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How dead is dead?
Is dead deader then
the deadest thing
that ever died?
Or if you died the
death of a dirty dog
would anybody have
cried?
To die like slop, to
dry up like a fly
Would even this dying
death ever mak'em cry?
Did anybody ever die
to death just because
they could?
Can't we get a lil' bit
deader like we know we
really should?
The death of the death
of the six times dead
Try that on for size to
see how much you blead
Go ahead, die some more
Cause it'll never be
enough
And if you survive that
super dying..then man
you're really tough!
the deadest thing
that ever died?
Or if you died the
death of a dirty dog
would anybody have
cried?
To die like slop, to
dry up like a fly
Would even this dying
death ever mak'em cry?
Did anybody ever die
to death just because
they could?
Can't we get a lil' bit
deader like we know we
really should?
The death of the death
of the six times dead
Try that on for size to
see how much you blead
Go ahead, die some more
Cause it'll never be
enough
And if you survive that
super dying..then man
you're really tough!
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Posted: Jan 2012
About this poem:
The next time someone tells you to 'drop dead', hand them this poem so you can determine how dead they want you.lol. AS a courtesy I've enabled you to drop dead with style..You can thank me later.lol.Only one You in I
There's an I.O.U. in every
transaction and sometimes
a Y in every vow
And there's a million ways
I could scramble these letters
that I won't attempt just now
There's an alphabet of love
they say written accross the
sky
And no matter how many times
I gaze at those clouds I see
only one You in I~
transaction and sometimes
a Y in every vow
And there's a million ways
I could scramble these letters
that I won't attempt just now
There's an alphabet of love
they say written accross the
sky
And no matter how many times
I gaze at those clouds I see
only one You in I~
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
a bit different...Lonely girl at the club..
She takes a sip and
flips her hair
She looks around to
see if anybody
cares
Twenty years of breaking
hearts
Now she's old and wants
to part
She stares at herself in
the bar room mirror
The truth stares back
as she gulps a beer
'To hell with men she
blurts without shame..'
Give me a chance and I'll
do the same..'
She pulls a pistol from
inside her purse
Watch her now as she plans
her worse
She fires off three rounds
and everyone ducks
'I'm nobodys fool and you
men are nuts!
Two more rounds and the
bar tenders' dead
Only one round of death's
sweet lead
But before she shoots a woman
stood close
She said,'I'd like to make
an evening toast..'
But would you mind telling
me what book you've been
reading..'
You seem so engrossed and
you're expression intriqing'
'Oh, yes Mamm, I'm just
waiting for my mommy'
We're waiting for my daddy
and his name is Johnny..'
So my mommy gave me this book
to read
It's about a lonely woman with
and evil seed..'
You can join us for dinner
and bring your hub
Mabey you'll read
Lonely girl at the club~
flips her hair
She looks around to
see if anybody
cares
Twenty years of breaking
hearts
Now she's old and wants
to part
She stares at herself in
the bar room mirror
The truth stares back
as she gulps a beer
'To hell with men she
blurts without shame..'
Give me a chance and I'll
do the same..'
She pulls a pistol from
inside her purse
Watch her now as she plans
her worse
She fires off three rounds
and everyone ducks
'I'm nobodys fool and you
men are nuts!
Two more rounds and the
bar tenders' dead
Only one round of death's
sweet lead
But before she shoots a woman
stood close
She said,'I'd like to make
an evening toast..'
But would you mind telling
me what book you've been
reading..'
You seem so engrossed and
you're expression intriqing'
'Oh, yes Mamm, I'm just
waiting for my mommy'
We're waiting for my daddy
and his name is Johnny..'
So my mommy gave me this book
to read
It's about a lonely woman with
and evil seed..'
You can join us for dinner
and bring your hub
Mabey you'll read
Lonely girl at the club~
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
Off the cuff..lol It's Fridayyyyyyyyyyyyyy!Fear not the Storm
Fear not the storm
my love
Many have come
and gone
But you, sweet child
of faith
Shall awaken to
the dawn
Your heart is filled
with sorrow
And the enemy has
sapped your spirit
But no black cloud
from hell
Should ever make you
fear it
Take it from one who's
been there
And lived to tell
the tale
Trust in the Almighty..
And nothing can make
you fail***
my love
Many have come
and gone
But you, sweet child
of faith
Shall awaken to
the dawn
Your heart is filled
with sorrow
And the enemy has
sapped your spirit
But no black cloud
from hell
Should ever make you
fear it
Take it from one who's
been there
And lived to tell
the tale
Trust in the Almighty..
And nothing can make
you fail***
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Posted: Dec 2012
Post Comment
ENCHANTING VIEW
Chat-Savvy Prose dedicated to "LuvLace"
in my uniquely innovative "Profuse" style
of excessive poetic elements.
Hear . . . Take my hand -written poetry and
Reach for me now
while I guide us to seæ
a beach on an isle~I’ll
take you with me
Please open Mind if we share fantasy?
Amidst a romantic lagoon
A mystical man’n’ the moon~
light
up the knight
for a lady’s fair fancy
Dancing alight
like the moonlit crests
of the waves that caress
for shore
Wanting more
caresses
he s l o w l y undresses…
her…
tresses…
removing the lace ( ;
A charming new face
gives a smile : )
They kisss :^*
ahhh_wile!
XXXtra lonnng
{{{HUnG}}}s
wO00 her
Like the song…
that he sings to her
BrrRINGs to her
kneæds
A please_sing melody
A romantic serenade
MAiDE of Honor
on her
strings of her heart
he sings
on his
guitar not far from the fire
that burns within
their souls
yearn for the words they long to hear
“Isle of View” {I<3U]
they say
(allowed aloud)
isn’t far a_way
It’s just as close as
(you would like it ; )
near
Here… Take my hand.
in my uniquely innovative "Profuse" style
of excessive poetic elements.
Hear . . . Take my hand -written poetry and
Reach for me now
while I guide us to seæ
a beach on an isle~I’ll
take you with me
Please open Mind if we share fantasy?
Amidst a romantic lagoon
A mystical man’n’ the moon~
light
up the knight
for a lady’s fair fancy
Dancing alight
like the moonlit crests
of the waves that caress
for shore
Wanting more
caresses
he s l o w l y undresses…
her…
tresses…
removing the lace ( ;
A charming new face
gives a smile : )
They kisss :^*
ahhh_wile!
XXXtra lonnng
{{{HUnG}}}s
wO00 her
Like the song…
that he sings to her
BrrRINGs to her
kneæds
A please_sing melody
A romantic serenade
MAiDE of Honor
on her
strings of her heart
he sings
on his
guitar not far from the fire
that burns within
their souls
yearn for the words they long to hear
“Isle of View” {I<3U]
they say
(allowed aloud)
isn’t far a_way
It’s just as close as
(you would like it ; )
near
Here… Take my hand.
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
This is written in just one of my many diverse styles. I call this unique poetic artistry "Profusion" because it is excessively bombarded with too many poetic elements, including some I've innovated*, such as:Alliteration, Allusion, Antonyms, *"ArchieBunkerism", Assonance, *"Character Mapping", *"Colour", Dichotomy, *"DicLixCYa", Double-Entendre, Elision, *"FuNTS", Homographs, Homonyms, Homophones, (I know, what a bunch o' Homos! ; ), Hyperbole, Juxtaposition, Metaphors, Metonymy, Onomatopoeia, Oxymorons, Personification, *"PUNK'dU8shun" Puns, Similes, *"Strategic Phrasing", Subliminal, Symbolism, Synonyms, *"Textual InUendOH!", + others...
It is more for my own word-playa amusement (admittedly narcissistic?) than for layperson public consumption. Some of the elements may not be easily detected completely due to HTML limits in this post (if you'd like to view it in its "fool glory" in MS Word, email a request from/to your personal addy). Most get the surface level, but to fully appreciate its complex, deeper multiple meanings, reread & study it slowly and see if you can detect all 80+ of its intentionally composed poetic elements. Enjoy ( :
X Games
Take a ride on the
wild side, and ride
with those who dare
Hang on to your hat
and coat doin' that
360 in the air
Oh, You've see us in
the arena with a
thousand camera's a-
flashin'
Hangin' on to that dirt
bike in all this death-
defying action
Get you a roll of tickets
and watch how fast they sell
As we ramp at 110 accross
the Canyon of Hell
We're a new generation takin'
it to the next level
Daredevils without a fear
attempting the impossible
X Games is our badge as we
soar ever higher
Challenge us with the
untouchable
But bring a ring of fire!
wild side, and ride
with those who dare
Hang on to your hat
and coat doin' that
360 in the air
Oh, You've see us in
the arena with a
thousand camera's a-
flashin'
Hangin' on to that dirt
bike in all this death-
defying action
Get you a roll of tickets
and watch how fast they sell
As we ramp at 110 accross
the Canyon of Hell
We're a new generation takin'
it to the next level
Daredevils without a fear
attempting the impossible
X Games is our badge as we
soar ever higher
Challenge us with the
untouchable
But bring a ring of fire!
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Posted: Nov 2011
Post Commentcomment on it
This was a capitalist approach when I entered into you
Forcefully like a beast with a passion and bow
I know you were enjoying that
I know you got the pleasure
I enter into you like Julius Seizure.
You were screaming like a baby in the cradle
You were crying like a child
You were laughing,you were mild.
This was a capitalist approach,I entered into you
You know capitalism is the rule of thieves
You might be stolen,you might be scattered like the leaves.
what are you thinking? Please scream
I want to enter you like a dream
Forcefully like a beast with a passion and bow
I know you were enjoying that
I know you got the pleasure
I enter into you like Julius Seizure.
You were screaming like a baby in the cradle
You were crying like a child
You were laughing,you were mild.
This was a capitalist approach,I entered into you
You know capitalism is the rule of thieves
You might be stolen,you might be scattered like the leaves.
what are you thinking? Please scream
I want to enter you like a dream
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Posted: Jul 2010
Post CommentHate your God
Its a murky evening here,everything is in ashes
The birds are silent,the water is dumb
The soil is barren,the crops are cropsless.
The sky is dark,the stars are wide a far
The pool is sinking,the thirsty town is drowning
The people are rustic,greedy and illiterate.
The people are rustic,greedy and illiterate
They don't understand poetry,nor the beauty
They don't know the tranquility.
God is dead-muttered Nietzshe
God is unreal-said Marx
God is imagery-noted Charvaka philosophy
But I urge throw off your God
Hate it
And live reasonably.
The birds are silent,the water is dumb
The soil is barren,the crops are cropsless.
The sky is dark,the stars are wide a far
The pool is sinking,the thirsty town is drowning
The people are rustic,greedy and illiterate.
The people are rustic,greedy and illiterate
They don't understand poetry,nor the beauty
They don't know the tranquility.
God is dead-muttered Nietzshe
God is unreal-said Marx
God is imagery-noted Charvaka philosophy
But I urge throw off your God
Hate it
And live reasonably.
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Posted: Jun 2010
Post CommentLovers Touch
Nights entwined with a lovers touch
softly caressing the yearning desire
moans that escape thy passions throe.
Eyes that behold the glistening sweat
slide into the warmth of the love
be that may come to a joining.
Linger on the moment, behold
the night has lightened to dusky dawn
as departing lovers touch one last time.
softly caressing the yearning desire
moans that escape thy passions throe.
Eyes that behold the glistening sweat
slide into the warmth of the love
be that may come to a joining.
Linger on the moment, behold
the night has lightened to dusky dawn
as departing lovers touch one last time.
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Posted: Mar 2010
About this poem:
A little poem of stolen moments.I dare you to hit me again…
So I have a legal reason
To kill you without regret.
The time is of the season
And your due paid and met.
You’ve struck me with words
With insults, now with your fists
So now it’s time for the all but absurd
From your chest, I will rip
Your heart with my bare hands
Do not even try to demand
What I will do; or how I will do it
You just met your match and lit
Upon a force to be reckoned with
Now we will see justice prevail
Not an old wife’s tale or myth
Just your reward for all the hell
You have showered upon another’s soul
Over and over again, above and below.
The reaper has come to call, and it will be done
What you have done returned ten fold in full sum.
To kill you without regret.
The time is of the season
And your due paid and met.
You’ve struck me with words
With insults, now with your fists
So now it’s time for the all but absurd
From your chest, I will rip
Your heart with my bare hands
Do not even try to demand
What I will do; or how I will do it
You just met your match and lit
Upon a force to be reckoned with
Now we will see justice prevail
Not an old wife’s tale or myth
Just your reward for all the hell
You have showered upon another’s soul
Over and over again, above and below.
The reaper has come to call, and it will be done
What you have done returned ten fold in full sum.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
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