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ImagineLove

Garlic is for Lovers

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Eat a raw organic salad with me
Full of crushed pods of raw garlic
Seducing your mouth like an erotic kick
I promise it will be extremely heavenly
As the hotness subtly stings in your mouth
The pungent sticky juice so wet on your tongue
A delectable herb known to help your heart throb
Descending into your body it’s purely an inside job
Stimulating and warming increasing your desires
Its luscious hot center revealing its fire
Extolled by Hippocrates and Pliny the Elder
The benefits abound meant for pure pleasure
This ancient pod increases s*xual stamina
Working through your brains like lambda
Garlic is for knowledgeable lovers
Those plump voluptuous clovers
Eat a raw organic salad with me please
Full of bruised and crushed raw garlic
Makes us feel so chick and rather slick
Sweet pleasures its destined to release
Now kiss me with that pungent wet mouth
Exponentially deeper along the o*al route
Eat a raw organic salad with your love
Ladened with that sensual crushed garlic
The knowledgeable lovers secret trick
Let it penetrate all your senses like a treasure trove
Deeply savor that creamy firm bulbous clove that drove
You to a night of abandonment and the pleasure it wove
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
If you know some of my work, I'm pretty much crazy! Enjoy!
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ImagineLove

Writing Visions

When I close my eyes
I begin to clearly see
Visions real not by chance
As I fall into a deep trance
Of memories I hold
The stories I’ve told
Places I’ve been
All that is seen
People I know
Sets me aglow
I hold them deep inside
Within my heart and soul
Protected like a document
This precious content
Filled with sentimental style
Visions are very secret files
Feelings that intertwine
Subtly in my mind
No delineating line
Pen in hand forced to see
Emotions deep inside me
Experiences safely stored
Completely explored
Sometimes hard to understand
Pulling them up by demand
Deliberating nothing offhand
Like viewing a bulletin board
These colorful visions record
Beautifully in one accord
Feelings that can’t be ignored
Lovingly poured out
Calm restored
Adored
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Posted: Aug 2014
About this poem:
Reading all the awesome poetry here from such talented poets just sparked me to write about writing visions which poets do! All the visions I read, see and feel here are truly a gift!
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Unknown

It is a fragment of prose! correct my English, pls

Quiet day ...
The roses in this space are somewhat wilted and sad {}
Laughter is not fulfilled in this environment ?
Birds sometimes calms down, sometimes it annoys ...
"Silver Rain" continually fall ... Thanks to Heaven!
Sporadically a sparrow sings, somewhat lonely
A motorcyclist passes by raucous street not
The sun is still warm,
My love calls me and says give me attention
Little things girls heart - who likes to hear a gentle song
I love you!
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Posted: Jun 2013
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Yankee4youonline today!

Evolution

Kindness
In the afternoon
Speaks to my lonely soul
Breadcrumbs in the park
Scattered after dark
Hunger beyond control

Blindness
Floating on the wing
Falling from a high perch
Clutching in my claws
Incoherent of my flaws
Craving all I smirch

Goodness
Searching over me
Coming and going
Never lasting long
Like a bird’s song
Hidden in a tree

Wiseness
Gaining over time
Taking and giving
Spoken words of truth
Even the most uncouth
Hearing the bells chime


Soundness
Challenging my mind
Rising and falling
Testing it for faults
Bending somersaults
Becoming so defined

Greatness
When the time comes
Growing and shrinking
Like cloudy shadows
Coming through windows
Sounds of beating drums
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
Abstracts about life and maturity.
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ShaitansMuse

Blessings of the Moonflower

Visions of the Goddess have danced in my head
She writhed and twisted as if I had her abed
The shock of awe was nothing to dread
She has filled my dreams as water on the “bled”
Now her magic fills me in her stead
Leading me onward where cowards have fled
Lading me with verse no others have said
For the gift of her blessings my life I’ve plead
To share this bounty even after I’m dead.
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Posted: Aug 2013
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Yankee4youonline today!

Dreaming Late at Night

I was dreaming late at night
When the shadows were leaving me behind
There was a white light, full of stars
Many angels were singing, they were kind

There was a cloudburst, flapping wings
And an old dog napping by a fire
I watched sailors, drunk on whiskey
And the smell of rubber, burning tire

I saw lonely hearts buried in the sand
And a happy fish jumping from the sea
And mermaids strumming guitars
And children swimming around a tree

In the moonlight, a maiden singing
And a tree full of hungry cats
Watching red foxes roasting chickens
And a man chasing after his hat

I saw rainbows chasing thunder
And a young boy panning for gold
And some rain drops making puddles
Dusty birds all waiting so bold

There was a horsefly playing fiddle
And a cow jumping into the sky
On a wood pile full of crickets
Was a little girl waving good bye

And a bus full of angry people
Telling me life is all a bunch of lies
Like a dead horse reeking badly
From a stomach full of swarming flies

I was dreaming, late one night
When the shadows were leaving me behind
There was a white light, full of stars
Many angels were singing, they were kind
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Posted: Nov 2013
About this poem:
All scenes from some faraway, distant galaxy kind of place in my dreams.
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poettarek

The Facts of Life

Our days quickly passing by
To slow the aging process, we usually try
Regardless, they go so fast
Our final destination, they cast
Reminding us of the memories of our past
Telling us that all we have is today
We must exert every possible effort to enjoy
About the future nothing we can do or say
It is unpredictable in every way
All we have is hope for a better tomorrow
Without regrets or sorrow
Those are the real fact of life
To enjoy our days, we must strive
Seize every opportunity to help someone
Without realizing it, they here today but tomorrow they are gone
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Posted: Nov 2015
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ladygwen123

Berkshire men on Hunt again

The season is upon us now
With upcoming Fall.
White Tail will run
And ducks and geese fall.
Men will hide on limbs
suspended in the air,
Watching turkeys pass
With cold ,blank stares.
Then the ice will freeze.
And out will come the sticks,
The ones with orange flags.
While wives pack their lunches,
In quart size plastic bags
to cook on blazing fires
Lit along the shore
That cooks the fish and meat
While warming hands and feet
All huddle close, as. temperatures drop
And all become as one with only one thought,
"We are Berkshire men
We will never change
Never in a thought, word or age,
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Posted: Sep 2015
About this poem:
A tribute to my friends here in Berkshire who I hunted and ice fished with.. Some are gone now but those left are still on the move

God bless them!
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ladygwen123

There was a lad from Rosmuc!

There was a man from Rosmuc
Atop a giant cliff ready to leap
And fly away ,landing in death
In Galway Bay

He saw her at play that gruesome day
She was flailing her arms
A though slapping the wind
And he was never to see her again,

she was trying to stop him from making the jump
But his guilt for desertion overtook his emotions
And he leapt to his death with no hesitation.

She made her way to the bottom of the cliff
Where he lay so cold and oh so stiff
":Oh daddy don't you know it was okay to go
You wanted your home so lost without it
And now you found it.
Rest easy in your land father,
And I will remember too for when
I go to sleep I will sleep in our land
right next to you
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Posted: Aug 2015
About this poem:
A father deserting and a daughter's forgiveness and understanding
Making her father_s land her land
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honeybear3000

Call It A Day......

I tried to be honest but my words got in the way must of been something I was trying to say not that it would matter any way up all night is the price I pay feeling lonely in my own way shadows chasing the light away no charming words in my vocabulary today not feeling sorry for my self I wish i was right but like a kite in the wind with out a tail between my legs it's time to bail an bound to fail these tides of times well never unveil what ya say say we call it a day
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Posted: Apr 2015
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