore you didn't know
Now that you get the point
You must come back and keep the show

I'm sure most of us were affected
But I'm the one who had the guts
To express it as it is so you would realize
Now I know I'm in the wrong and I apologize

I do reiterate most of us seek refuge
From the shadows of the dark
Poetry Corner is a safe place
And you should come right back

I pray

A new beging to inlighten , It last only 120 years A tragety of the mind it soon becomes
To be constraind with blindness of thought
No way out
Now we see the planets
We see only a little but it is a begining
We are 1500 years behind
We are seeing faster and faster now
Our growth is beyond our ability to catch up Should be 1500 years ahead in thought and science
They search but the answers can not come to many, for there minds are intraped, Many types of the same restraint. Now
our attention is governed by our emotions
Quick thought decised as deep thought is what we crave
Books sit on Library shelves, the development of mind awaints
Our thought molds as we are adicted to short fullfilling thought
My sadness is emence, the mind of man astray

Phonaesthetically speaking its like 123
Like William once told us, its like A B C
So write your mystical thoughts
And clever words that rhyme
But make sure Iambic Pentameter
Doesn't go sadly out of time, again, ooops!

Knowing why
I want to cry

Vision in eye
Persistent more to try

Deny the mind think blind
When time young kind

Struggle through fire
Inner belief growing higher

Pulls closer they admire
Destiny perpetual desire

Future stories told
Inescapable the hold

Amazing I know
Energy said to grow

Feeling a step untold
Trust in self guts behold

Remember inside
Any moment meaning collide

Emotion override
Tenacity set decide

Begin a stride
Dreams undenied

shades into shades she weeps
tears which the darkness keeps
til through longest night we sweep
awakening bones of the earth from sleep

soul's message carved in your smile
secret caves and odour curves...
full score hours,drawing times
and far off seasons...so close...
easy-dozy life,late-night,lady laze...
sunday morning,your pepermint spirit
inspiring me,quiet nicely ...
colours beyond the Mirror of sentiments
silent miscellany,thema lavenda pastel
hazy touch in the hazel and smell...

I know that you barely noticed,

Strange sadness in my eyes that day,

It was almost like you never saw it,

And it looked like abyss with no end,


My grey eyes reminded you the surface of water,

You felt like looking into deep well,

I am the water and i am solitude down there,

It is where i drown in my own sorrow,


That is what you saw inside this well,

That is actually a little piece of Hell,

I'll show you the invisible dimensions of perception,

It's my soul that shines down there,


It lies buried in this beautiful grave,

That used to be place for hopes and dreams,

Come down and shine together with me,

In this flame so vibrant and pure,


This is how i used to melt our souls together,

And when i look above - i still can see the light,

So pure like my eyes used to be,

In the times when you still loved me.

In all that we do...in all that we say...it's totally senseless.
people wanting more than they can offer...making room for just one more pie...senseless!

In all of their desires, seeking, loving...lying, senseless bitterness... looking for their sweetheart, darling, sugar, honey-bee! senseless!

searching for the unknown when the known in already given! senseless motivation for timeless lost souls.
Senseless... unless you know your own self!